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Too many Honeywells?

I think the proliferation of articles on Honeywell is confusing. There's this article on Honeywell (Honeywell International, Inc.) as well as separate articles on Honeywell Aerospace and Honeywell Turbo Technologies. Yet this parent Honeywell International page is missing something that's badly needed: a diagram outlining the structure of the conglomerate, which could explain where some of the "parts" (Aerospace and Turbo Technologies) fit into the whole. In fact, I think Turbo Technologies is itself a part (or a set of products) of the Honeywell Aerospace. As things now stand, there is redundancy among the three articles as well as confusion about their relationships.~Mack2~

Improving the article for neutrality

@Mean as custard:I noticed you recently added a promotional content warning banner to Honeywell. My former colleague User:FacultiesIntact collaborated with other editors to help contribute to the article. Company articles can be challenging to navigate between the fine line of promotion and education. Were there any sections in particular that stood out to you as overly promotional?

I think there’s still a lot of good content there and I wouldn’t want the reader to conflate that with advertising. I have a COI with Honeywell too. In the spirit of collaboration, how about we open the conversation to others for feedback on the offending content. Would you be open to collaborating?--Chefmikesf (talk) 00:19, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Mean as custard: Thanks for add the notes to the Business Unit section. I updated the phrases I interpreted are promotional. The new word or phrases are bold. What are your thoughts?--Chefmikesf (talk) 22:03, 24 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Honeywell Aerospace is a global provider of integrated avionics, engines, systems and services for aircraft manufacturers, airlines, business and general aviation, military, space and airport operations.
  • The Honeywell Commercial Aviation business unit creates products for large commercial and regional aircraft such as auxiliary power units (APUs), aircraft environmental control systems, electric power systems, engine system accessories, flight data and cockpit voice recorders, air traffic management, radar, navigation and communications systems, aircraft lighting, wheels and brakes
  • Products in Honeywell Scanning & Mobility (HSM) include mobile computers and bar code scanners, radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers.
  • Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation controls to customers internationally.
Better. Still reads like the company brochure but not quite so many buzzwords. . . Mean as custard (talk) 09:57, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead section updates

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The lead section of the article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International. The revisions are below. I included the references.  I proposed changes in that section in edit request format. Here is my suggested lead section in my sandbox.Chefmikesf (talk) 21:21, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

#1 Current Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that produces commercial and consumer products, engineering services and aerospace systems.                                                                  

Proposed Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services. [1] Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page).Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page).Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page).

Reason: updating this sentence to clarify what Honeywell does and remove descriptors that no longer represent what the company produces.

#2

Current Content: The company operates four business units, known as Strategic Business Units – Honeywell Aerospace, Home and Building Technologies (HBT), Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies.

Proposed Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT).[1]

Reason: Honeywell International's 2018 10-K reflects new names for the business units. Honeywell no longer publicly uses "Strategic Business Units" in company information.

References: page 55 of the  2018 10-K[1]

#3

Request: update global workforce to “110,000” and “44,000” are employed in the United States.

Current Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 130,000, of whom approximately 58,000 are employed in the United States.

Proposed Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States.[1]

Reason: updating out of date information

References: page 4 of the 2018 10-K[1]

#4

Current Content: Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.

Proposed Content: In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett turbochargers Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page). and consumer products business as Resideo. Cite error: The <ref> tag has too many names (see the help page). Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.[2]


Reason: These statements inform the reader two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo.

References

  1. ^ a b c d e "Honeywell International, Inc. 2018 Annual Report, Form 10-K, Filing Date Feb 8, 2019". Honeywell.com. Retrieved September 9, 2019.
  2. ^ "Honeywell International, Inc. 2018 Annual Report, Filing Date Feb 8, 2019" (PDF). Honeywell.com. Retrieved September 9, 2019.

Does anyone have time to review these updates? I appreciate any feedback or assistance.--Chefmikesf (talk) 17:13, 9 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Honeywell Article Updates

Hi! I'm posting here on behalf of Honeywell, a client of mine. I'd like to request some updates to this article. Some of the edits below are drafted up in my sandbox, here.

The article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International, and suggestions from editors over the past year. My edits should address and improve the article compliant to WP: COI, WP:NPOV, and WP:LEAD. I included the references in the Ref-talk box.


