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Hi! My name is Marissa and I'm a student at St. Francis College in Brooklyn, New York who is working with my Mass Comm. class on editing Wikipedia content. I wanted to leave a few suggestions here for improving on this particular article because I feel it has so much potential.
First, I noticed in the opening overview your facts weren't referenced with a reliable source, or any source at all for that matter. This made it difficult for me while I was reading to know that this information is 100 percent accurate and free of error. Where did you find the information from? Is it from a website? If so, just make sure to include that in the reference section.
Second, while the content in the overview was relevant to the subject matter, I noticed a few small grammatical errors - Wordy sentences, missing commas, etc. I would suggest proof reading through it once more. Also, I feel it might be unnecessary to include that Fuzzy Door was the location of many "Fuzzy Door" Parties because it is not directly related to the overview of the production company, but more so a fun fact.
One last thing I noticed was that the overview was the only written out part of the article. While I like how you made a chart to list the TV shows, Films, Web Cartoons, and Specials associated with Fuzzy Door, I think readers would be interested to know a little bit about what role this production company played in creating them. In other words, include a little more information.
While the content on this page might need some work, it has a lot of potential and I know with the right research and corrections, it will get to where it needs to be.
I look forward to hearing back and possibly working further with you to make this article reach its full potential. Mpaganelli (talk) 00:35, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
