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07:53:55, 14 November 2017 review of submission by FriendlyB

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  • Draft:Dr. Petry Textile Auxiliaries (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft "Dr. Petry Textile Auxiliaries".

For the sources, I cited independent sources, such as - http://www.genios.de/fachzeitschriften/artikel/MTB/20080617/umweltschutz-und-nachhaltigkeit-in-/060817061.html - https://www.biooekonomie-bw.de/de/fachbeitrag/aktuell/insektenchitin-macht-textilherstellung-nachhaltiger/

In order to have more evidence, I added information from further independent sources and references: - https://www.bloomberg.com/profiles/companies/6311207Z:GR-textilchemie-dr-petry-gmbh - https://www.bluesign.com/industry/chemical-suppliers/references/textilchemie-dr-petry

Thank you in advance for re-reviewing.

Thanks for your help!

Thanks for your assistance with Draft:InnoCare. I have included {{connected contributor}} and noted it on your user page that I work for that company. They're not paying me to create this page, I just think it would cool to have a Wikipedia page. Let me know if there's anything else you can suggest to improve my draft. I appreciate your help!

05:44:48, 23 November 2017 review of submission by Lizzybunker

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I've added the appropriate citations!

Invacio

Hi Theroadislong I've edited the text - please let me know if it's better this way I appreciate your feedback!

00:53:26, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Cmolaro

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I added more 3rd party sources that are verifiable and are independent, professional sources (not personal blogs or sites). I now have 15 citations.

Please let me know what else you think is required to have it accepted?

12:54:53, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Llewol

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08:40:08, 28 November 2017 review of submission by Salt&pepper12345

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Hi there, thank very much for your care and consideration to to help build this page. I can understand why the review was rejected, as i hadn't cited enough sources on the first draft. I was wondering if you'd mind having a read over the latest draft and checking if it is better now thank you. SP

13:22:45, 4 December 2017 review of submission by 79.106.95.85

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21:10:13, 6 December 2017 review of submission by Innocent Cuty

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Dear Theroadislong

Hope you are fine and doing good.

I am requesting for a review again as the major comment for rejection/decline of this article was its Reference section or having less references. Now, the draft has been updated, and more than 20 solid references have been employed, with more historical details, and best possible bibliographic support in the light of the available literature. This single page article is now having over 25 appropriate references, and are strengthened with new data.

Your anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Sincere Regards

The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). Thank you for the Prompt response and providing support to make this draft better.

Dear Theroadislong

Thank you very much for your prompt response.

The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). I think, these were the most up to dated and regularly updating references. Moreover, the last paragraph was deleted, because the book describing the paragraph and the mentioned material is in press (which is written by Dr. Ikram), and once the book got published, the three to four lines paragraph will be inserted again.

I do hope, that the draft will get approved now and will get online, as after coming across other such articles, this one seems to be far better than those.

Your prompt and positive anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Thanking you in anticipation

Sincere Regards

07:43:09, 15 December 2017 review of submission by Kgkg90

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23:49:06, 23 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally

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The submission's referencing was improved as advised, and I added a few more. More information on his teachings and publications were added. The page exists in 3 other Wikipedia: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://sk.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell

In-depth coverage

I added RPG Site. Is that a reliable source?

02:14:50, 26 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally

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Please see references 15,18,19,21,22

07:39:46, 28 December 2017 review of submission by Nat.johnson

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Hi Theroadislong! I have recently uploaded a draft of the article "Admitad" here and you have declined it. Could you kindly explain what can I do to make it right? Is it possible to work with you as my mentor on the draft? Or, maybe, you can help with writing, could you kindly tell me what is the best option? admitad is a global company, it already helps over 630,000 people worldwide. I believe, that it needs to be on Wikipedia.

23:24:44, 4 January 2018 review of submission by Yesterdaysfire

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Hi there!

