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Reasons for my raising wikistress: Some general observations on Wikipedia governance being broken and good editors trampled by the system Wikipedia is a kawaii mistress :) I agree to the edit counter opt-in terms. Current RfAdminship RfA candidate S O N S% Ending (UTC) Time left Dups? Report Significa liberdade 83 0 1 100 22:18, 21 September 2024 5 days, 16 hours no report RfB candidate S O N S% Ending (UTC) Time left Dups? Report Last updated by cyberbot ITalk to my owner:Online at 05:21, 16 September 2024 (UTC) Lurking stats Page views for this talk page over the last 90 days Detailed traffic statistics Wikipedia Article Feedback - Jaewook Bae Hello, professor. I added more citations and links in my article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Plusbae00/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 If you think I have to write more, I'll translate more and add new citations. Please check my article. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plusbae00 (talk • contribs) 16:15, 13 June 2021 (UTC) @Plusbae00: Excellent, the article looks good, please publish it to ko:세계 정부. It will be a major improvement to this article. I hope you enjoyed the assignment and learned interesting things! PS. Please remember to WP:SIGN your posts on wiki. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:40, 14 June 2021 (UTC) Dear professor, I have published my article. Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84_%EC%A0%95%EB%B6%80 Sincerely, Plusbae00 (talk) 14:22, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Plusbae00, Well done. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:57, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Deadline 5 (Week 9) : Gaeun Um Hello, professor. I'm so sorry for submitting the assignment so late. I ask for your generous understanding. I finished translating English into Korean. This is my link. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Garongronga/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#%EC%B6%94%EA%B0%80%ED%8C%90%EB%8F%85%EC%84%9C Please check it! Thank you :)--Garongronga (talk) 16:34, 15 June 2021 (UTC) Garongronga, It's ok to finish late, although if you missed some deadlines I recommend you try to compensate for the lost points by doing extra wiki edits (such as translating another short article). Your translation looks good, but before publishing it finish translating the captions and fix the errors (red links to the broken template?) in the table. If you have trouble with fixing the code you can ask for help at Discord (ko:위키백과:디스코드 대화방). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:09, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, Professor, it is impossible to modify the part you gave me feedback. Could you help me? And can I choose this topic as the second topic of translation? Asian Century. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asian_Century Here is the link! Please check it!--Garongronga (talk) 09:10, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Garongronga, Your second topic is very good, please add it to our dashboard our here. As for the first article, I think you can publish it, and then see how other Korean volunteers act in the spirit of collaboration and collective intelligence and fix any issues. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:24, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, I uploaded the title of the second topic to the dashboard! And I posted the first article on Wikipedia. Please check.Here's the link.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%EC%A0%81_%EB%B6%88%ED%8F%89%EB%93%B1 Next, this is the link to Wikipedia after translating the second topic into Korean. Please check this, too.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%84%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84_%EC%84%B8%EA%B8%B0 I think I've finished my assignment. Is there anything else left to do? Please check and reply. Thank you, professor!--Garongronga (talk) 14:01, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Garongronga, Well done, you are almost finished. Please add WP:CATEGORIES to ko:아시아 세기, and I encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE as part of your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:54, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Second Ariticle : Hyorim Kim Hello, professor! I uploaded the subject that the professor confirmed to the dashboard, and I uploaded it to Wikipedia after finishing all the edits. Please check! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%B1%EC%84%A0%ED%83%9D%EC%A0%81_%EB%82%99%ED%83%9C --Hyorime1213 (talk) 06:29, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Hyorime1213, Very good. Please use interlanguage links to connect your translation to the English article and then you are done with the project :) I encourage you to make a WP:USERPAGE for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:31, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, As you said, I added English language and saved it. Please check if I did it correctly! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%B1%EC%84%A0%ED%83%9D%EC%A0%81_%EB%82%99%ED%83%9C --Hyorime1213 (talk) 07:40, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Hyorime1213, Yes, it looks correct, well done! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:43, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, Thank you for helping me with my editing process! I think I've finished my wiki-related assignment now!--Hyorime1213 (talk) 07:44, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Hyorime1213, Yes, although I still encourage you to create a userpage for your future portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:47, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, Thank you for your advice! But I didn't understand exactly the part about the portfolio. Sorry! You have additionally completed the comment task for 'Heeyrin'! