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Hello, Amkgp

Thank you for creating List of CONCACAF Gold Cup penalty shoot-outs.

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Please add references to all articles you create. The standards are the same for all articles, including list articles, see WP:SourceList.

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Boleyn (talk) 08:18, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Boleyn, I am not the creator of the page. Please contact the creator regarding this. Thank you ~Amkgp 09:38, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Abu Nuwas drawn by Khalil Gibran in 1916
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I declined your copy paste on Draft:The Murder of Mark Shaw as the only thing that was copied was a quote, which is fine. Signed,The4lines |||| (You Asked?) (What I have Done.) 02:39, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Article Creation Declined

I want to contribute to the community and i have done my research from last 3 day. Then i wrote this https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vivek_Bindra article. It's about Dr. Vivek Bindra. Recently he got Guinness book record for largest online seminar i have given reference for the same. He has lot of awards . i have covered em all also covered his controversies from newspapers. Why i should do the advertisement for someone. But it still got declined. Rest assured i will add more point regarding him if found. Thank You — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vanalaya (talkcontribs) 07:13, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Vanalaya, The page is WP:PROMOTIONAL. The person is yet to gain notability as per WP:BIO. For your information the article was deleted twice from Wikipedia from past, see last AfD Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Vivek Bindra (2nd nomination). Thank you. ~ Amkgp 07:20, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

New to wiki, need your help

Hi, I am new to wiki. Want to a wiki page of cricketer. But by mistake published it instead of draft. Can you change it to draft instead of delete — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jayanta.auro (talkcontribs) 15:43, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Jayanta.auro,  Already done by an Administrator. ~ Amkgp 16:26, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Rajmuzik Studio

नमस्ते सर , विकिपिडिया पर आप मेरी हिस्ट्री देख लीजिये ! मैंने अपने इस पेज के लिए हर रेफरेंस यहा शामिल किये लेकिन मेरे ड्राफ्ट को रिजेक्शन में डाला गया है ! इसीलिए मैंने सीधे ही यह पेज बनाया है ! इसमें हर वो रेफरेंस है जो इस पेज के लिए काफी है ! मैंने गलत तरीके से रिव्यु के बिना इसे बनाया उसके लिए माफ़ करदेना ! मगर ये पेज सही है ऐसे तमाम पेज है जो wikipediaपर बनने चाहिये हरियाणा में तमाम म्यूजिक कम्पनी है लेकिन एक भी म्यूजिक कंपनी का पेज यह नही है मै उन सबको मै बनाना कहता हु लेकिन शुरुआत इससे की पर ये ही नही बनने दिया जा रहा ! ऐसे मे मै क्या करू ? आप बता दीजिये ? धन्यवाद 1234prifixer (talk) 10:03, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1234prifixer, As per Wikipedia policy your article is not notable. See WP:N for details. Your article is also WP:TOOSOON and purely WP:PROMOTIONAL in nature which is unacceptable here. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 10:13, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

OK wait sir my thank you Here 5000 edits and 1year time my account is ready for selfreview 1234prifixer (talk) 10:18, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1234prifixer, I did not understand what you wanted to say ~ Amkgp 10:20, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I know what is wikipedia and policies . Self review self petroled me are and my friends and my team is working on this wikipedia .now we rejected blocked but upcoming days we got this editorial and administration power for creation and approvals . Don't worry we able to create this page again.1234prifixer (talk) 10:25, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Don't worry, he won't. Both the article title and the draft title are now protected. Clearly he has no idea at all. Deb (talk) 10:50, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Why was this AfC draft accepted?

Hi Amkgp, I hope you're well.

I had Faculty of Medicine, University of Malaya on my watchlist as I had previously CSD'd it for copyvios, and later RD1'd the relevant revisions for much the same thing after the user removed the copyvio bits.

I noticed that you commented that the user had removed the copyvio on the talk page (which the {{Cclean}} talk template does already), and then approved the article. The version that you approved contained all sorts of unambiguously promotional content - for instance, "widely regarded as the top medical school in Malaysia as well as in the region" and "vital in training and producing numerous medical doctors for Malaysia", along with the unsourced claim that it was the first medical school in Malaysia. Per WP:NSCHOOL, I'm not convinced it meets WP:GNG or WP:NORG either on its own, as a separate article to the main article about the University of Malaya.

Could you explain your thinking a bit in approving the article?

