Talk:I Invented Sex

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Good articleI Invented Sex has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starI Invented Sex is part of the Ready (Trey Songz album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 20, 2010Good article nomineeListed
October 31, 2010Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 19:17, 13 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • "I Invented Sex" is a song by American R&B singer Trey Songz. It features Canadian recording artist Drake. - Making this one sentence would be better, such as "I Invented Sex is a song by American R&B singer Trey Songz, and features Canadian recording artist Drake." or something similar.
Done
  • The song was written by the two with Tony Scales and its producer, Los Da Mystro. - Would be better "Together, they wrote the song alongside Tony Scales and ...."
Done
  • It was released to urban airplay as the third single from Songz' third studio album Ready on October 13, 2009. - Re-write. You say "third" twice, and it should be urban airplay stations.
Partially done. I don't see any issue with using 'third' twice.
I re-edited because urban airplay stations is very incorrect. MediaBase outlets such as AllAccess and FMQB dub a song going for adds as being available or release to "airplay" Candyo32 02:42, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • sensual feel - Sensual message?
Done
  • reached forty-two - reached number forty-two
Done
  • Is there a source for where is was recorded?
The liner notes. I've added the information into the background so it could be sourced outside the infobox. Candyo32 00:11, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Background[edit]

  • of R&B group - From the, or of the
Don't see the problem here
I think I see what Adabow meant. But Day26 isn't a member from the group or the group, Day26 is the group. Candyo32 00:09, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Composition[edit]

  • Looks good

Chart performance[edit]

  • debuted on the Billboard Hot 100 at number ninety - debuted at number ninety....
Done
  • It spent twenty weeks on the chart, with the chart stay spanning from 2009 to 2010, with it falling off the chart on the week ending March 10, 2010 - Re-write for clarity
Done
  • The song also topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, making it Songz' first number one the chart - don't mention chart twice in a sentence
Done

Music video[edit]

  • It carries a parental advisory warning. Drake does not appear in the music video. - It reads like a list
Done

Live performances[edit]

  • Drake joined Songz to perform it at West Hollywood's House of Blues in January - Re-write
Done
  • Almost every sentence begins with "he performed it" and "he again performed it". - You should switch it up a bit.

Overall, good job Candy. These fixes shouldn't take you long. Drop me off a message when your done :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 19:44, 13 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've jumped in so that you can finally get this GT done, Candyo. There are still a few things to do, though. Adabow (talk · contribs) 23:53, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think everything has been addressed now. Candyo32 14:18, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The article Passed--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:12, 20 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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