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Heeyrin#Hello%2C_Heeyrin%21 --Hyorime1213 (talk) 13:57, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Hyorime1213, What I meant about the portfolio is that I encourage you and all other students to create a WP:USERPAGE for yourself, describing your achievements on Wikipedia. This will be digital portfolio, a digital namecard, you can use to advertise yourself when you apply for various jobs. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:35, 18 June 2021 (UTC) About my article | LiuXinlei Hello professor, I re-edited the reference and checked the grammar issues. I hope to get your feedback, thank you！ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rae041/sociology_in_china#Community_research --Rae041🐬User talk:Rae041 11:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Rae041, Excellent. You are almost done. Remaining problems: Please add the page range used to Jing, Tiankui (are references 4 and 10 identical?) and Yan, Ming (ref 11). Ref 12 needs an English title, journal information, author name, etc. Refs 14 and 15 also need additional information, but the bigger problem here is that when you say "China has two premiers sociology journals", who says they are "premiers"? That's bad English, btw, this sentence needs a vocabulary fix. See what premier means here: premiers. Anyway, right now you need to find a reference - other than your own judgment - on why those two journals are the most important. A similar problem can be seen here: "Therefore, it is necessary to control the population. The family planning policy has been smoothly implemented in the cities." This is WP:EDITORIALIZING. Who says that this is "necessary"? The policy has been "smoothly implemented" according to whom? You should attribute such sentences: "According to professor X" or "According to Ministry of Y". You added hyperlinks - good. I like "The Sixth Five-Year Key Project(第六个五年计划 (中国) [zh])" for example very much, this is a good indicator that we need to write more about China in English. But you need to add more links still. Lei Jieqiong is still not linked. Please make sure that all important names and concepts are linked at least once. The last paragraph in 'institutions' is still unreferenced. Chinese Sociological Society and the Chinese Sociological Association should use "ill" template to link to their articles on Chinese Wikipedia if English ones have not been created yet (or otherwise they should be WP:RED links). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:23, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Please give me feedback on my sandbox/ PARK CHAEJEONG Hello, professor. I've supplemented the parts that the you have given me (such as the number of stores, products from the H&B store, etc.) I'd appreciate it if you could read it again my sandbox and please give me more feedback. Have a great day! :) Pkccccj 15:53, 16 June 2021 (UTC) Pkccccj, Well done. I like it that you took many pictures to illustrate the article, I will give you extra credit for this :) A few fixes are still needed. You are using bold text. This is not allowed outside bolding the article title, so please de-bold the article (see also MOS:BOLD). Please remove any references to yourself or any essey-like style (ex. "I will explain" or "It is no exaggeration to say"). Please read WP:NOTESSAY. For the claim that "the first to be established is Sephora" we need a source that is WP:INDEPENDENT from Sephora. We don't trust companies on any important claims like this because marketing is not reliable. For the history section, it would be good to add something about Asia. Right now the history discusses only the history of beauty concept in Europe. You can integrate your article with the Beauty store (you can leave the current text there as part of the new WP:LEAD). The heading "Extensions to Beauty Stores" is unclear. Shouldn't it be just "H&B(Health and Beauty) Stores"? The sentence "Unlike other countries, Korean drugstores have come closer to the concept of "H&B(Health and Beauty) store" by selling health and beauty products rather than drugs. " suggest that that the term "H&B(Health and Beauty) Stores" is used only in Korea. Is this what you intended? If the term is international, please rewrite the section. In either case, the section is very heavy on Korean examples, and as such seems to be more about H&B (Health and Beauty) store in South Korea than about the beauty store. If it is supposed to be about an international phenomena, you'll need to globalize it (add more about this concept in other countries). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:35, 17 June 2021 (UTC) I finished editing 2 articles. Dear Prof Piotrus, I finished editing 2 articles in Korean. One is MVP and the other one is Growth hacking. And I steadily did Weekly Edits. Please let me know if I have any problems with Weekly Edits or editing articles. Thank you for a semester. It was a pleasant class. SangminChoe (talk) 09:55, 17 June 2021 (UTC) SangminChoe, Well done completing all assignments successfully. I encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:27, 18 June 2021 (UTC) ANI I have reverted [1] because it seems to have removed more than you intended. Please reinstate the edit. Phil Bridger (talk) 12:14, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Phil Bridger, Thanks. No idea what went wrong with my previous edit (script failure?) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:38, 18 June 2021 (UTC) About my article｜LiuXinlei Hello, Professor. I changed the grammar of the existential language and removed some subjective adjectives. I tried to find some Chinese sociology materials, and enriched the cited literature as much as I could. And removed the red link and replaced it with ill link. Please give me some feedback, thank you! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rae041/sociology_in_china#Social_Issues_Research --Rae041🐬User talk:Rae041 12:39, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Rae041, Well done, you can publish the article now. The last thing - please read the Wikipedia:External links guideline. In some cases (ex. Yang Yabin), you added external links instead of wikilinks. If there is no article on Chinse or English Wikipedia, the link can be WP:RED, with a footnote of the webpage you found which can be used as a source in the future. