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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 23:28, 24 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that Robert Brigandyne was a shipwright from Kent who was sent to Portsmouth to build a drydock? Source: Hewerdine, Anita (August 1998). The Yeomen of the King's Guard 1485-1547 (PDF) (D.Phil. thesis). London School of Economics. pp. 82, 202.
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    • Comment: QPQ:This is my fourth nomination

Created by AntientNestor (talk). Self-nominated at 16:21, 24 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Robert Brigandyne; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

ALT1 is quite long and confusing. @Gatoclass: Do you have any suggestions on how to make the hook more concise or snappier? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:05, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That one's no good, it sounds like they were repairing mudbanks.
There is a wrinkle with ALT2 as well, in that, according to one source I found, there is evidence of a naturally occurring dry dock in England prior to this one, so I would suggest the hook is modified as follows:
*ALT4: ... that Robert Brigandyne constructed the first purpose-built dry dock in England, after the new warships of King Henry VII grew too big to repair on mudbanks? Gatoclass (talk) 18:42, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think we're getting somewhere now. Thanks. --AntientNestor (talk) 21:14, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies for the delay in getting back to this. I have added a note about the natural dry dock that reportedly existed before this purpose-built dock. As I supplied ALT4, somebody else is now needed to verify it. Thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 06:47, 10 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ALT4 short enough, AGF sourced, and interesting, though I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to end it at "England". Let's roll.--Launchballer 11:36, 24 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]