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Poor grammar

"He played a large part in ensuring that United was promoted that year, including the scoring first goal in a 2–0 win, against Millwall on 13 April, sat down after colliding with the goalkeeper."

I can't understand this sentence. Are there some words missing?

"He made his debut in a 2–1 away victory against Oxford United and, following instructions "to battle, to win the ball, and give it to Currie" he instantly became a Bramall Lane cult figure on the pitch with his beatle-style haircut, beard and tough tackling. He played a large part in ensuring that United was promoted that year, including the scoring first goal in a 2–0 win, against Millwall on 13 April, sat down after colliding with the goalkeeper".

Further to the above post, as someone has already said, the last sentence does not make sense. But also, shouldn't it be a "Beatle" or "Beatles" style haircut and not lower case "beatle".