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:46, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Second Article Hello, professor? I completed my second article! Please Check. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Younjihaa/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52#%EB%AF%BC%EC%A1%B1_%EC%A4%91%EC%8B%AC%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 Thank you.--Younjihaa (talk) 13:22, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Younjihaa, It looks good, please publish it. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Second Article : Jeong Hyerin Hello, professor. I chose the second topic! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_sociology Is it okay to translate this article? Please check! --Heeyrin (talk) 14:09, 17 June 2021 (UTC) I found that there was no Korean document about 'economic sociology' on Wikipedia, so I completed the translation! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C_%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99 I also completed the link with other languages. Please check! --Heeyrin (talk) 05:19, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Heeyrin, Very good, please add it to your list of articles in the dashboard. Well done completing all assignments successfully. I encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:38, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, Okay, I add it in the dashboard. Thank you always for your kind reply. --Heeyrin (talk) 11:52, 18 June 2021 (UTC) About the weekly editing count of 10 articles. Hello professor, I completed the assignment of editing Wikipedia 10 times a week on both Korean and foreign Wikipedia pages. However, only the edits made on the foreign version of Wikipedia page were counted on the dashboard. I would like to ask if the contribution from Korea Wikipedia is counted as well. In addition, I am attaching the URL of my contribution to editing Korean Wikipedia. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8A%B9%EC%88%98:%EA%B8%B0%EC%97%AC/Ninnie1 --Ninnie1 (talk) 14:50, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Ninnie1, You are correct that dashboard is not great when it counts to counting the edits, but don't worry - I always check students' global contributions through this tool. Sadly, this tool does not suggest that you made the required 10 edits weekly; I only see them for this week and for one week in April. This suggests that you have 14 weeks to catch up on, and per the syllabus, you will need to do 28 weeks to get the full grade for this assignment (i.e. you still need to do ~280 edits). So I suggest you try your best to complete them in the next few days! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:56, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong I translated this with contents. And what I will do next is reviewing another student for half pints and other different left assignments. Anything else that I have to do? Thank you!!:)--Soyeongs (talk) 18:59, 17 June 2021 (UTC) Soyeongs, I am a bit confused - the article you linked is a translation of which English article? If you are translating Commodification there's plenty of content that does not appear translated yet. Remember that for our project (translating articles to Korena Wikipedia) you are not required to do research (although it is fine and even recognized with extra credit) but the basic is to translate the content from English to Korean. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Second Article2 Hello, professor. This is my second article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Meanssong/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Thank you.--Meanssong (talk) 04:54, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Meanssong, Very good, please publish your article on Korean Wikipedia (and add WP:CATEGORIES to it) to complete the assignment. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:04, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Questions about assignments - Na Young Kang Professor, I finished editing two main Wikipedia articles and writing a blog. In addition, we reviewed other student assignments, which are Deadline 6. Can you check the assignment I've done? Apart from this, I think there's only a task left to edit Wikipedia 10 times a week. Am I right to know about this? Please check if there are any assignments I left out. --Nayokang (talk) 05:54, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Nayokang, Well done with your translation & expansion of ko:여성의 권리 and ko:여성주의 경제학. Please complete the weekly 10 edits (remember: if you missed a week you will need to do 20 edits to compensate). I also encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC) finished editing 2 articles, week6 Professor, I finished editing 2 articles with Jina Kim. One is Pansori and the other one is 나르시시즘. And I steadily did Weekly Edits. Also, I reviewed other student assignments, which are Deadline6. Please let me know if I have any problems with assignment. --Ninnie1 (talk) 06:23, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Ninnie1, Well done with your main projects. Regarding Pansori, please ensure that each paragraph has a reliable reference, a lot of the content in the article is still unreferenced. Similarly, you should make sure that all paragraphs in ko:나르시시즘 are referenced as well. See my reply above regarding the weekly edits. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:12, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Completed editing 3 articles / Minjeong Lee (Lxxmnmn) Hello, professor Piotr. I edited three articles. I also completed the blog assignment. Following the last feedback, I edited the Welcome to Video case on English wiki. And I made an article about 《Unnatural》, a Japanese drama that aired in 2018 on Korean Wiki. Additionally, I edited an article about slime (toy) in Korean wiki. Because my hobby is playing with slime. I couldn't attach a separate source because people who enjoy it as a hobby in their own community decide on the ingredients and types of slime. In addition, I contributed little by little to various articles while looking around Wikipedia. I think I have completed my Wikipedia assignment perfectly, but I look forward to your feedback. Thank you. --Lxxmnmn (talk) 07:26, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Lxxmnmn, That's all very good. Please remind me, however, what are your two main articles? I do not see them listed in our dashboard. Please make sure to add them there ASAP (that was required as part of our earlier deadlines). Please remember that the topics of the main projects have to be approved by me, so your edits to other articles are counted as weekly 10 edits or extra credit. