Talk:The Boat Race 1994

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Boat Race 1994/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

Comments:
  • DAB
    • Yep. Acknowledged, but the HotR I'm linking doesn't feature as one of the other links, so that's the best we have. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Meanwhile, Oxford lost out to London Rowing Club's lightweight crew, narrowly defeated the University of London Boat Club. Is that missing a "by" after "narrowly", or is it properly constructed as is?
    • added "but" (which wasn't either of your choices, but re-checking the source, that was what was intended...) The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Fred Smallbone was installed as finishing coach can you link "finishing coach" anywhere?

That's all I can see. Seattle (talk) 17:22, 6 August 2014 (UTC)

As always, thanks so much. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)