Thanks very much, Naypta ☺ | ✉ talk page | 14:00, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Naypta, Thanks for the question.
I went through the copyvio check and found no major issues. See report. Your RD1 notice was removed by an administrator after major re-writing. See here. Your concern is about minor promotional sentences/content and WP:POV terms that can be rectified during the course of time.
As per point number 2 WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES I found it to be notable. An institue being affailed to university does not ceases to be a separate article. If that was true then there would not had been a Harvard Medical School page affiliated to Harvard University. Thank you ~ Amkgp 14:21, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Naypta I have added missing references that you were asking. ~ Amkgp 15:00, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Page is not accepted because of references

Dear,

I wrote the article about the performing group Magus Utopia (a entertainment group who performs magic around the world, you might have seen them on television). My article got not accepted as they said it had no references. But in my article down below there were a few links with references from news articles Metro about Britains Got Talent, The biggest Dutch newspaper The Telegraph and a few more.

Can please someone help me?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Magus_Utopia

Kindly Regards, Jim Ketting Olivier — Preceding unsigned comment added by KettingOlivierJim (talkcontribs) 14:13, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

KettingOlivierJim, The reason was that the references were not linked to information provided and usage of bare URLs. See WP:BAREURLS for details. Correct them I think it will be OK to be accepted by next reviewer. You can go through WP:REFB on how to cite properly in Wikipedia. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 14:29, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Named professorships

Hi! For reasons that I don't begin to understand, any academic who holds a named chair or professorship in the United States is regarded as notable in this project ([[WP:NPROF]); I don't understand it because those professorships are two a penny in the USA, anyone who's made a few hundred million bucks gouging on pharmaceutical prices can buy themselves one, and the recipients are not always even full professors. That means that this person is notable by our standards; do you feel like changing your "stop!" to an ordinary decline? Thanks, Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 19:08, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Justlettersandnumbers, The editor is repeatedly committing copyright violation. This version at the time of decline was 88.9% copied from (https://www.engineering.cornell.edu/faculty-directory/fengqi-you) is my only concern. So I tagged WP:G12. Otherwise, the person is definitely notable by all standards WP:NPROF and WP:ANYBIO. ~ Amkgp 19:11, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Justlettersandnumbers See the current copyvio report Violation Suspected 77.9% copied. The website is marked with COPYRIGHT © 2020 CORNELL UNIVERSITY. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Should the copyright violation be allowed? I know there is a small grace for copy texts, but this is too much. I had to 'reject' instead of 'decline' because most of the times drafts with WP:COPYVIO and WP:PROMOTIONAL content editors start gaming with the system. I 'reject' when there is no scope of improvement, not notable or the editor is repeating the same violations. ~ Amkgp 19:13, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Justlettersandnumbers Please do let me know your views. ~ Amkgp 19:16, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Amkgp, the latest problem has been taken care of by Primefac – that was mostly my fault because I hadn't revdeleted the earlier revisions of the page (my evening meal took priority, though I suppose it shouldn't have). No, we can't allow copyvio, you're absolutely right. What I think we can do when looking at a page like this is to keep two separate questions open: "should we have a page on this?"; and "is this that page?". If the answer to the first question is "yes", then in an ideal world I believe we should try to correct the problems in the page rather than delete it outright (or reject it if it's a draft). Anyway, I've suspended the editing privileges of the creator of that page, and will restore them only if I see clear understanding of our copyright policy. On to the next! Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 20:33, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I declined the G12 CSD, Amkgp, because the current version has only a few factual phrases, not subject to copyright, from the source, and the offending versions have been revision deleted. (The copyvio tool currently shows a 13% likelihood, and that is a clear false positive, ,just as it sometimes highlights marked quotations.) If Coder196 were to make an unblock request, indicating understanding of our copyright policy, and an an intention of complying in future, I would expect it to be granted. And there clearly is scope of improvement for this page, whether by the creating editor or someone else -- do remember that drafts are no more owned than any other page, and a draft implicitly invites participation from any editor. I strongly suspect that a valid article can be made starting with this draft. DES (talk)DESiegel Contribs 11:48, 29 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A bowl of strawberries for you!