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:16, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Finished the main project / Soyeon Park Hello, professor. I would like to let you know I finished my two main project, ko:인스타그램 and ko:트위치. I translated Instagram into ko:인스타그램 and Twitch into ko:트위치. It means I finished all tasks for each deadline. So I attach the link of my feedback about the student's article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Kimjina00#Feedback_about_Narcissism_on_Korean_Wikipedia If you want to give me feedback, please do not hesitate to do it. Thank you for teaching me during this semester! I hope you to enjoy this summer. --Soyeon Park 10:26, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Qkrthdussla, Well done completing all assignments successfully. I encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Week15: wiki project Hello professor. My name is Chaehyoseung. Can I choose wiki topic this? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evolutionary_ethics thank you. --Chaehyoseung (talk) 12:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Chaehyoseung, Yes, this is a good topic. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Hello Professor, I finish the wiki! Please check it. Thank you :) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A7%84%ED%99%94_%EC%9C%A4%EB%A6%AC --Chaehyoseung (talk) 11:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Chaehyoseung, Good, but please improve the quality of your prose. Another volunteer has complained that "이 문서는 자연스럽지 않게 번역되었으며, 기계 번역에 의해 작성되었을 수도 있습니다.". Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:00, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Added articles to dashboards / Minjeong Lee (Lxxmnmn) Hello, professor. I added two main articles to our dashboard. My two main articles are Welcome to Video case and 《ko:언내추럴》. The 'Welcome to Video case' is a Child sexual abuse crime committed by Koreans, which has caused social damage and shock to Korea and other countries. 《ko:언내추럴》 is a Japanese drama produced by two female producers and a female playwright, and the main actor is also a woman. They wanted to naturally portray forensic scientists and women who are not in the spotlight in society. It is a drama that shows the resistance to misogyny and the hardships experienced as a young female forensic scientist. Professor, I have a question. At the beginning of the semester, I completed all the Wikipedia manuals on the dashboard, but it says I didn't. Please help me! --Lxxmnmn (talk) 12:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC) @Lxxmnmn: Thank you for reminding me and for adding them to the Dashboard - Dahsboard is how we can keep track of everyone's main projects. Since you chose the English article, Welcome to Video case, which is very nicely done and one of our best English work this semseer, is sufficient for the assignment, and the Korean article can be extra credit. Here are few final remarks I have: In the English WtVc article, please use Template:Ill to link articles that exist on Korean Wikipedia but not English like "the Act on the Protection of Sex for Children and Adolescents". It would be good to add an image, but it may be hard to find a freely licenced one relevant to the article. Can you think of anything? Regarding the Korean article, it would be good to expand more on the reception. Did any newspapers or scholars discussed the topic of misogyny and like in the context of this show? (If not, and you intended to be studying such issue, remember this is a good topic for a real research - not on wiki - paper!). Lastly, I'd encourage you to add a WP:USERPAGE as part of a digital portfolio creation for yourself. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:43, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Finished the main project / Lee ye han Hello, professor! I finished my two main project assignments. The topic is digital divide and Overconsumption. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EC%86%8C%EB%B9%84_(%EC%82%AC%EC%B9%98) If you want to give me feed back, please do it. Thank you for teaching for a semester!--Lee ye han (talk) 12:59, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Lee ye han, Regarding ko:과소비 (사치), please add WP:CATEGORIES and interlangusage links to the article. Regarding the other topic, you need to merge the contents of your sandbox at ko:사용자:Lee ye han/연습장 to ko:정보 격차 first, right now your project is still unfinished (not public). Please let me know when you have done so and I'll review the article then. Also, please ensure that all content you add is referenced; in your sandbox I see a number of unreferenced sentences. If you need help with code on Korean Wikipedia, please ask for it here: ko:위키백과:디스코드 대화방. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Threat Hi Piotrus, I’m not sure if you are aware of that threat, but you need to get this deleted from your talk page[2]. I hope you are not worried about it. This is a seriously sick individual who posted that.. I'm so sorry this is happening to you. - GizzyCatBella🍁 13:23, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, all has been taken care of now by Ched. Ignore that threat and forget about it. - GizzyCatBella🍁 14:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC) GizzyCatBella, Thank you (and User:Ched). There's still a SineBot edit summary to be cleansed if you want to be throughout. And no, I am not worried, it's nice to know my work is appreciated in all corners :) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:06, 18 June 2021 (UTC) meh - for the most part I just screwed things up, but most of it seems taken care of now. — Ched (talk) 18:39, 18 June 2021 (UTC) My second Wikipedia article topic - Jaewook Bae Hello professor, I chose <World Peace> for my 2nd topic. