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Notes on my edit:

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Here's some notes on my rewrite of the article that seem sufficiently important to bring to the attention of other editors.

  • The infobox previously listed Joe Ybarra as designer. However, the game manual assigns that position to Vas Nokhoudian and makes no mention of Ybarra at all. So I changed the infobox accordingly.
  • I rewrote the part about the game being an "unofficial sequel" to the Starflight series. Although its original design intended it to be a true sequel, Tsunami had to remove all the Starflight stuff, so it's really not a sequel anymore, official or unofficial, because it doesn't present a continuity of Starflight's game world or plot. "Unofficial sequel" would be better applied to recent fan-made Starflight games promoted at various places on the Web like Starflight: The Lost Colony. However, I did emphasize the similarities between the games in the lead section.
  • I deleted the "Races" subsection because it is (1) unreferenced, (2) likely WP:OR (based on someone's playing experience) and (3) possibly overly detailed. Besides, I was able to cover some of that ground in the rewritten Plot section.