Talk:Ron Shulamit Conservatory

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I was surprised, delighted, and disappointed all at once to read this article. It is certainly a noteworthy subject, and you have made a fine start here. By writing this article in your user account and then renaming it, you have made your own user page to disappear, making it difficult to communicate with you, so I am addressing you on this talk page.

I am surprised that this article ignores the most interesting fact about the conservatory: that it serves the women of the Haredi community in Israel. This is what makes it unique and eminently notable. Did you have some motive for skirting this central matter? I would be interested in reading your thoughts on this before embarking on an edit of the article. Thanks, --Ravpapa (talk) 08:06, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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I guess the entire History section is based on Ram (1996), but 1. there's no URL indicated, and 2. it's in Hebrew. Can anyone help out please? Ravpapa, maybe you would like to? I had to place a couple of "dubious" tags which need looking into. One might have to do with an undue contraction - not "the only program in the world... to offer... a BA program in music education for girls", but specifically to Haredi women. Cheers, Arminden (talk) 23:16, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ravpapa here. I have kind of moved on in life, and don't edit much anymore. But, yes, you are right - the article is out of date, off-focus, and badly in need of a rewrite. Don't bank on me, but if the spirit moves, I may undertake this. Ravpapa (talk) 15:09, 24 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ravpapa, if you find a minute, please tell me how you managed. To kick the habit, I mean. Enjoy the alternatives! Arminden (talk) 21:43, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]