Thank you so much for spending the time and effort reviewing the new article on Sidney Hill of Bristol and Somerset, England. Thank you also for tidying it up. Have a great day and a bowl of strawberries :) Richard Gricharduk (talk) 06:35, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gricharduk Thank you. You have written the article Sidney Hill really well. Try to improve and see if you can nominate at Wikipedia:Good article nominations. ~ Amkgp 06:39, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This week's article for improvement (week 23, 2020)

An invention is a unique or novel device, method, composition or process, and the invention process is a process within an overall engineering and product development process.
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Draft:Ok Movies

Sir, Amkgp Sorry to say on god I don't know who is the owner or who is the company head of Draft: Ok Movies. I just trying to create the Wikipedia page after watching the film P Se Pyaar F Se Faraar. There see film everything available but why a production house name article not available in the wiki then I start the first producer page but read the wiki first or I understand, then I create a draft of the film production house wiki. Sir, I'm also a Bengali user please help to ad the right information in Wikipedia. (IndiaBulez (talk) 10:30, 2 June 2020 (UTC)).[reply]

IndiaBulez, Your editing activity has made the Wikipedia community suspicious, and it seems you might have a WP:COI. Moreover, the draft is not ready for inclusion in main-space as its written in a WP:PROMOTIONAL fashion. I am going to decline for the moment. Please improve and consider re-submission. If you need further assistance and help, visit Teahouse. Than you. ~ Amkgp 10:39, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Amkgp: I noticed you pushed this through to mainspace. Did you not notice the mountain of external links that are in the body of the article? These should have been removed before it was moved into mainspace. scope_creepTalk 07:36, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Scope creep, Are you referring to this ? ~ Amkgp 07:46, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
No, I'm talking about the green links in the body of the article. If its green, its illegal. External links are only allowed in the External links section. There is dozens of them. I know some work was done to improve it, but even tone the article is wrong, in parts. Did you not notice them? scope_creepTalk 07:53, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Amkgp: The original editor kindly came back, which was unusual, and removed the green external links, so I spent some cleaning the article up. I now starting to look like decent. scope_creepTalk 08:09, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Harshit00111

Hi, re Harshit00111 (talk · contribs)

I must have used up all my AGF because I am getting rather…… 'annoyed' by this unresponsive noob. i just found out they have created 2 similar, but slightly differently named, pages about the same TV show!:

Created only 3hr 16 min apart. I feel there is a lack of WP:Competentcy showing here. I get rather tired of running around fixing basics errors, like their inability to size pictures correctly. I have dropped message templates on their talk-page about using edit summaries and page previewing
Any idea what we should do from here? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Regards, 220 of Borg 13:18, 3 June 2020 (UTC).[reply]

I wonder if he might be Dev Joshi? Editing seems to revive around shows Joshi was in. Also see Draft:Dev Dushyant Kumar Joshi, which Harshit00111 wrote. 220 of Borg 13:33, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
220 of Borg, I am also clueless and tired of fixing. The editor seems to ignore the constructive edits. Let me ping some one for help. ~ Amkgp 13:35, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I think I'll redirect the first page to the second, which seems superior. 220 of Borg 13:38, 3 June 2020 (UTC)  Done 220 of Borg 13:47, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, @Theroadislong and Cullen328: pinging for help. We are tired of fixing errors made by user User:Harshit00111. The editor is constantly not following template norms and using "image_size=500px" images inside infobox. See the page Devi Adi Parashakti. I had edited as per norms see diff. I had also tried to explain this. See User_talk:Harshit00111#Regarding_the_size_of_image_in_Devi_Adi_Parashakti, but it looks the editor does not care. It looks like User:Harshit00111 is having WP:COMPETENCE issues. Please have a look and suggest what to do. ~ Amkgp 13:48, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
re Devi Adi Parashakti they edited it again, and despite being reverted before, and requested not to make images in infoboxes too large, did so again. (300px to 500px) I tried to revert, but apparently just then the image Devi_Adi_Parashakti.jpg was deleted. Confused the hell out of me. 220 of Borg 14:47, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
220 of Borg, Image is still there File:Devi Adi Parashakti.jpg. Also, editor has reverted from his /her mistake. ~ Amkgp 15:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I see my link syntax was faulty. 🤔 Date/time "3 June 2020, 14:02:34" so possibly re-uploaded? 220 of Borg 15:50, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Definitely re-uploaded. I nominated them all for speedy, they were deleted and then all were re-uploaded. I've nominated them again. I've left warnings on Harshit00111's talkpages here and at commons. --AussieLegend () 16:06, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for helping me edit better. I am new to wikipedia and thus I don't know how to edit properly. Harshit00111 (talk) 15:48, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Harshit00111, You should review your edits and listen to senior editors, they are doing for your good. Its always recommendable to ask and seek help from Teahouse if you have any doubt about editing related things.Thank you. ~ Amkgp 17:51, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Pieter De Bruyne