I was just wondering what the issue was with my article submission? I tried to follow all the guidelines. I hope that I can make any revisions that you may require!

edited

Hi there Thanks for your comment. Made the edits per your notes on the page for David A. Hurwitz. GigiH0118

13:36:39, 8 January 2018 review of submission by Tearstosweat

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More reliable references like newspaper sources(Times of India, Decaan Chronicle) are added

00:42:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander

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Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your valuable time and timely reply.

The bellow listed recognition letters and independent press publications may provide a more in-depth coverage regarding different subjects about Carl-W. Röhrig's life and work mentioned in the WIKI article.

I now additionally added the following references to the Citations and References section in the article:

8. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Newspaper Article". DIE WELT - Independent Daily Newspaper for Germany.

9. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". East Grinstead Courier, United Kingdom.

10. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1989). "Recognition Letter". by the National Geographic Society, Washington D.C.

11. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". THE PRESS, Christchurch, New Zealand.

12. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Recognition Letter". by Heinz Sielemann, Munich, Germany.

14. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". BILD Newspaper, Germany.

17. Röhrig, Carl-W. (2003). "Newspaper Article". Fränkischer Tag, Newspaper, Germany.

I am looking forward hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Vliander

Vliander (talk) 00:42:00, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

12:27:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander

Dear Theroadislong,

The article was written from a neutral point of view and reliable sources where provided.

The questioned links in regards to Röhrig letters could be removed if required.

Sincerely,

Vliander

Who are u

Who are u to correct me or remove the changes I made to kammara sambhavam.

Request on 08:52:05, 6 June 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by WildBullMiller

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Thanks for the info

For the bio, is Nicholas Kaufmann's official website a good enough source? That's where the info comes from, anyway.

Typo in Title

Hi and thanks for approving my post for "Helgesias of Sinope." Unfortunately there's a typo in the title, which should be "Hegesias of Sinope" (no L). My apologies for that (it was my first post). I don't know how to fix a mistake in a title. Are you able to help me? Thank you, Budapest Joe

Re-submitted

Hi Theroadislong.

I have resubmitted the article for a re-review, please let me know if it reads better now? If not, can you give me an example of how to improve it. Thank you, Christian.

Images/Imágenes

Hi! As Images/Imágenes stated I am being paid to edit this page, but I am also working on this program as it is a work in progress. It was on the aire for over 30 years and pulled off in 2011. We are currently working on starting the project again but as this program began in the 70's there is not a large online presence. Is there anyway this page could be published for now, so we can show people that Images/Imágenes is coming back? Thanks, Alice

I have a lot of information from the Executive Producer but since none of it is available online, I cannot reference it. For example: (None of this is available online) Mission Images/Imágenes is a multi- Emmy award-winning television program series that creates, chronicles, and promotes the varied rich diverse history, culture, and life experiences of Hispanic/Latino communities in the state of New Jersey and the nation. Brief Organizational History For 46 years, the Images/Imágenes television series provided a voice and platform for New Jersey's diverse Latino population. The program series is known as the longest-running Latino community program in the history of PBS. Over the decades, the Emmy award winning series featured thought provoking round table discussions, interviews, profiles, documentaries and special topic episodes on the most prevalent issues pertaining to and for the Hispanic/Latino populations – the fastest growing demographic in New Jersey. Program topics ranged from lifestyles, business, education, legal matters, community affairs, pop culture/entertainment, the arts, sports and the health and sciences. Images/Imagenes was launched on January 6, 1972 than titled “Mi Casa Su Casa” on NJPTV hosted by producer, Diego Castellanos. The program made history as the first Latino television series on Public Television in New Jersey to air across the Garden State and surged as the nation’s number one market in New York and the number 4 market in Philadelphia. Since then the series is recognized as a resource for top Latino stories, both at local, as well as the national level. Award Winning Producer William Sánchez is the Producer/Director of Images/Imágenes since 1972, and is currently revitalizing a new series as its producer/director at Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey. He produced the series with the PBS NJ Television Network until the station was dissolved by the state on June 30, 2011. Within the first ten years Images/Imágenes became the leading contributor of programs for the PBS Series Presente hosted by Rita Moreno. Images/Imágenes competed with mainstream networks and was selected over ABC World News Tonight at the National Unity Awards in St. Louis. Then it rose to the top of the Latino Broadcasting Media when it was highlighted at the San Antonio Film Festival in the 1980s as a must see series on Latin Music alongside the films “LA BAMBA” and “STAND AND DELIVER.” National Recognition

