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I believe that the article on civic engagement was not completely neutral. Though it objectively discussed various forms of civic engagement, it did not truly discuss the impact of civic engagement as well as its effect on current events, such as the protests currently going on in Hong Kong. Much of what was stated in the article put the topic in a positive light, though there is another side to it being harmful to communities as well as governments. In addition, I felt as though some aspects of civic engagement were underrepresented, such as statistics that could have backed up some claims that were made and major historical events dealing with the topic over time. Other topics that could have brought a new light to the topic included nonprofit organizations, digital media, and technological developments that have also played a role. Overall, though the article was very balanced and discussed an all-encompassing perspective behind civic engagements, there are still areas to be added that can better eliminate bias as well as provide new perspectives in the article.
I believe this article to be of mid to high importance for wikipedia, especially taking into account the high number of visits the page receives. I propose to rename the article to "Citizen Participation." Citizen engagement falls under this overarching title. I suggest to restructure the article to a reader-friendly text format and add content to separate the different kinds of participation starting from individual, political to cultural; based on the existing literature on the subject. If the wiki community does not object to the above, I will start editing this article over the course of the next month to provide better information on what citizen participation is.Socrates 27 (talk) 23:10, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
Part of this article ("Civic engagement can take many forms, from individual voluntarism to organizational involvement to electoral participation. It can include efforts to directly address an issue, work with others in a community to solve a problem or interact with the institutions of representative democracy.") is copied directly from http://www.apa.org/education/undergrad/civic-engagement.aspx..... 22.214.171.124 (talk) 00:32, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
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I believed the article was organized very well and there seems to be plentiful information which is great. Because the article has been organized and structured so well, I think it will benefit later to go back for editing. Two significant improvements I think need to be done is changing the tone and rewriting the lead section. The tone should be more of a research/encyclopedia tone, not like I am having a conversation with someone about the topic. The lead section only has the one-sentence definition. I think more of an overview of the article's topics need to be added before the table of contents. Other than that, the article has sufficient sources, clear language, and good formatting. Savannahderick (talk) 16:56, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
The formatting on this article is beautiful, but the organization of it was kind of confusing. Overall the Article is really good and helpful but a lot of the sections that were added were added in a way that did not seem cohesive to the article as a whole. For example one section would talk about volunteering and then three actions down it would bring it up again in an entirely different section. I think it would be a good idea to move those sections together so they're next to each other. Also the first definition could use a bit more explanation so that we can get more of an overview of what we'er about to read before we dive into the rest of the article. The article is very good looking and very informative besides a few organizing things its near perfect. - Breland Gibson