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_peace I want to translate the article to Korean. Is it okay to deal with this article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Plusbae00 (talk • contribs) 23:38, June 18, 2021 (UTC) Yes, this is good topic. Please remember to WP:SIGN your posts, otherwise it is more difficult to reply to you. PS. Please add your new topic to our dashboard. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Template:Did you know nominations/Norman K. Risjord Piotrus, you posted that you were willing to review this in late May, but you haven't yet responded to the answer made to your notability concerns. If you're not planning on reviewing this soon, I'm happy to put a "review again" icon on it to find a new reviewer. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:57, 18 June 2021 (UTC) BlueMoonset, Thanks, I replied there and I'll watchlist it in case more replies are made with no pings. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:03, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Please check my sandbox before submission /PARK CHAEJEONG Hello, professor. Thank you so much for your kind feedback :) I modified it by reflecting the feedback. I added some content, so could you read it one more time? And is the exact submission period this week? Pkccccj 16:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC) @Pkccccj: Well done, I think you can now move your text into the mainspace (add it to the beauty store article). It's ok to finish the assignment early next week so don't worry, your work will be treated as on time. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:59, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Hello, Professor! I finished my assignment. -Jina Kim. Hello, professor! I completed the translation and expansion of Pansori(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pansori) and Narcissism(https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%82%98%EB%A5%B4%EC%8B%9C%EC%8B%9C%EC%A6%98) Wikipedia as the main task. Also, I finished feedback after seeing my colleague's article (https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Qkrthdussla). Please check, and let me know if there is anything else I need to supplement. Thank you.--Kimjina00 (talk) 16:42, 18 June 2021 (UTC) Kimjina00, Well done. Pansori still needs some fixes, mainly - you need to add references to paragraphs that are missing them. I see numerous unreferenced paragraphs in the text. Each one needs a reference to a source (or many sources) that confirm the claims made in said paragraph. Likewise, please make sure that the Korean article has references for all text as well. Then you'll be finished - good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:03, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Hello, professor! - SuBin Choi Hello, professor. I completed the second Wikipedia assignment. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/RAID(%EC%A0%95%EC%8B%A0_%EA%B1%B4%EA%B0%95) Please check!--Subin3754 (talk) 19:35, 18 June 2021 (UTC) @Subin3754: Well done. Since your articles are on the shorter side, you may want to translate another topic - this one can be anything of your choice - for extra credit, to ensure you have the best grade possible. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:05, 19 June 2021 (UTC) I finished my assignment. / Minjeong Lee (Lxxmnmn) Hello, Professor! Thank you for your kind advice. ‘The Act on the Protection of Children and youth against sex offenses’ is a Korean law, so there was no substitute information in English Wikipedia. Instead, I found information about this law in Korea Law Translation Center. Additionally, I have revised a few references on the Welcome to video case. I added a newspaper article that talked about the social significance of this drama to the reference of the 《ko:언내추럴》. Thank you for teaching me during spring semester. I hope you to enjoy this summer! --Lxxmnmn (talk) 10:19, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Lxxmnmn, Well done, and I am glad you created a userpage - now you can show it as part of your portfolio when applying for jobs and such! I am glad you enjoyed our class! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:36, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Third Article - SuBin Choi Hello professor. I have completed the third Wikipedia article for extra credit. Translated the English document 'Anchored Instruction' into Korean. English documents: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anchored_Instruction Third article translated: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A7%A5%EB%9D%BD%EC%A0%95%EC%B0%A9%EC%A0%81_%EC%88%98%EC%97%85 The topic was also added to the dashboard. Please check!--Subin3754 (talk) 11:26, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Subin3754, Very good job, I think you will have enough credit points for a good grade now. I'll be grading the wiki work soon! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC) I finished my assignment. /HARI KIM Hello, professor. I completed my second article! Please Check. Click here.--> "Animal_welfare_and_rights_in_South_Korea" Thank you.--HARI KIM (talk) 13:32, 19 June 2021 (UTC) HARI KIM, Well done, please publish your article (and add WP:CATEGORIES) to finish the assignment. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Hello, Professor! We added references - Kim Jina , Wang sihyun Hello, professor. We added references to each article as you gave us feedback. The links are as follows: [ https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%82%98%EB%A5%B4%EC%8B%9C%EC%8B%9C%EC%A6%98 , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pansori] Sihyun and I looked for references to add to the article, but there were not many things to refer to because the topic was a dictionary concept. We found it as much as possible and added it, so please check if it's okay. Thank you. --Kimjina00 (talk) 14:00, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Kimjina00, Very good, it is much better now. But please note that per WP:V and WP:CITE policies of Wikipedia, unreferenced content may be removed, so the unreferenced parts will not fully count towards your grade. That said, I think you will get good grade anyway - but if you can find any more references and add it, it would be very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Kim Yujin ) Wikipedia Assignment Hi, professor. I'm Kim Yujin taking your class 'Collective Intelligence'. I finally did my Wikipedia assignment(translating 2 English articles to Korean). I'm so sorry for being late. Here are my articles' links. (Maker Culture / Stereotype Threat) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Iamyujinkim/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A58#%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Iamyujinkim/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A57 Please let me know if there is any problem. Thank you for your response in advance. Iamyujinkim (talk) 15:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Iamyujinkim, Don't worry about being late with the articles, the most important thing is whether they are finished now :) Your translations look good, please publish them and then add WP:CATEGORIES to finish the assignment. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:16, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Dear, professor I have completed all the assignments in this class including the weekly 10 edits. Please check it. If there is anything unfinished, I would appreciate it if you could let me know. --Nayokang (talk) 15:55, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Nayokang, Very good, I'll be posting the grades shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:25, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Richard B. Hetnarski Wikipedia Page - Updated I have added a number of citations and additional content based on your previous comments. Hopefully at some time you can review the page and indicate whether it would be appropriate for me to remove the "it lacks sufficient corresponding inline citations" maintenance template or indicate what additional information is required. Thanks in advance. Cayman42 (talk) 19:18, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Cayman42, Thank you. To help facilitate your improvement of this article, I've converted the generic template into inline templates, indicating which parts of the article need citations. I also removed a WP:PEACOCKish adjective. Feel free to ask me for further clarifications. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:27, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Piotrus, Thank you very much. The inline templates are very helpful. I will either find references or delete the statements. I understand the removal of the adjective. Cayman42 (talk) 13:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Pokemon articles If only you wanted to also check, there's also crap Pokemon articles such as Chikorita, Giratina, Arceus, Absol and possibly also Entei and Lapras, just letting you know. Have a good day. 49.149.124.152 (talk) 22:33, 19 June 2021 (UTC) Thanks. May I suggest creating an account? Ping User:Natg 19. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:14, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Please check my sandbox/ PARK CHAEJEONG Hello, professor. I moved my article in the sandbox to the main space. Please check it out :) But I couldn't find a way to integrate the article I wrote about the existing article - beauty store. :( I don't think it's just inserting a link, but if you tell me how, I'll do it right away. Thank you! Pkccccj 05:13, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Pkccccj, Your article is still in your sandbox. You need to copy and paste your content into the new article, ensuring that you don't delete any non-duplicated, relevant content. A copy paste either in visual editor or code (edit source) mode should work. Please try it! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:34, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Question Can I translate the topic of "Antipositivism" into Korean as an assignment? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Antipositivism --Leehyunah (talk) 08:24, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Leehyunah, Yes, you can. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC) We upload final wiki project / Shinhee Kim, Minkyo Jeong Hello professor, We added few more references and finally upload Wiki Page. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%88%ED%99%9C%EC%9A%A9 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_Proverb In English page, We tried to find the data as the professor advised, but it seems there was a limit. We found references in each paragraph, but we couldn't fully add references to every sentence. Please check the page. Thank you for teaching us well during the semester! Shinhee Kim 09:57, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 09:59, 20 June 2021 (UTC) @Shinhee Kim and Kyokyoyaaaaa: There are a number of fixes required for Korean Proverb. First, it starts with the Korean hangul term '속담'. That's not correct. It should start with the English term. If 속담 means 'Korean proverb' it does not even need to be mentioned in the article. See Chinese proverb article for an example of how to format the lead. Second, there are still unreferenced paragraphs in the article. Please make sure each paragraph is referenced. Third, Korean proverbs like "황정승(黃政丞)네 치마 하나 세 모녀가 돌려 입듯" need to be translated. Lastly, there is a block of Korean text at the bottom (starting with 『우리나라 속담의 특징과 내용-무형의 증인-』(강신항,정화출판사,1979). Please translate it or remove it. If it is intended as a further reading section, please format it properly - see MOS:FURTHER. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:58, 21 June 2021 (UTC) About wiki projects and others/Yerim Jang Hello professor Piotr, first of all, happy birthday! I hope you had a great day. o(*^▽^*)┛ I completed the wiki project and weekly blogging.