For over 40 years, Images/Imágenes under the leadership of producer William Sanchez the television industry has recognized the series with four Emmys and nominated for twenty by National PBS. The series is distinguished having received numerous national acclaims from the White House, Congress, National PBS, the National Corporation for Public Broadcasting (CPB), and three New Jersey Governors. The series represented PBS in Europe, Asia, and Latin America. It was distributed by the Department of Defense and with audiences including American military bases around the world. It was also national under the Latino Consortium’s series “PRESENTE” with host Rita Moreno. Now under the banner of Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey, Images/Imagenes’ legacy continues for public viewing at the United States Library of Congress. Signature Shows There are a number of evergreen programs that were signature shows for the series and are timeless works of history and culture. A. Sembrando El Futuro/Seeding the Future (5-part Parent Education Series) Nationally acclaimed/ New York Emmy Award Winner 1985 B. The Hispanic Youth Showcase 1999 (Talent competition/motivational program hosted by kids (Ages 5 to 17) was recognized as one of the top six children’s programs in the nation by The Arts Council Co-op/ Mid-Atlantic Emmy Award Winner C. Su Salud Primero/Your Health First with host John Quiñones Mid-Atlantic 2008 Emmy Award Winner, drew national acclaim D. The Spanish Guitar (History/Legends: Jose Feliciano) Mid-Atlantic Emmy Winner 2010

Notable Programs & Specials Include: E. Festival Afro-Caribeño (Afro-Caribbean Festival at Newark’s Symphony Hall 1980) 2,500 people attended concert/first of several Images’ shows to obtain national acclaim F. Word-Up Stop the Violence with Edward Hames Olmos (Actor) 2004 Emmy Nominated Town meeting with 400 teens G. Lainzation of New Jersey, 1982 winner of the national Unity Award held in St. Louis, Ma. Won against ABC’s World News Tonight Other Notable Programs & Specials Include: H. Caribbean Music And Dance Emmy Nominated, Represented PBS At An International Level I. Latin Music Special Emmy Nominated J. The Art of Baseball Emmy Nominated K. Latinos in Boxing (History and Legends) L. History of Flamenco (History and Performance)

The Golden Age of Dance: The Palladium Obtained worldwide download success on the internet in 2009 1983 Special: Alcoholism & Mental health Inspired New Jersey Government offices to establish policies and focus groups aimed at understanding and serving Latinos in need of mental health

Productech Corporation draft reviewing

Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft of Productech Corporation article. I was trying to do it objective aтв not an advertising, taking an article about JBL as an inspiration. Looks like I failed (( Would you please advise, what parts of the article require editing? thank you in advance!

References added

Hi, I filled up the draft with some useful references and also added some literature. I hope it could be enought. Thanks

Thanks

I want to know that why my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dolmen_Malls not approving any suggestion

Grateful!Gmli82164 (talk) 11:12, 7 October 2018 (UTC)Gmli82164

Hi! Thank you for the review. I will do what I can to improve that article.

Lorraine McGowen Draft Page

Thank you for the notification. I have removed all external links from the Lorraine McGowen page.

DRAFT:Summation Formula List Decline

Ok, I took your advice and added my material back onto the wiki page on summation. You watch how long it takes D Lazarus to delete it and post his own rambling notes. His notes don't transition well for sentence-to-sentence; paragraph-to-paragraph, nor make any sense; Some of what he posts really is not related to closed form summation. Roger

Dixon Algebra submission.

