Talk:Bob Vaughn

Bob Vaughn has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 22, 2023. (Reviewed version).

This article was nominated for deletion on 29 May 2023. The result of the discussion was keep.

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes[edit]

Added the offensive guards, high school baseball and football coaches cats
Change guard in lead and infobox to offensive guard
- Changed.
I assume you couldn't find any college stats for this lineman?
- Wasn't able to.
"He signed his rookie contract on June 13" Article said it was the day before
- Fixed.
Is source 18 locked? I was trying to verify the date he was waived.
- Its from the paywalled NewspaperArchive.com - its available through the Wikipedia Library here but I didn't include that link as only Wikipedians can access it.

That's all I think WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 04:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:09, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]