Talk:Diane Pernet

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==Requires Grammatical and Syntactical Adjustments==

I'll be happy to go through this in a few weeks when time is available. There are several run-on sentences, plus poorly punctuated phrasing and stylistic weaknesses. However, the content is adequately detailed and quite compelling. Notable omissions in her career section include, for example, the discovery of Parisian fashion model Charles Guislain, a young, semi-goth figure whom she frequently tracks and interviews for YouTube.