(Ko:반과학, Ko:빈곤의 여성화) If there is anything lacking, please let me know. And I will try to make the article with red links gradually during the vacation. Thank you for the interesting lecture. --Tichiel (talk) 11:52, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Tichiel, Thank you for the wishes :) I have reviewed Ko:반과학 and Ko:빈곤의 여성화. They look good, well done! Good job completing the assignment, and I hope you learned useful skills! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:00, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Happy Birthday! I finished some Extra Credit’s editors at Week16-Yang Ruixin Hello, Professor.Happy Birthday! This is Yang Ruixin. I did some Extra Credits in these two English articles： https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xiamen_University#Faculties_and_research_institutes https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wandering_Earth#Pre-Production Please check them, Thank you! And I have a problem： Should I have to send all my Extra Credit editors' records this semester to your email before June 27th? ☺ SIA YANG replay here 12:22, 20 June 2021 (UTC) SIA YANG, Your extra credit edits are good, but please note this one was rejected as the cited source is not considered reliable - feel free to restore it but with a more reliable source. You don't have to email me a lost of your extra credit edits, but it is good if you add them to your list of articles in the dashboard. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:02, 21 June 2021 (UTC) 2nd Wikipedia Article Feedback - Jaewook Bae Dear Professor, I have almost done my 2nd article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84_%ED%8F%89%ED%99%94 Please check and feedback my article. Thank you. Sincerely,--Plusbae00 (talk) 12:53, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Plusbae00, Good work, please add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to the article. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:03, 21 June 2021 (UTC) The Wikipedia Assignment - Yeseo Lim Hello professor. I am Yeseo Lim. I just finished translating the first article from Wikipedia. https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ivisy6952/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&oldid=29552545 I did my best for this assignment. Please confirm! Also, the second article I chose is Medical sociology. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medical_sociology Please tell me if I can translate this article. Thank you! --Ivisy6952 (talk) 13:16, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Ivisy6952, Good, please publish your first article (and remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it). Your second topic is approved as well, please let me know ASAP when you finish it. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC) 2020082424_LeeHyunA_assignment I completed the task of translating both articles into Korean. I attached two links below. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Leehyunah/sandbox#%EB%B0%98%EC%96%91%EC%84%B1%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Leehyunah/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 --Leehyunah (talk) 14:27, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Leehyunah, User:Leehyunah/sandbox needs to be moved to the Korean Wikipedia, then I'll check it again. Your ko:사용자:Leehyunah/연습장 is a start but not finished - you need to add references (footnotes). Then you can publish it, but remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it. Please let me know when both articles are published on Koreran Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:09, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong I translated the article here! Thank you:)--Soyeongs (talk) 21:27, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Soyeongs, Please publish the article, removing the strange __ from the headings, and remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it. Then ping me again and I'll review the live version. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:11, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Please check the main assignment. / Lee ye han Hello, professor. I checked the feedback on the assignment. I modified the feedback you gave me in the article. And the first article, "정보격차" was completed at 7:54 p.m. on June 18 and completed the article by moving documents from the practice site, while the second article, "과소비(사치)" was completed at 9:39 p.m. on June 18. Please check the assignment again. And I've just confirmed that I've been offered to combine my "과소비(사치)" article, but I don't know how to merge it with other articles. I'd appreciate it if you could review the assignment first! Thank you.--Lee ye han (talk) 01:04, 21 June 2021 (UTC) First article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8 Second article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EC%86%8C%EB%B9%84_(%EC%82%AC%EC%B9%98)#%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%EC%84%B1%EC%9E%A5 @Lee ye han: To merge the articles, copy paste content from one to the other, ensuring then no useful content is removed (lost) in the merge, while removing any duplicate information. Please let me know when you complete the merge - good luck! If this is unclear, please also read ko:위키백과:문서 합치기. If you need help with code on Korean Wikipedia, please ask for it here: ko:위키백과:디스코드 대화방.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Finished the main project / jinsin chen Hello, professor! I'm jinsin chen(chen chen) I finished my two main project assignments. The first article is to expand the translation. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/2019%E5%86%A0%E7%8A%B6%E7%97%85%E6%AF%92%E7%97%85%E7%96%AB%E6%83%85%E5%AF%B9%E6%95%99%E8%82%B2%E7%9A%84%E5%BD%B1%E5%93%8D The second is to create an article. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%AD%A6%E5%8F%B2 Please give me relevant feedback. Thank you for teaching for a semester~ Thank youJinsin chen※talk 07:40, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Jinsin chen, Well done completing the assignment, your translations look good and I hope they'll be read by many people! I hope you learned useful skills during this project. