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Hi Miranda, remember that Wikipedia won't count the stuff he's written as "reliable sources"--so while you can definitely include Dawnland, the wampum records, and the stories he told to Leland as "further reading," you need to dig deeper in Academic Search Premier, Google Books and the Dawnland Bibliography to get enough sources for your eventual entry to pass muster with Wikipedia's editors.Ssenier (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]
OK, the article isn't perfect, but I thought the subject too important to leave in the Draft space. I did want to make a couple of sage comments by previous AfC reviewers available, so here they are: 78.26(spin me / revolutions)14:16, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Excellent topic! I would recommend cleaning the submission up a bit. I'm unsure as to the relevance of the examples section (and explanation). I'd also try adding some more references and tweaking the language to be neutral and encyclopaedic. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 17:40, 18 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: I made some copyedits to make what's here flow a little better. I put in a few source tags and recommend a thorough copyedit to remvoe duplicative material and to organize things just a little better. It's basically ready, but would benefit from some cleanup. I'm Ok with the literary translation, but let's put more into the lead about his translation work. Montanabw(talk)21:07, 19 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Excellent topic! I would recommend cleaning the submission up a bit. I'm unsure as to the relevance of the examples section (and explanation). I'd also try adding some more references and tweaking the language to be neutral and encyclopaedic. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 17:40, 18 May 2015 (UTC)