Talk:Edward James Headlam

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	This article was accepted from this draft on 25 April 2023 by reviewer Clearfrienda (talk · contribs).

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Accepted, rewrite needed[edit]

@Pratishkhedekar: I've accepted the article because it certainly meets the WP:BIO notability guidelines and is generally well-referenced, but the article itself probably needs to be cleaned up. A lot of information is irrelevant and redundant (and often isn't cited correctly) -- a notable example is the "Indian Mercantile Marine Committee" section -- I recommend removing or compressing those parts to improve the article. If you have any questions, please feel free to leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing! Clear friend a ^💬 02:51, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]