I see on the current article:

  • Factual errors about the Honeywell International
  • Promotional content based on comments from editors on the current talk page and the archives pages.
  • For transparency, I used strike-through on the promotional content in my proposed content sections that should be removed.

Feel free to ping me for any clarifications. Thanks! --Chefmikesf (talk) 18:23, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Lead

Original Lead

Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that produces commercial and consumer products, engineering services and aerospace systems. The company operates four business units, known as Strategic Business Units – Honeywell Aerospace, Home and Building Technologies (HBT), Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies.[1][2]

Honeywell is a Fortune 100 company. In 2018, Honeywell ranked 77th in the Fortune 500.[3] Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 130,000, of whom approximately 58,000 are employed in the United States.[4] The company is headquartered in Charlotte, North Carolina. Its current chief executive officer is Darius Adamczyk.[5][6] The company and its corporate predecessors were part of the Dow Jones Industrial Average Index from December 7, 1925, until February 9, 2008.

The company's current name, Honeywell International Inc., is the product of a merger in which Honeywell Inc. was acquired by the much larger AlliedSignal in 1999. The company headquarters were consolidated with AlliedSignal's headquarters in Morristown, New Jersey; however the combined company chose the name "Honeywell" because of its superior brand recognition. In 2015, the headquarters were moved to Morris Plains.[7] On November 30, 2018, Honeywell announced that its corporate headquarters would be moved to Charlotte, North Carolina.[8] On July 1, 2019, Honeywell moved employees into a temporary headquarters building in Charlotte before their new building was complete.[9]

Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.


Current Lead

Honeywell International Inc. is a publicly traded conglomerate headquartered in Charlotte, North Carolina, United States that produces commercial and consumer products, engineering services and aerospace systems.

In 2018, Honeywell ranked 77th in the Fortune 500.[10] Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States.[11][12]


Proposed Lead

Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services. The company operates four business groups–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT).[13][14]

Honeywell is a Fortune 100 company. In 2018, Honeywell ranked 77th in the Fortune 500.[15] Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States. The company is headquartered in Charlotte, North Carolina. Its current chief executive officer is Darius Adamczyk.[16][17] The company and its corporate predecessors were part of the Dow Jones Industrial Average Index from December 7, 1925, until February 9, 2008.

The company's current name, Honeywell International Inc., is the product of a merger in which Honeywell Inc. was acquired by the much larger AlliedSignal in 1999. The company headquarters were consolidated with AlliedSignal's headquarters in Morristown, New Jersey; however the combined company chose the name "Honeywell" because of its brand recognition.

Reason:The lead paragraph is a summation of the entire Wikipedia article,WP:Lead. Would you mind taking a moment to take a look at this proposed version that includes the historical and current information?

2002-present

Current Content

On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would invest $20 million in the first-of-its-kind software development center and relocate the headquarters of its nearly $10 billion home and building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. The expansion will add more than 800 jobs.[18][19]

David Cote stepped down as CEO on April 1, 2017, and was succeeded by Darius Adamczyk, who had been promoted to president and chief operating officer (COO) the previous year. Cote served as executive chairman through April 2018.[20] On October 10, 2017, Honeywell announced plans to spinoff its Homes, ADI Global Distribution, and Transportation Systems businesses into two separate, publicly traded companies by the end of 2018.[21]

In early 2019 Honeywell launched its home spinoff under the brand Resideo, focusing mostly on programmable and remotely operated thermostats. In October 2019, the company announced the establishment of an advanced technology center called Honeywell Robotics, which will be focused on innovating and developing artificial intelligence, machine learning, computer vision and advanced robotics to be used across supply chains.[22]

Proposed updated content for "2015-present"

On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would invest $20 million in the first-of-its-kind software development center and relocate the headquarters of its nearly $10 billion building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. In 2017, Honeywell opened the software center in Atlanta, Georgia. The expansion added more than 800 jobs. [23][19][24]

David Cote stepped down as CEO on April 1, 2017, and was succeeded by Darius Adamczyk, who had been promoted to president and chief operating officer (COO) the previous year. Cote served as executive chairman through April 2018.[20] On October 10, 2017, Honeywell announced plans to spinoff its Homes, ADI Global Distribution, and Transportation Systems businesses into two separate, publicly traded companies by the end of 2018.[25]

In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett and consumer products business as Resideo.[26][27] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform.[28][29] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina.[30]

In early 2019 Honeywell launched its home spinoff under the brand Resideo, focusing mostly on programmable and remotely operated thermostats. In October 2019, the company announced the established an advanced technology center called Honeywell Robotics, which will be focused on innovating and developing artificial intelligence, machine learning, computer vision and advanced robotics to be used across supply chains.[31]

Reason I removed content to make the article WP:NPOV compliant and added some historical milestones to the section with references.