Hi @Pieter De Bruyne: That is a major Flemish designer and artist with a dutch WP article present, and plenty of coverage. Unfortunately the article doesn't have any in-line citations. I did approve it,moved it to mainspace, but moved it back, when I noticed. It shouldn't take too much work to improve it. Hope that helps. Give me a shout its done. scope_creepTalk 08:13, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Eslamiyeh

Hi. About this edit, I should notice you that in Iran Administrative Division System, a District is a region consisting of some towns and villages and is a subsidiary of a County. Eslamiyeh is a town, but Eslamiyeh District (Ferdows County), is a district consisting of Eslamiyeh town and some other villages and these two items are different and need different pages. I reverted your proposal. Regards.--Mostafa 14:25, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi sir, my page for Draft:KBVISION_Group keeps deleting. I am told that i am promoting advertisements. I have added proper third party citations to the article. as a company we just wanted to add our detail to free encyclopedia. please help me with it. What phrases or point do you think needed to be edited. i will edit it shortly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sapana ku. naik (talkcontribs) 15:05, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sapana ku. naik, Your article is WP:PROMOTIONAL. Your article lacks WP:RELIABLE sources. You cannot add whatever you want in Wikipedia. The company needs to be notable as per WP:ORG guidelines. The company is seems WP:TOOSOON. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 15:14, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

brainchip

but this companey has good coverage and many notable mentions in the press. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Qy8RusHz7j (talkcontribs) 20:30, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Speedy deletion nomination of 6th New York Volunteer Cavalry

It may be a moot point, but please, read through and see the sources before youflag an article fopr copyright infringement. The sites you listed as infringed used the same public domain source as the article (* Dyer, Frederick H (1908). A Compendium of the War of the Rebellion. Des Moines, IA: Dyer Pub. Co. ASIN B01BUFJ76Q.). There are a lot of public domain sources out there about the American Civil War. Please, refrain from acting without checking. Hhfjbaker (talk) 01:27, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Review Alireza Kohany Article

Hi, The source of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Alireza_Kohany is https://fa.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D8%B9%D9%84%DB%8C%D8%B1%D8%B6%D8%A7_%DA%A9%D9%87%D9%86%DB%8C Doesn't Wikipedia accept the actor's page in another language as a source? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hezareh3vom (talkcontribs) 11:26, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hezareh3vom, It seems English Wikipedia is a little strict in terms of notability. Expand and add more WP:RELIABLE sources, it can be made acceptable. I will add the Persian source so that next reviewer will take that in consideration. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 13:44, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Rejection of Draft.

Hi,

I am new here. Creating page first time. You Just Rejected this page. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Barbie_Maan I read the other articles for reliable source. and I attached reliable sources as well. If you can help by telling me what is the mistake here so I can fix.

Thanks.

Anmolmonga2009, first of all your draft is not 'rejected' but 'declined'. Your draft lacks WP:RELIABLE sources. In reference you have provided YouTube, twitter and gossip news site (tellychakkar.com) which cannot be accepted a reliable source as per policies like WP:YTREF and WP:PUS etc. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 15:46, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

My article Problem

Sir why problem my article was not posted Shashanktiwari9487 (talk) 16:59, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Shashanktiwari9487, You are not supposed to write articles about yourself. Wikipedia is not a place for WP:PROMOTION. The draft fails notability as per WP:ANYBIO. Social media mentions are not WP:RELIABLE sources. ~ Amkgp 17:03, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Help me review my draft before I resubmit it for approval

Thanks for correcting me.

I've updated my userpage to reflect the changes you requested of me. Please help me check the draft and let me know what areas to improve on specifically.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:MBH_Corporation_Plc Leckson (talk) 17:19, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Leckson58, Thanks for declaring the WP:PAYDISCLOSE. Regarding your article, you can ask for help at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk and Teahouse. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 17:26, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I already asked for help and the points noted have all been fixed. The first reviewer noted that the draft uses too much press releases which I got rid of. The subject is discussed in depth in my references. Please help me check and let me know. Thanks in anticipation. Leckson (talk) 17:32, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Leckson58, I would leave it for the next reviewer for an independent review. Thank you. ~ Amkgp 17:34, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, so should I resubmit it again or what exactly should I do now. Leckson (talk) 17:36, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]