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The article said her parents were Dutch from their Netherlands. It’s a very common misconception that they are the same country. Whilst, the BBC article cited by the writer says they were Danish. Given her surname and the BBC saying she disguised it as a trip to visit family I believe she was Danish American. 2600:4040:AB3B:E000:2DBE:555F:AD71:875E (talk) 16:55, 14 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

She was Danish and she made this quite clear in her published diary in 1070. Spenser - The Unknown (talk) 21:11, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: History of Sexuality

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 September 2023 and 22 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gabriellacarriere (article contribs). Peer reviewers: James Goodyear.

— Assignment last updated by James Goodyear (talk) 23:03, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In the last paragraph of the introduction, someone wrote “she gave lectures at colleges at university.” This does not sound right. There might be a word or punctuation missing? Consider rewriting this part.

Consider adding a photo to the “Legacy” section. That part looks word-heavy and not very aesthetically appealing. It might benefit from a picture of perhaps Jorgensen’s induction into Chicago’s Legacy Walk, if a publicly available image of that exists.

Alternatively, or perhaps additionally, the article might benefit from a relevant photo in the “Popular culture” section.

In the first sentence of the “Popular culture” section, consider switching the first word “During” to “In.”

More broadly, consider rereading for grammatical and structural errors. — Preceding unsigned comment added by James Goodyear (talkcontribs) 23:37, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: The History of Sexuality

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2023 and 8 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hails.ak (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Snchristensen (talk) 04:29, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]