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I edited the anime section, because there were a lot of errors in it... 1. They had all the names in Japanese Order, which should be corrected, because I doubt this show took place before 1847. 2. Many spelling errors (friend spelled frgiend, and a few others) 3. Bad capitalization (Yumi spelled yumi) 4. It was overall bad, it was probably written by someone who watched the fansubbed versions, and doesn't understand much Japanese.Moocowsrule (talk) 16:17, 28 September 2008 (UTC)moocowsrule
There were some mistakes in the presentation of this page. 1) The 'Story' section (At the top of the page) is NOT the Anime's storyline, but rather the Visual Novel's storyline. People may mistake it as the Anime's storyline. 2) The Anime's storyline will come after the leading section. In this case, the Anime's storyline is way down the page. Also, the Visual Novel's storyline is at the top of the page and I recommend putting the Visual Novel's storyline together in the 'Light Novel' section. Silentwalker750 (talk) 11:20, 12 March 2009 (UTC)Silentwalker750
This article is about game (Visual Novel) first of all. Anime is sub-project from game. Alex Spade (talk) 18:16, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
too many spoilers under anime plot section? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 18.104.22.168 (talk) 04:45, 14 April 2009 (UTC)