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Massacre of communist POWs by hui and han soldiers of ma jiyuan's 82nd division

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Rajmaan (talk) 05:57, 19 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article in desperate need of revision

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The grammar is all over the place, and the page struggles to maintain coherency even within individual sentences. It reads more like a collection of factoids and trivia facts than any meaningful telling of Ma Jiyuan's life. The article needs a substantive rehaul in most all sections. Defaulting (talk) 22:32, 18 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]