I have followed your instructions and I think I have successfully updated the references to conform to wiki practices.

Historical notes: • I begsn working on this topic some 40 years ago; • Periodically the algebra has cropped up in the works of others; • Most of this activity has occurred in the last 8 years; • John Baez was the first to call the algebra the Dixon algebra; • This became somewhat solidified when the Quanta Mag and Wired articles appeared; • I recently saw a blog in which the blog's author said there is no wikipedia page for the Dixon algebra yet; • So I decided to start one.

Cheers, Geoffrey Dixon

Great American Doll Company Draft

Hello. Can you please help me edit this wiki page. I have done it the best I can. Can you please tell me what i need to fix up

Thank you for your help....

I really appreciate your help with my draft:Marek Holeček. I will try my best to add those missing citations you pointed out so hopefully it can get better. Thanks again...I really hope the article will be accepted at last ...

autobio

Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your reply - I wasn't aware of restriction on autobiographies, but can well appreciate the reasoning behind it!

all best,

Ketty Nez

Aron Ain Draft

Thank you for reviewing the draft. I'll edit the page to include more sources or remove sections that don't have sources. Thank you!

Ashleylouisewilliams3408

FYI: Ashley has been adding photos to Commons and then inserting those photos into various articles in preparation for her intention to create an article about her grandfather, Virgil Williams. I left a note on her Talk to declare paid or COI if she proceeds with the attempt. (Evidence for intention is creation and then deletion of a draft in her Sandbox.) The quail hunting photo you deleted was there because Virgil owns the land that was name-mentioned in the image caption. David notMD (talk)

Mona Lisa Brookshire

New edits

https://ameyawdebrah.com/mona-lisa-brookshire-blay-miezah-featured-in-upcoming-inspirational-film-becoming-the-keys

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Ml4lyfe2 (talk • contribs) 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Celalettin-Field Quantum Observation Tunnel

Hello there,

I have removed unsourced material and thinned it out as per your direction. Can you please cast an eye?

Draft:900 wine prosecco

Hi Theroadislong, thanks for reviewing my page!

I saw your comment on my draft page 900 wine, I'm inserting the Italian wine brand on the market. I'm not connected to the company, I just try to make the list of brands on wikipedia as complete as possible. I am passionate about wine and I think this brand is important in the Italian sparkling wine scene.

can you possibly and kindly advise me of the changes that can better comply with the policies of wikipedia? Thanks a lot!

Page deletion tagged

I am definitely not using it as a free hosting service and i am sorry i ll need to disagree with your analysis. its just i am taking time to be up to the required standard of trained wiki editors and i think i ll make it. thank you for taking the time to reviewing my page.

Regards

Shahara Ahmad-Llewellyn

Why can't you just add some things and save as you modify instead of it making you resubmit and publish. Because I have a long way to go and I can't keep getting rejected.

Re-review My Article

Hello Theroadislong,

I have already added new sources like you adviced for my draft article Draft:Finalist of the Intel ISEF and hope if you could review it again and see if its notable enough for Wikipedia.

Thank you very much Mathew Anderson

Review of submission by Casper da Costa-Luis

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Thanks for your review.

As requested, I've removed external links as requested (except for the "See Also" section) and used more neutral language.

Do let me know if anything else needs improving!

Short information about Ukrainian scientist

Hello. Could you please help to create short info page about Ukrainian scientist? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Yevgeniy_Zadorin

Milly Bennett review

Hey! Thanks for reviewing the article. I'm very new to this, so I'll try to learn more and go back in to cite third-party sources. Thanks for your help

re-edit is submitted

Hi Theroadislong.

I have re-edited my article submitted on the 19th of April. Will be very thankful if you can have a loot at it in the nearest possible date. Thank you!

M28 Trombonico

hey how can I make my article better or get some exceptions by changing a few things cause I don't really understand what the bot thing wants

Wikipedia page

Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for getting back to me so quickly, I take on board what you say and will think again.

