Talk:Counseling (The Office)

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January 18, 2013 Good article nominee Listed

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:44, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

  • I did some minor copy editing. Please check to see that everything works.
    From what I can tell, it looks good!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • "a position she fought for a few seasons back," -- in the context of the show, referring to seasons is confusing. Could you note which episodes instead, maybe?
    Added the episode.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • " Then entry was directed by Jeffrey Blitz, who had directed the previous episode "Nepotism"" -- Is there something wrong with this sentence?
    Opps, yeah. Fixed the typo.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • This marked a decrease in a million viewers and a 14 percent decrease in the 18–49 demographic from the previous episode." -- Any reason for this?
    I can't really find one. I assume it's just the fact that, after a season premiere, ratings usually always go down a bit.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • "The episode became the highest-rated non-sports related NBC program for the original week it aired" -- Are there any specific sporting events which were airing around that time which may have taken viewership from this episode?
    Not that I could find.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • "Joel Keller of AOLTV called it a "vast improvement" from last week's episode" -- You should replace these references to "last week's episode" with the explicit title of the previous episode. Obviously since then Office episodes haven't necessarily aired in order.
    Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Dup links tool returns one result: Evan Peters
    Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Dab links tool returns no problems. All external links appear to be working.
Will await responses. —Ed!(talk) 19:11, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
I believe I have addressed everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:29, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Great work. Passing the article. —Ed!(talk) 10:54, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

Continuity Error?[edit]

In the daycare scene, we heard Dwight's cousin Mose talk, but I remember another episode in which Dwight says that Mose only speaks German. Am I remembering wrong? — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 16:21, 13 August 2013 (UTC)