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Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 1150-26, Writing for Others

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This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2024 and 18 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Writ1150 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Writ1150 (talk) 13:23, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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These are the edits I plan to make on this article. First, I would like to add more citations to the information already written because there are too many sentences written without a source linked for readers to find. I will also focus on developing the "Early life" section of her Wikipedia page by adding details about her early career as a nurse, and the different administrative positions she's held during that career. Furthermore, there is information to be added on what Jo Ann Zimmerman accomplished during her political positions such as co-founding DAWN and establishment of certain bills that I plan on including in her page. Lastly I will be adding more information with regards to her death, such as the memorial service and lowering of flags done in her honor. These edits would follow Wikipedia's goal of providing more balanced coverage on the person featured while still providing neutral content based on reliable sources. Please see the annotated bibliography in my bibliography sandbox on Wikipedia dashboard for more details.

-- Writ1150 (talk) 13:55, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]