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Former featured articlePoint Park Civic Center is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on July 27, 2011.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 23, 2006Peer reviewReviewed
September 1, 2006Featured article candidatePromoted
September 7, 2011Featured article reviewDemoted
Current status: Former featured article

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I'm seeing a lot of two-and-three sentence paragraphs. I've also thrown in a lot of [citation needed]s where I think information is unsourced. Also, one section uses "summer of 1945" — I was under the impression that we shouldn't use seasonal terms because it's biased to the northern hemisphere. Ten Pound Hammer, his otters and a clue-bat • (Otters want attention) 00:05, 28 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There are tons of other issues here. The lead doesn't adequately summarize the article, there is a lot of unreferenced material (more than what's already tagged), and the entire article is cited mainly by five offline sources (with zero online sources included at all). I think an FARC discussion needs to take place. It's the only solution. Maybe also a discussion about whether articles that got promoted through an FAR should be reviewed before going on the Main Page, if the FAR took places a certain amount of time ago. Although those are two completely separate discussions. –Dream out loud (talk) 03:30, 31 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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