Many thanks,

Ian

Australian Biome Project

Thank you for your advice, do I need to add credit or remove the biome reference entirely.````

I have re edited for your comment. could you please take a look and give me some feed back thanks````

Update

Hi, Theroadislong -- thanks for your comment. I have updated the situation with the external links. Sorry for the mistake! Please let me know if anything else needs changing. Thanks!

Thank you

Thank you for the swift review of my article. Best, K

PyCM

Hi

I think Draft:PyCM is good enough to be accepted. This article provides some reliable references like Journal of open source software and Github (the most popular community of software developers) and etc. In comparison with other accepted open-source software articles like Aika_(software), Renjin , UIMA , BigDL, Cantera_(software) that most of them are self-cited. And also this library with more than 640 stars, 200 dependant codes and 1000 installs per week, is more popular than currently available articles on English Wikipedia like ELKI, Cantera_(software), OpenNN. Any suggestion is gratefully welcomed to improve this draft.

Thank you for your consideration.

Request for Dispute Resolution

Apologies for not notifying you on your talk page. I thought notification on the related talk page was appropriate initially, but see that I need to notify everyone individually.

Jorgen Odegard decline

Hey Theroadislong!

Hope all is well. I happen to notice a decline for Jorgen Odegard’s wiki page which is totally okay because I’m very new to creating wiki pages. My goal is to improve and help songwriters and producers’ lifes with publishing & management company by creating sources of all their music credit and praises as this is one of the most useful tools publishing companies use to determine their qualifications for sessions, pub deals, and so much more! Also as you mentioned, the information on the producer is lacking and scattered all over the internet, which is why this wiki page is super important for a lot of these producers and songwriters.

That being said, would love your thoughts and suggestions that’ll help this process. To give you an idea, I used Sarah Aarons as a reference who’s another songwriter with a similar amount of credibility as jorgen in this industry. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sarah_Aarons Again, would love your input! Thanks so much

Jorgen odegard decline

Hey Theroadislong!

Hope all is well. I happen to notice a decline for Jorgen Odegard’s wiki page which is totally okay because I’m very new to creating wiki pages. My goal is to improve and help songwriters and producers’ lifes with publishing & management company by creating sources of all their music credit and praises as this is one of the most useful tools publishing companies use to determine their qualifications for sessions, pub deals, and so much more! Also as you mentioned, the information on the producer is lacking and scattered all over the internet, which is why this wiki page is super important for a lot of these producers and songwriters.

That being said, would love your thoughts and suggestions that’ll help this process. To give you an idea, I used Sarah Aarons as a reference who’s another songwriter with a similar amount of credibility as jorgen in this industry. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sarah_Aarons Again, would love your input! Thanks so much

Aliia Roza article still needs approval

Did you check my article Aliia Roza that I poster week ago? Please response. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonsoftwizz (talk • contribs) 13:20, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

Moonsoftwizz None of your various drafts have been submitted for review. Theroadislong (talk) 13:26, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

Argyros Theater in Idaho

Hello,

I have reviewed your decline decision. It states, in part: "This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject."

I do not understand this reasoning. Five separate articles have been attached, all of which are not just "passing mentions." Each article is entirely about the Argyros Theater In fact, the title of the venue, The Argyros, appears in the subject line of each article.

Second, each of these five sources is "published, reliable, [and] secondary."

Can you please let me know why this article has been declined?

Thank you, Sebasmith88 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sebasmith88 (talk • contribs) 17:59, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

It opened less than a year ago I can see one press release and the other 4 sources are to me "451: Unavailable due to legal reasons". I think it may be a case of too soon for an article. Feel free to re-submit and I'll let another reviewer take a look. Theroadislong (talk) 18:07, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

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How can I resubmit my article for review. I have article in my sendbox. I can't find any button of resubmit. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonsoftwizz (talk • contribs) 02:51, 4 July 2019 (UTC)

HOLY FAMILY MINOR BASILICA,KENYA CATHOLIC MEN ASSOCIATION

would appreciate your recommendations on change(s) that ought to be done on my article to reflect wikipedia purpose.regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ngugi Muiruri (talk • contribs) 06:40, 4 July 2019 (UTC)

Resubmit my article for review.