Business units

Current Content:

The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT).

Proposed Content:

The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units.

Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018

Aerospace

1. Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems”.

Current Content:

Transportation Systems

Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.

Proposed Content:

:Transportation Systems

Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.

2. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in each sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.

  • Honeywell Aerospace is a global provider of integrated avionics, engines, systems and service solutions services for aircraft manufacturers, airlines, business and general aviation, military, space and airport operations.
  • The Honeywell Commercial Aviation business unit creates products for large commercial and regional aircraft such as auxiliary power units (APUs), aircraft environmental control systems, electric power systems, engine system accessories, flight data and cockpit voice recorders, air traffic management solutions air traffic management, radar, navigation and communications systems, aircraft lighting, wheels and brakes

Building Technologies

1. Request: Remove "SBGs" and “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies

Current Content:

Home and Building Technologies

Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio.

Proposed Content:

Building Technologies

Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo.[27]

Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.


2. Request: Rewrite section to reflect Resideo spinoff, remove promotional content, add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo.

Current Content:

Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally.

In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive.

Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world.

Proposed Content:

Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally.It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo.[32]

In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive.


3. Request: in Environmental Energy Solutions section, rewrite section to remove “home”

Current Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial and consumer customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, home thermostats (including smart and wi-fi thermostats), residential combustion, whole house air quality, whole house water treatment and control, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating.

Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating.[33]

Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell.

Safety and Productivity Solutions

1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.

  • Products in Honeywell Scanning & Mobility (HSM) include mobile computers and bar code scanners, radio frequency identification solutions radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers.

2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV

Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016.

Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016.

Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs.

Performance Materials and Technologies

1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.

  • Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation control solutions automation controls to customers internationally.

2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV

Current Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels.

Honeywell UOP

Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.

Proposed Content:  The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels.

Honeywell UOP

Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.

Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs

Products and services

Current Content

Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.

Proposed Content

In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [26] and consumer products business as Resideo. [27] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.[34]


Reason

These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo.

