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Featured articleWilliam Wurtenburg is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 28, 2014Good article nomineeListed
September 19, 2014Peer reviewReviewed
December 29, 2014Featured article candidatePromoted
Current status: Featured article


GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:William Wurtenburg/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 16:47, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Added archived link.
WP:LEAD
  • Added.
Early life and college
  • Done.
  • Reworded simply to "season's final contest". Better?
1890s
  • Reworded. It now reads: "Wurtenburg did not remain at the Naval Academy the following year and was replaced as head coach by Matthew McClung." Is this better?
  • I changed the title, since the section is really about his entire life after college. Is this alright?
1900s and death
  • Clarified.
  • No, although it likely could.
References
  • Removed
Images
  • Punctuated.
  • I honestly have no clue what is going on with the picture. It was uploaded back in 2009, and it appears that User:Cbl62 found a better picture of Barbour and uploaded it over the original. I'll upload the old version to commons later today.
  • I'll assume good faith.
  • Personality rights added to Wurtenburg's picture. Barbour's image was uploaded here instead of the commons, so I have to wait until it is transferred to add personality rights.
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