Talk:Kir'Shara: Difference between revisions
Notification of altered sources needing review #IABot (v1.3beta8) (Elisfkc) |
→Iraq war and WMD: new section |
||
Line 40: | Line 40: | ||
Cheers.—[[User:InternetArchiveBot|'''<span style="color:darkgrey;font-family:monospace">InternetArchiveBot</span>''']] <span style="color:green;font-family:Rockwell">([[User talk:InternetArchiveBot|Report bug]])</span> 20:16, 24 April 2017 (UTC) |
Cheers.—[[User:InternetArchiveBot|'''<span style="color:darkgrey;font-family:monospace">InternetArchiveBot</span>''']] <span style="color:green;font-family:Rockwell">([[User talk:InternetArchiveBot|Report bug]])</span> 20:16, 24 April 2017 (UTC) |
||
== Iraq war and WMD == |
|||
Part of the plot sounds like the allegations of wmd in Iraq (which had started a year before airing), and I'm surprised that this hasn't been taken up by any sources at that time. --[[User:Tilman|Tilman]] ([[User talk:Tilman|talk]]) 09:03, 26 November 2017 (UTC) |
Revision as of 09:03, 26 November 2017
Kir'Shara has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. | |||||||||||||
Kir'Shara is part of the Star Trek: Enterprise (season 4) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so. | |||||||||||||
| |||||||||||||
Current status: Good article |
Television: Episode coverage GA‑class Low‑importance | |||||||||||||
|
Star Trek GA‑class High‑importance | ||||||||||
|
A fact from Kir'Shara appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 January 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
|
GA Review
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Kir'Shara/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 09:44, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Miyagawa (talk)
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 09:44, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks! Miyagawa (talk) 11:13, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
1: Well-written
- a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Check for WP:LEAD:
|
Done
Check for WP:LAYOUT: Done
|
Done
Check for WP:WTW: Done
Check for WP:MOSFICT: Done
|
None
|
2: Verifiable with no original research
- a. Has an appropriate reference section: Yes
- b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with other FA & FL)
Done
Check for WP:RS: Done Cross-checked with other FA & FL: Tasha Yar, List of Star Trek: The Next Generation cast members & List of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine cast members
|
Done
Check for inline citations WP:MINREF: Done
|
- c. No original research: Done
Done
|
3: Broad in its coverage
a. Major aspects:
|
---|
Done
|
b. Focused:
|
---|
Done
|
4: Neutral
Done
4. Fair representation without bias: Done
|
5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes
6: Images (None)
Images:
|
---|
(NA)
6: Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
6: Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
|
As per the above checklist, the issues identified are:
Fix first sentence of the lead.Fix heading for the section Reception and home media release.Fix short paragraphs.
This article is a very promising GA nominee. I’m glad to see your work here. I’m putting the article on hold. All the best, --Seabuckthorn ♥ 20:07, 20 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, I've made those couple of edits as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 21:40, 20 January 2014 (UTC)
OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 03:04, 21 January 2014 (UTC)
Details please
Congratulations on this article's promotion to GA! As a WP editor who hasn't watched much Star Trek, though, may I make one suggestion? At present it's unclear what the Kir'Shara is; as far as I can tell, all that's said about it here is that "contains the original word of Surak." Are we talking about some kind of book, or recording, or inscription, or box, or what? I'd imagine that a short definition or description would be appropriate for the plot summary (and probably the lead as well), since the episode is named after this artifact.--Lemuellio (talk) 19:09, 29 January 2014 (UTC)
External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just modified 3 external links on Kir'Shara. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
- Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20051124201445/http://trekweb.com/stories.php?aid=4172aafe1ca5b to http://trekweb.com/stories.php?aid=4172aafe1ca5b
- Corrected formatting/usage for http://tv.zap2it.com/tveditorial/tve_main/1%2C1002%2C272_617%7C92175%7C1%7C%2C00.html
- Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20121205084240/http://trekweb.com/stories.php?aid=41b20923a34d1 to http://trekweb.com/stories.php?aid=41b20923a34d1
When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.
This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}}
(last update: 5 June 2024).
- If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
- If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.
Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 20:16, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
Iraq war and WMD
Part of the plot sounds like the allegations of wmd in Iraq (which had started a year before airing), and I'm surprised that this hasn't been taken up by any sources at that time. --Tilman (talk) 09:03, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
- Wikipedia good articles
- Media and drama good articles
- GA-Class Featured topics articles
- Wikipedia featured topics Star Trek: Enterprise (season 4) good content
- Low-importance Featured topics articles
- GA-Class television articles
- Low-importance television articles
- GA-Class Episode coverage articles
- Unknown-importance Episode coverage articles
- Episode coverage task force articles
- WikiProject Television articles
- GA-Class Star Trek articles
- High-importance Star Trek articles
- WikiProject Star Trek articles
- Wikipedia Did you know articles