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In 'Professional Career', there are two problematic sentences back to back. One has unclear syntax, the second is a sentence fragment. 'He later defeated future welterweight champion Jack Britton during the later part of his career. losing his first fight and winning 98 there on.

The first sentence: 'Whose career?' The second lacks an object and is obviously incomplete. Who lost his first fight? Clearly not McFarland. RobotBoy66 (talk) 10:35, 13 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]