Talk:Kusatsu, Gunma
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Cleanup
[edit]I just fixed numerous style problems such as
- Do not include Japanese for anything and everything, especially if there is a Wikipedia article on that topic.
- When you do include a Japanese term, use the {{nihongo}} template.
- Use macrons (ō, ū), not old-style hats (or whatever they're called)
- Don't make links or bold text in section headers.
There are still some problems with the article:
- It needs a much better opening paragraph. See WP:LEAD
- There are too many pictures. It's cluttered. Either remove some, or maybe collect them in a gallery section at the bottom.
- The article needs many more citations within the body text.
- The sources need to be written in a more easily-understandable way.