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:16, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Please check my article /PARK CHAEJEONG Hello, professor. Finally, I finished writing on a wiki page titled "Beauty Store and H&B Store" from the sandbox. Please check it :) Also, please let me know if there's anything left for me to do. Thank you! Pkccccj 07:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC) What you need to do is to WP:MERGE this content to the article on beauty store. Creatign a new article on the same topic is not ideal. Please copy pastse this to beauty store, while preserving useful content such as the lead and categories. If this is unclear, please also read ko:위키백과:문서 합치기. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:18, 21 June 2021 (UTC) 2020082424 LeeHyunA I modified two documents after receiving feedback from the professor. Please give me feedback. The first article : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%98%EC%96%91%EC%84%B1%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 Second article : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B4%88%EC%95%88:%EC%9D%B4%EC%A4%91%EB%B6%80%EB%8B%B4 --Leehyunah (talk) 09:43, 21 June 2021 (UTC) @Leehyunah: Well done, you are almost finished. Regarding ko:반양성주의, you list several alternative names, but not 반실증주의 ? Why? Regarding ko:초안:이중부담, it looks good except there are some paragraphs that are missing a reference. Please add the missing references so that all paragraphs are referenced and then you can publish the article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC) Optional assignment and additional blogs - Jaewook Bae Dear professor, I sent you a Hanyang LMS private message about my optional assignment and additional blogs. And I added WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to the article (applied your feedbacks). https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84_%ED%8F%89%ED%99%94 Please check! Thank you. Sincerely, --Plusbae00 (talk) 10:32, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Plusbae00, Thank you for the notification. Internal LMS messages are difficult to see, so it is best if you communicate with me here or through email (as I asked on the syllabus). I will reply to your LMS message when I find it. Well done with your ko:세계 평화 article, good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:08, 22 June 2021 (UTC) I understood. I'll send an email. Thank you.--Plusbae00 (talk) 06:16, 22 June 2021 (UTC) About the assignment / Lee ye han Hello, professor. I read about the methods and precautions for merging Wikipedia through the link you left. When I read what I had to check before merging, I found out that the article I wrote "과소비" and the article "사치" that came with the merger proposal were not subject to the merger. There is a difference in concept from the topic the item is dealing with, so it should exist as a separate item. Because the titles of the two articles are similar, but the meanings of the articles are different. Please check the assignment with the link I left today. Thank you!--Lee ye han (talk) 15:11, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Lee ye han, Excellent argument, please leave it on the talk page of the relevant articles on Korean Wikipedia as your objection to the merger (since it is not me who you have to convince but the Korean volunteer(s) there). You should also ensure that your article has interlanguage links pointing to the English article that it was translated from (you may have to do so here: https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q3174091#sitelinks-wikipedia ). Ps. Also, your content from ko:위키백과:정보격차 needs to be at ko:정보격차 Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:20, 22 June 2021 (UTC) First article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8 Second article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EC%86%8C%EB%B9%84_(%EC%82%AC%EC%B9%98)#%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%EC%84%B1%EC%9E%A5 Please check my article2 /PARK CHAEJEONG Hello, professor. First, I made a 'proposing a merger - in the existing Beauty Store article. I also copied and pasted at the 'Beauty Store and H&B Store' except for duplicated and unnecessary content from previous article. Is this the right way to do it..? I'm sorry if I didn't quite understand:( I think it was insufficient even though I referred to the guidelines... Pkccccj 14:17, 21 June 2021 (UTC) @Pkccccj: I am afraid that you need to do the merger yourself. What you have done seems to be to add a merge proposal, asking the community to discuss whether the merge should happen. Your initial assignment was to expand the beauty store article, so there is no need to create a stand-alone and separate article on Beauty Store and H&B Store. You should copy and paste your content to the beauty store article. Please refer to the English and Korean guides on how to do so, but really, it is just a matter of copying and pasting your content to the target article, and ensuring nothing is lost or duplicated when you are done. Please let me know which part is unclear/difficult and I'll try to help further if you need more assistance. Copy paste is a useful skill to master on Wikipedia, just as in other contexts. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 22 June 2021 (UTC) Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong Hello Professor! I did my work here!! Please check it thank you☺️ --Soyeongs (talk) 06:24, 22 June 2021 (UTC) Soyeongs, Well done, I think you can publish your article by moving it from ko:초안:상업화 to ko:상업화. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:31, 22 June 2021 (UTC) [Collective Intelligence, my final articles, Young-Joo Park, 2018064020] Hello Professor! I finished my articles~! (Young-Joo Park, 2018064020) Dear Professor Piotr Hello Professor! I'm Young-Joo Park in Collective Intelligence course I was able to complete the article with your help of the past. So It's my final articles 1. 깃허브(github) 2. 줌(zoom) I'm sorry to my fault for account blocking problem, so I think it's so little lacking. But Now is the time to submit. thank you for your help and lecture~!! I hope to meet someday~!!! Dear Young-Joo Park