See also

References

  1. ^ Krauskopf, Lewis (14 July 2014). "Honeywell to merge turbocharger business into aerospace unit". Reuters. Retrieved 14 October 2014.
  2. ^ "Honeywell 2013 Annual Report". Honeywell Annual Reports. Honeywell International. 31 March 2014. p. 13. Retrieved 14 October 2014.
  3. ^ "Fortune 500 Companies 2018: Who Made the List". Fortune. Retrieved 2018-11-10.
  4. ^ "Edgar Online SEC Filings FY 2007". Yahoo.brand.edgar-online.com. Retrieved September 13, 2011.
  5. ^ Ed Crooks and James Politi, Financial Times. "Honeywell chief warns on debt gridlock." Jul 12, 2012. Retrieved Jul 19, 2012.
  6. ^ "David M Cote." Forbes. Retrieved Jul 19, 2012.
  7. ^ Tom Bergeron, NJBiz. "Honeywell opens 'truly awesome building' in Morris Plains." November 16, 2015. Retrieved May 17, 2017.
  8. ^ "Honeywell Announces Move Of Global Headquarters To Charlotte". Honeywell. Retrieved 2018-11-30.
  9. ^ "'A sign of a growing city.' Honeywell CEO is bullish on Charlotte, new jobs". Charlotte Observer. August 27, 2019.
  10. ^ "Fortune 500 Companies 2018: Who Made the List". Fortune. Retrieved 2018-11-10.
  11. ^ "Honeywell International, Inc. 2018 Annual Report, Form 10-K, Filing Date Feb 8, 2019". Honeywell.com. Retrieved September 9, 2019.
  12. ^ "Edgar Online SEC Filings FY 2007". Yahoo.brand.edgar-online.com. Retrieved September 13, 2011.
  13. ^ Krauskopf, Lewis (14 July 2014). "Honeywell to merge turbocharger business into aerospace unit". Reuters. Retrieved 14 October 2014.
  14. ^ "Honeywell International Inc". Corporate Philanthropy Report. 34 (9): 9–11. 2019-08-18. doi:10.1002/cprt.30407. ISSN 0885-8365.
  15. ^ "Fortune 500 Companies 2018: Who Made the List". Fortune. Retrieved 2018-11-10.
  16. ^ Ed Crooks and James Politi, Financial Times. "Honeywell chief warns on debt gridlock." Jul 12, 2012. Retrieved Jul 19, 2012.
  17. ^ "David M Cote." Forbes. Retrieved Jul 19, 2012.
  18. ^ Urvaksh Karkaria, WABE. “Why Honeywell Picked Atlanta As Its New Technology Hub.” Sept. 16, 2016. Sept. 16, 2016.
  19. ^ a b Trubey, J. Scott (12 September 2016). "Honeywell announces division HQ, software center in Atlanta". Atlanta Journal-Constitution. Retrieved 29 December 2017.
  20. ^ a b Mann, Ted (June 28, 2016). "Honeywell CEO Cote to Step Down in March". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved May 18, 2017.
  21. ^ PR Newswire. “Honeywell Announces Planned Portfolio Changes.” October 10, 2017.
  22. ^ Leonard, Matt (2019-10-28). "Honeywell Robotics hub will focus on warehouse automation". Supply Chain Dive. Retrieved 2019-10-29.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  23. ^ Urvaksh Karkaria, WABE. “Why Honeywell Picked Atlanta As Its New Technology Hub.” Sept. 16, 2016. Sept. 16, 2016.
  24. ^ J. Scott Trubey, The Atlanta Journal-Constitution. "Honeywell announces division HQ, software center in Atlanta". ajc. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  25. ^ PR Newswire. “Honeywell Announces Planned Portfolio Changes.” October 10, 2017.
  26. ^ a b Events, UKi Media & (2018-06-21). "Honeywell transportation systems business spin-off named Garrett - ETI". Engine Technology International. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  27. ^ a b c Al-Muslim, Aisha. "Resideo Names CFO, Board Ahead of Spinoff From Honeywell". WSJ. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  28. ^ Dignan, Larry. "Honeywell launches industrial IoT platform called Honeywell Forge". ZDNet. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  29. ^ "Honeywell launches 'Forge' software for airline analytics". Intelligent Aerospace. 2019-06-13. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  30. ^ Hannah, Smoot (August 27, 2019). "'A sign of a growing city.' Honeywell CEO is bullish on Charlotte, new jobs". The Charlotte Observer. Retrieved November 14, 2019.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  31. ^ Leonard, Matt (2019-10-28). "Honeywell Robotics hub will focus on warehouse automation". Supply Chain Dive. Retrieved 2019-10-29.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  32. ^ Keitz, Anders. "Honeywell Spin-Off Resideo Is Optimistic on Growth Even Amid Trade Tensions". Stock Market - Business News, Market Data, Stock Analysis - TheStreet. Retrieved 2019-12-09.
  33. ^ Cornell, Joe. "Honeywell Completes Spin-Off Of Resideo Technologies". Forbes. Retrieved 2019-12-10.
  34. ^ a b "Honeywell International, Inc. 2018 Annual Report, Filing Date Feb 8, 2019" (PDF). Honeywell.com. Retrieved September 9, 2019.

Reply 10-DEC-2019

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Regards,  Spintendo  19:07, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Revised Article Edit Request 1-2-2020


I have updated this request based on Spintendo's recommendations. You can see our conversation here. Feel free to ping me if I need to make any clarifications. Thank you. --Chefmikesf (talk) 19:58, 2 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request
Location: History; 2015-present

1.

Please remove the last sentence of the first paragraph:

On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would invest $20 million in the first-of-its-kind software development center and relocate the headquarters of its nearly $10 billion home and building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. The expansion will add more than 800 jobs.[1][2]

Please replace with:

On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would relocate the headquarters of its building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. In 2017, Honeywell opened the software center in Atlanta, Georgia. The expansion added more than 800 jobs. [3][2][4]

2.

