Talk:Finty Williams

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The final two sentences, taken together invite an ambiguous reading.

"She is the daughter of actors Dame Judi Dench and Michael Williams. Williams is a single parent to her son Sam."

May I suggest alternatives might be: "She is the daughter of actors Dame Judi Dench and Michael Williams. Finty Williams is a single parent to her son Sam." or one sentence: "Flinty Williams is the daughter of actors Dame Judi Dench and Michael Williams and is a single parent to her son Sam." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.125.60.210 (talk) 22:54, 24 July 2011 (UTC)