Talk:Radical Women

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“Strong Stance”[edit]

“In addition to their core feminist beliefs, they take a strong stance on racism and gay rights.”

What stance do they take?—Rory 17:50, Aug 21, 2004 (UTC)

"Nice edit"[edit]

Nice edit, Doctor Matt. If you'd like to point out specific area you think improvement, I'll do my best to comply.--HG, 3/15/07

Merle Woo reference[edit]

Since the Merle Woo mention already links to the Wikipedia article about her, I thought the extra reference that was supplied (which is available in the Woo article) made the sentence a bit awkward. It's here if someone feels really strongly about it needing to be there: <ref>Merle Woo, Matt & Andrej Koymasky.</ref> - Jlandahl 20:10, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

NPOV[edit]

I think this article reads like an op-ed piece in favor of the organization. Whoever wrote it clearly wants everyone to know how great Radical Women is. I am going to be working on cleaning up the severe tone problems when I get time. ausa کui × 21:10, 8 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for clarifying, Ryan. If you could be even more specific, I could help fix the article. Thanks. Doctormatt 03:25, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
Since you've not responded, and not made any edits to the article, I removed the tag. The article seems pretty good to me, tone-wise. It mostly states what RW states, and it is clear that this is RW's opinion. There are quite a few citations (for the length of the article). If you still have things to say about the tone of the article, I'd love to hear them. Doctormatt 21:51, 23 July 2007 (UTC)