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:Hello. OMG, the section 3.1 is so wrong here. You are absolutely right, I [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joseph_Jimenez&diff=587812475&oldid=579645959 deleted] it. Regards --[[User:KurtR|KurtR]] ([[User talk:KurtR|talk]]) 22:30, 26 December 2013 (UTC) |
:Hello. OMG, the section 3.1 is so wrong here. You are absolutely right, I [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joseph_Jimenez&diff=587812475&oldid=579645959 deleted] it. Regards --[[User:KurtR|KurtR]] ([[User talk:KurtR|talk]]) 22:30, 26 December 2013 (UTC) |
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== Request edit: Jimenez stepped down from the Board of Directors of startup uBiome == |
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Can you please update the "Novartis" section in the article to add, "Jimenez stepped down from the Board of Directors of startup uBiome in April 2019 to run his own venture fund."<ref>{{cite news |last1=Ramsey |first1=Lydia |title=Dispensed: How health insurance startups fared at the start of 2019, Impossible Foods' big burger change, and a look at uBiome's board |url=https://www.businessinsider.in/dispensed-how-health-insurance-startups-fared-at-the-start-of-2019-impossible-foods-big-burger-change-and-a-look-at-ubiomes-board/articleshow/69377864.cms |date=May 17, 2019}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |title=UBiome’s independent directors are dropping the health care start-up following an FBI raid, and now there’s just 1 left |url=https://scienceandtechblog.com/ubiomes-independent-directors-are-dropping-the-health-care-start-up-following-an-fbi-raid-and-now-theres-just-1-left/ |date=May 15, 2019}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |title=UBiome's Independent Directors are Ditching the Healthcare Startup Following an FBI Raid |url=http://news.boardprospects.com/articles/3684571/ubiome-s-independent-directors-are-ditching-the-he/ |date=May 15, 2019}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |last1=Ramsey |first1=Lydia |title=uBiome's independent directors are ditching the healthcare startup following an FBI raid, and now there's only 1 left |date=May 15, 2019}}</ref> |
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Editing article for NPOV
Hi, I'm Katya – a social media manager at Novartis. I'm aware of WP:COI and thus would like to raise to the community some portions of this article that I think could be improved.
It looks like Section 3.1 was simply copied and pasted in its entirety from the article on Novartis.
I'm not sure if this section should be here, for a number of reasons. The duplication seems to be redundant (especially as there's an extensive record of this information on the main Novartis article). Also, most of these controversies happened before Joseph Jimenez became CEO in 2010. Some of them even happened before he joined Novartis in 2007.
The last part of this section (3.1.6) has actually been cut from the main Novartis article. The court case is ongoing, so there’s no solid story yet. In the interests of NPOV, wouldn’t it be better to wait until the case is settled one way or the other before writing about it?
Finally, the Conflicts and Criticisms section is much, much larger than the rest of the article. Doesn't this constitute Undue Weight?
For the reasons listed above I’d recommend to remove the section 3.1. Please let me know what you think. Katya Reck (talk) 14:57, 6 December 2013 (UTC)
- Hello. OMG, the section 3.1 is so wrong here. You are absolutely right, I deleted it. Regards --KurtR (talk) 22:30, 26 December 2013 (UTC)
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Can you please update the "Novartis" section in the article to add, "Jimenez stepped down from the Board of Directors of startup uBiome in April 2019 to run his own venture fund."[1][2][3][4] Naomi at Ruder Finn (talk) 19:36, 17 June 2019 (UTC)
- ^ Ramsey, Lydia (May 17, 2019). "Dispensed: How health insurance startups fared at the start of 2019, Impossible Foods' big burger change, and a look at uBiome's board".
- ^ "UBiome's independent directors are dropping the health care start-up following an FBI raid, and now there's just 1 left". May 15, 2019.
- ^ "UBiome's Independent Directors are Ditching the Healthcare Startup Following an FBI Raid". May 15, 2019.
- ^ Ramsey, Lydia (May 15, 2019). "uBiome's independent directors are ditching the healthcare startup following an FBI raid, and now there's only 1 left".
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