How can I resubmit my draft for review. I can't see any option here. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonsoftwizz (talk • contribs) 10:52, 4 July 2019 (UTC)

Your draft Draft:Aliia roza can be submitted by clicking the submit button, but it will be declined as it does not have enough sources to establish notability.Theroadislong (talk) 16:43, 4 July 2019 (UTC)

My draft is ready to publish.

Draft:Aliia roza Hi, I have added some source as well. I have more content and source related this article. Please check and publish so I can move on. Looking forward to your reply. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonsoftwizz (talk • contribs) 21:11, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

Your draft has two photographs as sources. Wikipedia requires multiple in-depth coverage from independent reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 21:22, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

Be Kind

Hello Theroadislong, I really appreciate the tips you've given me regarding editing the article entitled "University of Benin (Nigeria)" and for captivating my attention to the shortcomings created by other contributors.

Conversely, your criticism is NOT constructive, rather you're practically against the development of the aforementioned University.

It is a truism that I have cited a good number of sources where applicable in the article, and most of them are primary sources.

Having diligently reviewed the alleged promotional content, I looked out for FACTS from reliable sources, and then edited the content from a neutral view. Yet, you ignored my efforts and removed the edited content (with facts and reliable sources) without patiently verifying the contents. Please, stop jeopardizing my suitable efforts.

Consequently, there's no more promotional content, and reliable sources which most of them are primary have been cited where applicable.

Thank you for your understanding, and I will appreciate any further suggestions. Zizikuli (talk) 21:32, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

Therein is the problem in that most of your sources are primary, Wikipedia only reports on what the independent sources say about a subject, adding a vast list of courses is promotional. I am trying to build an encyclopedia whilst you are concerned with promoting your university. Theroadislong (talk) 07:16, 7 July 2019 (UTC)

Article review

Can I add interviews? Magazines sources? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonsoftwizz (talk • contribs) 21:33, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

Argyros in Idaho II

None of the references are to a press release, all 5 are to news reports, and I have no idea why four of them would be "451: Unavailable due to legal reasons." I have no problem accessing the links I have cited. I will follow you advice and resubmit. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sebasmith88 (talk • contribs) 04:31, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Draft:Novigo

Hi, This is regarding the Novigo Wiki page. I have removed the publication section and added a new citation of Novigo website regarding the locations. Novigo is a consulting company and hence I referenced the wiki page of A.T. Kearney and Boston Consulting Group to create the page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bimal Subhakumar (talk • contribs) 23:57, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

DRAFT ARTICLE ON IoAAS - FOLLOW UP

Dear Theroadislong

Sorry to bother you again – about a month ago you very kindly looked at a draft of an article about the Institute of Advanced Architectural Studies, a former department of the University of York UK. Your main comment was I think that you felt it needed more references. Apart from that you didn't make any comment on the text, so I'm hoping that seemed OK. Current version, text largely unchanged but improved links and references:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Institute_of_Advanced_Architectural_Studies

I hope you find that the references are much more comprehensive. I take the point that Wikipedia wants independent sources and I have found quite a number. However, I think when writing about a University Department, it’s very difficult not to refer to a University’s own sources! (as I have seen on other articles). Also, as a top UK Russell Group University, I hope we can take the Uni of York’s word for it that it’s not making things up! This link in particular is very valuable:

https://borthcat.york.ac.uk/index.php/university-of-york-institute-of-advanced-architectural-studies

Also, the thing that the IoAAS was most well known for (and indeed I think notable) was the short course programme, but that strangely is also quite a difficult matter to produce published references to. Over 25 years, the Institute ran around 25 courses a year, say 625 course with around 30 attendees on each, giving training to nearly 20,000 architects. But not surprisingly, nobody writes articles or books about that - they go home and get on with it! The University of York Archives have copies of all the programmes, course notes, list of attendees etc, so it’s all a matter of record, but not online.

