Talk:Takuma Nakahira

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I have added significant details of Nakahira's practice and a number of references. However, the list of "sources" needs to be expanded greatly and cleaned up, and the list of publications could use some work as well to read more clearly and consistently. I will try to work on this more in a few hours. Please note: I have yet to find any images of his work that are not copyrighted (currently copyright is held by Nakahira Gen).Video Researcher Nina (talk) 00:15, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I added links, updated sources, cleaned up publications, worked on standardizing references (though a few may still need work), added some details that were missing about Toshio Shimao, and corrected some grammatical errors.Video Researcher Nina (talk) 04:18, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Video Researcher Nina: I don't understand why "the list of "sources" needs to be expanded greatly" because the article already has plenty of inline citations and a lengthy list of sources. It seems unlikely that more sources were consulted in writing the article than are already described. Are you perhaps confusing the Sources section with the Further reading section? -Lopifalko (talk) 10:20, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lopifalko: The note about needing to expand sources was prior to further updates I worked on a few hours later. At the time, I didn't think I'd have a chance to expand the list of sources and only three were listed, but I have at this point. Sorry for the confusion. I should have made it clearer in my second note that I dealt with that issue. However, you bring up a good point about Sources vs. Further Reading. I maintained the original structure of the article, but I'm not sure how useful the Sources section is at this point as I tried to make sure all the details are in the references. Perhaps making this a Further Reading list, especially an Engilish-focused further reading list is more appropriate.Video Researcher Nina (talk) 15:06, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]