Please remove the third paragraph:

In early 2019 Honeywell launched its home spinoff under the brand Resideo, focusing mostly on programmable and remotely operated thermostats. In October 2019, the company announced the establishment of an advanced technology center called Honeywell Robotics, which will be focused on innovating and developing artificial intelligence, machine learning, computer vision and advanced robotics to be used across supply chains.[5]

Please replace with:

In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett and consumer products business as Resideo.[6][7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform.[8][9] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics.[10][11]

Reason To remove content to make the article WP:NPOV compliant and added some historical milestones to the section with references.


Location: Business units

1.

Please replace the word units with groups in the first sentence

2.

Add this as the second sentence: Within business groups are business units.


Proposed Content looks like:

The company operates four business groups–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units.

Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.


Aerospace

3.

Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems” and the sentence in its section. Honeywell Transportation Systems is no longer part of the company.

Transportation Systems

Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.


4.

Request and Reason: Remove service solutions from the Aerospace sentence and replace with services. Per talk page NPOV request here.

  • Honeywell Aerospace is a global provider of integrated avionics, engines, systems and services for aircraft manufacturers, airlines, business and general aviation, military, space and airport operations.

5.

Request and Reason: Remove air traffic management solutions from the Commercial Aviation sentence and replace with air traffic management. Per talk page NPOV request here.

  • The Honeywell Commercial Aviation business unit creates products for large commercial and regional aircraft such as auxiliary power units (APUs), aircraft environmental control systems, electric power systems, engine system accessories, flight data and cockpit voice recorders, air traffic management, radar, navigation and communications systems, aircraft lighting, wheels and brakes



Home and Building Technologies

6.

Request: Remove “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies

New Subtitle: Building Technologies

7.

Request:Remove the first sentences from the section.

Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio.

Request: Replace with these proposed sentences:

Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo.[7]

Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018. Add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo.

Honeywell Building Solutions

8.

Request: Please remove the second and third paragraph; Wikipedia:NOTPROMOTION:

"In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive.

Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world."

Request:Please add this sentence to the end of the first paragraph:

It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo.[12]


Environmental and Energy Solutions

9.

Request: in Environmental Energy Solutions section, rewrite section to remove “home”


Current Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial and consumer customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, home thermostats (including smart and wi-fi thermostats), residential combustion, whole house air quality, whole house water treatment and control, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating.

Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating.[13]

Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell.


Safety and Productivity Solutions

10.

Request and Reason: remove "mobile computers and bar code scanners, radio frequency identification solutions" from Honeywell Process Solutions And replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers." per talk page NPOV request here.

Request and Reason: Replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers."


11.

Request: Remove all mentions of SBG in Safety and Productivity Solutions first sentence for WP:NPOV

Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016.

Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016.

Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs.


Performance Materials and Technologies


12.

Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.

Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation controls to customers internationally.

13.

Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV

Current Content:

The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels.

Honeywell UOP

Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.


Proposed Content:   The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels.

Honeywell UOP

Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.

Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs


Location:Products and services

1.

Request: Please remove current content.

Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.

Request: Please replace with proposed content.

In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [6] and consumer products business as Resideo. [7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders.[14]

Reason These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo.

Location: See also

1.

