Template:Did you know nominations/Chinko

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The result was: promoted by —howcheng {chat} 23:04, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Chinko

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... that Chinko Nature Reserve in the Central African Republic provides an undegraded habitat with the genetic diversity needed to recolonize animal populations in neighbouring regions?

Reviewed: Alex Raisbeck

Created by Inkian Jason (talk). Nominated by Cwmhiraeth (talk) at 18:21, 1 April 2018 (UTC).

New? It was published as a draft on March 27.
Long enough? 13,500 bytes
Neutral/cites sources/free of plagiarism? - a large portion of the hook is a quotation in the article, which can easily be rewritten as prose. It would be useful if you could add imperial units throughout the article.
Hook format?
Hook interesting? - I would prefer "undisturbed" than "undegraded". The sentence doesn't read too well. Perhaps - "...that Chinko... supports a diverse ecosystem capable of recolonizing depleted animal populations in neighbouring regions?" Still a bit long. I'm not sure...

Support ALT1, unsure whether to mention the country name or not. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:51, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

QPQ?

So the article is almost in good shape. Clear up the bit with the quotation and the hook, and it should be good to go. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:30, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

@Hurricanehink: Sorry, I missed this. How about

ALT1 ... that Chinko Nature Reserve in central Africa provides a natural habitat with the genetic diversity needed to reestablish animal populations in neighbouring regions? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:02, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Sounds good! But could you reword some of the prose in the article so it isn't a quotation? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:51, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

@Hurricanehink: It's not my article, but I have removed that particular quote. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:27, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

That's much better. Good to go! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:20, 24 April 2018 (UTC)