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DYK nomination (new article)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk05:19, 7 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Created by AthalGolwen (talk). Self-nominated at 02:40, 28 April 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. The hook, though, tells us nothing about his notability or accomplishments other than he was the "second". You have written quite a bit about him; could you suggest a different hook fact? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 15:36, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • @AthalGolwen: thank you for the alts. But a hook is just that – something that "hooks" the reader and makes him want to click on the article to read more. ALT1 is more like a story and tells me everything I need to know; forget about reading the article. ALT2 is okay but not exciting. Sometimes it just takes clever wording to make things "hooky". I'd like to look at this with a clear head tomorrow and suggest something. Best, Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
This is a comment and not a review, but is it acceptable to say "thanks to" in a hook? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:11, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Noted. Changed to due to. Yoninah (talk) 10:56, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]