Please remove Honeywell Turbo Technologies[14] from the See also section


References

  1. ^ Urvaksh Karkaria, WABE. “Why Honeywell Picked Atlanta As Its New Technology Hub.” Sept. 16, 2016. Sept. 16, 2016.
  2. ^ a b Trubey, J. Scott (12 September 2016). "Honeywell announces division HQ, software center in Atlanta". Atlanta Journal-Constitution. Retrieved 29 December 2017.
  3. ^ Urvaksh Karkaria, WABE. “Why Honeywell Picked Atlanta As Its New Technology Hub.” Sept. 16, 2016. Sept. 16, 2016.
  4. ^ J. Scott Trubey, The Atlanta Journal-Constitution. "Honeywell announces division HQ, software center in Atlanta". ajc. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  5. ^ Leonard, Matt (2019-10-28). "Honeywell Robotics hub will focus on warehouse automation". Supply Chain Dive. Retrieved 2019-10-29.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  6. ^ a b Events, UKi Media & (2018-06-21). "Honeywell transportation systems business spin-off named Garrett - ETI". Engine Technology International. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  7. ^ a b c Al-Muslim, Aisha. "Resideo Names CFO, Board Ahead of Spinoff From Honeywell". WSJ. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  8. ^ Dignan, Larry. "Honeywell launches industrial IoT platform called Honeywell Forge". ZDNet. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  9. ^ "Honeywell launches 'Forge' software for airline analytics". Intelligent Aerospace. 2019-06-13. Retrieved 2019-11-14.
  10. ^ Leonard, Matt (2019-10-28). "Honeywell Robotics hub will focus on warehouse automation". Supply Chain Dive. Retrieved 2019-10-29.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  11. ^ Hannah, Smoot. "'A sign of a growing city.' Honeywell CEO is bullish on Charlotte, new jobs". The Charlotte Observer. Retrieved November 14, 2019. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |dateIn= ignored (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)
  12. ^ Keitz, Anders. "Honeywell Spin-Off Resideo Is Optimistic on Growth Even Amid Trade Tensions". Stock Market - Business News, Market Data, Stock Analysis - TheStreet. Retrieved 2019-12-09.
  13. ^ Cornell, Joe. "Honeywell Completes Spin-Off Of Resideo Technologies". Forbes. Retrieved 2019-12-10.
  14. ^ a b "Honeywell International, Inc. 2018 Annual Report, Filing Date Feb 8, 2019" (PDF). Honeywell.com. Retrieved September 9, 2019.

Reply 3-JAN-2020

Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  05:30, 4 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Proposal review 3-JAN-2020

On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would relocate the headquarters of its building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. In 2017, Honeywell opened the software center in Atlanta, Georgia. The expansion added more than 800 jobs
 Approved.[note 1]


In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett and consumer products business as Resideo. Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform. On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics
 Approved.[note 2]


Please replace the word units with groups in the first sentence
no Declined.[note 3]


The company operates four business groups–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units. Transportation Systems Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.
 Unable to implement.[note 4]


The Honeywell Commercial Aviation business unit creates products for large commercial and regional aircraft such as auxiliary power units (APUs), aircraft environmental control systems, electric power systems, engine system accessories, flight data and cockpit voice recorders, air traffic management, radar, navigation and communications systems, aircraft lighting, wheels and brakes
 Unable to implement.[note 5]


Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo
Clarification needed.[note 6]


It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo.
Clarification needed.[note 7]


Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating.
 Approved.[note 8]


Replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers.
 Unable to implement.[note 9]


Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016.
Clarification needed.[note 10]


Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation controls to customers internationally.
no Declined.[note 11]


Request: Remove all mentions of SBG
no Declined.[note 12]


In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion and consumer products business as Resideo. Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders
no Declined.[note 13]


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  1. ^ This was reworded to state only that the HQ was moved.
  2. ^ This was reworded to only mention the spinoff. The announcement of a new platform was not implemented, while the moving of the HQ's was not mentioned, because a previous section stated that the HQ's "for Honeywell" were elsewhere.
  3. ^ If this change in nomenclature is not readily apparent, it should be explained to the reader.
  4. ^ This portion of your request could not be implemented because the location of the text in question was not delineated.
  5. ^ The directions for this text do not state whether it is text to be added or text to be removed. Both should be included.
  6. ^ This should be clarified that the company was bought and sold in just as many words, rather than three sentences.
  7. ^ It is not clear what the name of this company is because it has been given two names ("It became HBT..." and "spun off into Resideo"). Please clarify which name the company uses.
  8. ^ Only the division name was listed. Its products and customer base were omitted.
  9. ^ This is listed under "request and reason" yet it's not clear which of these pertains to the text.
  10. ^ No less than 4 names are used to refer to the entity known as Honeywell SPS: A&CSBG, BT&S, and S&PS. What is needed is an economy of names. If these changes are complete, then the older names should not be referred to.
  11. ^ This was labeled as "request and reason" but did not include the reason.
  12. ^ The acronym SBG does not appear in the article.
  13. ^ Individual licensing agreements are WP:NOTNEWS.
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