So, I'm hoping that you will accept that the IoAAS was a bona fide ‘notable’ institute. Indeed the surprise perhaps is that there has been no Wikipedia article recording it’s history before now.

Sorry message ended up longer than I meant ArchaicW (talk) 11:03, 9 July 2019 (UTC)

Resubmit : Kwai Chai Hong

Dear Theroadislong,

ive resubmitted my article for your review. i do apologize for the multiple revision. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kschay (talk • contribs) 12:00, 9 July 2019 (UTC)

A Star

		The Teamwork Barnstar
		Great work on the article. We cannot save them all, but we can do our best to research the topic and show notability. Lightburst (talk) 03:44, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

Sadly this one didn't end well. Theroadislong (talk) 16:06, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Advice?

Hi there,

Thank you for reviewing my submission, The Fine Art Group.

I would really appreciate it if you could give me some further advice on how to get my page published - I thought I had enough third-party sources (Bloomberg, Antiques Trade Gazette, The Art Newspaper, Christie's), but apparently it still does not have enough notability. Getting this page up and running is proving to be a lot more difficult than I first thought, so any help that you could give would be amazing.

Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this, and for reviewing my article!

Sophie 15:31, 16 July 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Intern1FAG (talk • contribs)

Christies in this instance is not a secondary source, the rest seem to be press releases, and the whole draft reads in a promotional manner I would strongly suggest you tell your employer that it is not going to get an article published very easily, conflict of interest editing is very much discouraged. Theroadislong (talk) 16:05, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

"Blatant Advertising"

How is this "blatant advertising," everything in here comes from a third party source and is stating FACTS so that the reader can get to know what Arbor Investments is. This is exactly what an encyclopedia article is supposed to look like. This is also written exactly in the same format as any other private equity firm or investment firm's page on Wikipedia. Visit any other PE firms page and you can see for yourself. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cprassas4 (talk • contribs) 15:32, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Cprassas4 "Arbor has built successful, diversified portfolio companies" "Fund IV will continue the same successful investment strategy" "investments in reasonably valued, high quality middle market food and beverage companies" are all marketing trumpery and the portfolio section is a list of external links which we don't use in article space. Theroadislong (talk) 15:39, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Thank You

I appreciate it, this is my first Wikipedia article so I did not know that tone was frowned upon (I now completely understand why). Thank you for the help! I will be sure to fix that — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cprassas4 (talk • contribs) 15:44, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Resubmitted — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cprassas4 (talk • contribs) 16:16, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

@Theroadislong Can you take a look at my changes when you have time and let me know if the article's tone is better — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cprassas4 (talk • contribs) 18:08, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Comment: Fails WP:BAND - 19:04, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

Added album release information. Thank you for the review. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tech23420 (talk • contribs) 19:33, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

The Sanfine Hospital /decline

Hi! Yes, I did not have time today to put the references and I need to read more on how to set up the references template. I want to do it the correct way. I will be adding them soon. I have them all in a word document, primary and secondary sources. I am aware that I should not rely too heavily on primary sources or else the page will have that warning. I will also clean up the page more. I wish that Wikipedia had a way to just upload the draft and then later submit, so that is why I pressed publish.

