User talk:OceanHok

Ghostwire: Tokyo

Hello,

I noticed that you made an article for Ghostwire: Tokyo, even though I created a draft article for the same game months ago at Draft:GhostWire: Tokyo. I was wondering why you decided on creating this particular, as this action could potentially destroy or erase my editing history on the draft. Can we please either merge the histories, or find a solution that benefits both of us? I would hate for this valuable editing history to be ignored or swept under the rug. Cardei012597 (talk) 00:11, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

The move was successful. Cardei012597 (talk) 00:26, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

@Cardei012597: - I didn't know there was a draft for this game. I am fine with you incorporating your content in a new article. I have added a split article template to the article's talk page for now and I am satisfied with that. Next time, just create the article in the article space instead of doing it in the draftspace. They are a waste of time, at least in the context of video game articles. I recommend you to move the remaining video game draft articles you have written (Swansong, Outlast Trials and Weird West) to mainspace as soon as possible or else this same incident will occur again. OceanHok (talk) 04:51, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Ok, I may just move the other video game drafts now. Cardei012597 (talk) 05:20, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

On second thought, I think I might not move Weird West and Heaven Burns Red to the mainspace, as they are light on sources and information. I did, however, move Swansong and Outlast Trials as they have more info fleshed out, and had confirmed release date targets. Thanks again, for your understanding of this situation. Cardei012597 (talk) 06:01, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

Music of GT RFD

Sorry for the belated post, but please take time to review the Music of the Gran Turismo series RFD, as you were the one converting the article into an redirect. FMecha (to talk|to see log) 22:14, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

Hitman (2016 video game)

Hi OceanHok, in "Release" --> "Release format", I've marked a sentence with {{needs clarification}}. In "The positive reaction to Sapienza ... by changing the formula[clarification needed] in later maps, ..."; I found the mention of "the formula" confusing. I hadn't noticed any mention of a formula earlier in the article, so the formula in question should be identified here. Other than that, the article is in good shape and I think it's easily up to GA standard. Good luck and cheers, Baffle☿gab 04:18, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

@Baffle gab1978: - Thanks for the help! OceanHok (talk) 04:31, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Hitman (2016 video game)

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Hitman (2016 video game) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Abryn -- Abryn (talk) 16:41, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

Input request

Hello OH. Please see this thread Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Doctor Who#Is cleanup needed? and feel free to add any input that you wish. Please don't think I am complaining about your edits it is just that there are some policy and guideline implications to them that I am looking to clarify. Thanks for your time. MarnetteD|Talk 18:45, 23 July 2020 (UTC)

State of Decay

Hi, you moved State of Decay to State of Decay (TV episode) - but it's not an episode, it's a serial in four parts. Where was this move discussed?

You then converted the resultant redirect into a disambiguation page without fixing up the inward links, as a result of which there are now something like 120 pages that are now incorrectly linked. Those should have been resolved before the redirect was repurposed. Please clean up after yourself. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 22:45, 23 July 2020 (UTC)

Barnstar from me

	The Working Man's Barnstar
	Just wanted to say thank you and good job for creating various articles on notable games/franchises recently, such as Othercide, Total War Saga: Troy, EA Sports UFC 4, franchise articles (finally Divinity got one, yay!) and splits like Alto's Adventure and Monster Hunter World: Iceborne! Jovanmilic97 (talk) 17:56, 21 August 2020 (UTC)

@Jovanmilic97: - Thank you for the recognition! OceanHok (talk) 18:34, 21 August 2020 (UTC)

Hitman 2 review

Sorry I've taken a lot of time to finish the Hitman 2 review. I'll get to it as soon as I am able. I understand things are hard in your area right now, so do not feel rushed to address the changes. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 13:59, 25 August 2020 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Borderlands 2

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Borderlands 2 you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Reggie's Wrath -- Reggie's Wrath (talk) 22:01, 25 August 2020 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Borderlands 2

The article Borderlands 2 you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Borderlands 2 for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Reggie's Wrath -- Reggie's Wrath (talk) 02:24, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

Judgment

I really haven't thought about it since making Takayuki Yagami GA, but do you think Judgment (video game) is lacking something to become GA? I think the gameplay is covered completely but I don't know if the plot should be reorganized. Just wondering since I noted you removed PS4 label. I guess it prose needs a revision though. Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 00:46, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

@Tintor2: - I think the article looks fine! OceanHok (talk) 12:14, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

Nice. I'm not that confident in my skills on gaming articles so a conomination would be good if you are interested. That's how I made .hack//G.U. GA with another editor last month.Tintor2 (talk) 17:39, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

I would like to help, but I don't think I know enough about this game to do a co-nom. I would probably be more comfortable reviewing it as a GA reviewer instead. As for prose, I suggest sending the articles to WP:GOCE, whose members are amazing at refining an article's prose. I also noticed DualShockers being used but it is not a reliable source. OceanHok (talk) 18:22, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

In case you could review something I happened to have nominated The King of Fighters XIV some week ago. It's the second nomination since the first reviewer was busy in real life so there was not much to do.Tintor2 (talk) 23:34, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

Copy edit of Dying Light

Just a couple notes from my copy edit of Dying Light

• Crane can utilize his "survivor sense" This is the first mention of Crane in the body of the article. This might be confusing if the reader skipped the lead. (As it starts a sentence, the reader might think it refers to a mechanical crane.) Add a little more for context, that this is Kyle Crane, the playable character. (I didn't do this myself as I didn't want to add without a source.)
• Paweł Błaszczak, the audio director of Techland, who has previously composed the music for The Witcher, Dead Island, and Call of Juarez I removed this list of games. Since no comparisons are drawn, it didn't seem to serve a point.

I hope this has been helpful. Please {{ping}} me if you have any questions. – Reidgreg (talk) 15:33, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Hitman (2016 video game)

The article Hitman (2016 video game) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Hitman (2016 video game) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Abryn -- Abryn (talk) 18:22, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Dying Light

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Dying Light you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of IceWelder -- IceWelder (talk) 15:41, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

A cookie for you!

I'm not very good at laying out my argument and you put it into words much better than I did, thank you so much! I really appreciate it and keep up the good work (also take your time and savor the cookie it's really good!) FlalfTalk 15:50, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Cool and now you are part of the club - gratz - a consensus of two supposed editors - that definitely means you are in the right! Will you please come back to that article and assist the vandal in mass deletions of wiki pages cause that is the club you have decided to join--2600:8800:FF0E:1200:C5B0:E12C:7CB0:27E4 (talk) 18:01, 23 October 2020 (UTC)