Thank you Edit2: Ive made many new edits and I am starting to get the hang of this! Thanks again for getting to my article creation so quickly! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wnkwdy (talk • contribs) 13:13, 18 July 2019 (UTC)

Publishing the Article

If the sources and information is suitable in wikipedia then please publish the article named - Aashish Kaushik asap thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Subhsankalp (talk • contribs) 04:46, 19 July 2019 (UTC)

Your draft Draft:Aashish Kaushik has no reliable sources so will not be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 06:58, 19 July 2019 (UTC)

Anstalin Page Article Suggestion

Hi Mr. Theroadislong I Know The recent famous social worker and very good software Engineer Why u not accepted the article i dont know to Make the article you just search google and write about them . — Preceding unsigned comment added by Merlin Dizzy (talk • contribs) 12:33, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

Ex Articles :

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kriesi

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Josh_Sawyer

So pls created the articles about Anstalin Pls support me i will collect all other details and i will share you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Merlin Dizzy (talk • contribs) 12:42, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

Merlin Dizzy Your draft Draft:Anslin has no reliable in depth sources, Linked in, Facebook and Instagram are not suitable references. Theroadislong (talk) 13:01, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

Regarding Raymond J. Chambers

Dear reviewer, Thank you for taking the time to review our submission. My co-authors and I have taken your comments on our initial submission to heart and we have revised the material accordingly. We have doubled the number of citations and provided more wiki links and resources as to Chambers' importance to our discipline of accounting. We note in particular that Chambers was inducted into the Accounting Hall of Fame, which is the highest honor that an academic accountant can achieve, and that he was also inducted into the Order of Australia, which represents the highest level of achievement for an Australian person.

Please do let us know if you would like us to make further edits and we'll do accordingly.

With very best wishes,

Dr. Martin E. Persson, MSc, PhD Assistant Professor, Department of Accountancy 396 Wohlers Hall, 1206 S. Sixth Street, Champaign, IL 61820 217.300.8547 | mpersson@illinois.edu — Preceding unsigned comment added by M.E.Persson (talk • contribs) 20:11, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

IoAAS Draft Article

Excuse me bothering you again, Theroadislong. I wonder by chance if you might have overlooked my last request for you to have a look at some revisions to this draft? I posted this comment on your Talk Page on 9th July, and there wasn't a reponse, which is quite unusual, as you are super efficient! I guessed you were just away somewhere. You next commented on another post on 16th July, but I think hadn't picked up on mine? Anyway, it's about 10 posts back, if you have a chance to look at it. Many thanks. ArchaicW (talk) 17:25, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

Your draft Draft:Institute of Advanced Architectural Studies has not been submitted for review, but it's looking good to me, you need to remove any in line external links and tidy up some of the bare url sources first. Theroadislong (talk) 20:02, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

IoAAS Draft

Thanks very much. I'll attend to the points you've mentioned, then put the Draft up for Review. I'll let you know when I have done that. Many thanks ArchaicW (talk) 13:52, 22 July 2019 (UTC)

on declining

Hello Theroadislong

I put up the link in the sandbox for review as it was removed as an external link from an article by considering as vandalism without an review. Since given a chance by teahouse I would like to know what would you considered in article as link vandalism by definition. Rbtcpn (talk) 19:30, 22 July 2019 (UTC) rbtcpn

WP:AFC is for drafting articles not for reviewing spam links, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 19:55, 22 July 2019 (UTC)

re-adding

Hello Theroadislong

I have followed all the correct measurement needed to add/update and editing. I am also discussing through talk about potential overstepping any in-appropriation. my so called vandalism is just a mere unverified misunderstanding and have no bases of any classification match to be contradict of any guidelines. If no verification of in-appropriation would pointed out by remover I would certainly consider it to the subject matter.

Thank You. Rbtcpn (talk) 23:23, 22 July 2019 (UTC) rbtcpn.

Article about Anstalin

Hi Theroadislong are you search in google Anstalin Google verify and approve but you told there is no refernce Why you are telling link that Pls search in Draft the name i keep Anslin because unable to move live in same Sandbox name thats only I f u need details and refernce i will share u U create Article name about Anstalin . R u ready to do — Preceding unsigned comment added by Merlin Dizzy (talk • contribs) 05:50, 23 July 2019 (UTC)

Rubim Reibhsa

Hi can u help me about this I cant creat the fan page