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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Gatoclass (talk) 14:47, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

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Crime in Cuba

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A Cuban police car in Havana, Cuba, getting washed by Cuban policemen, photographed in May 2002

Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 12:13, 12 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Inadequate coverage of the topic. Gatoclass (talk) 17:45, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Working on improving the article. In the meantime, here is ALT1: ... that in the 1920s, Fernando Ortiz believed in a "scientific crusade against crime in Cuba"? --Rosiestep (talk) 03:12, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
  • More text added.--Nvvchar. 13:20, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
Obviously it's better than it was, but I'm still not totally comfortable with this. For example, there are few if any statistics; in particular, I would like to see comparative statistics with other South and North American countries. The organization is still a bit of a mess - if you haven't done so already, I would suggest taking a look at some of the more mature "Crime in country" articles, like for example Crime in the United States or Crime in Canada. Gatoclass (talk) 16:34, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
I actually took clue from Crime in India. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 03:28, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Since the nom, the article has been expanded by 3 other editors (Dr. Blofeld, Nvvchar, and me). I've done a bit of c/e just now. Unfortunately, we won't get crime statistics in Cuba if the ref for the lede sentence is to be considered reliable. I'm offering ALT2: ... that prostitution is not a crime in Cuba? --Rosiestep (talk) 19:06, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Considering that the photo for ALT2 has a 'Personality rights warning', and is massively BLP-problematic, I'd say no to using it at the main page. --Soman (talk) 01:06, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I tweaked ALT2, removing "pictured" and I've removed the photo from this nom page. Also, the photo is no longer in the article. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:10, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Article needs full review post expansion; issues with ALT2 have been addressed by eliminating the problematic photo. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
I still have some POV concerns with this one, and again, I will need to find time to check the article content against its sources to ensure it is presenting a reasonably accurate portrayal of crime in the country. Gatoclass (talk) 11:36, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Withdrawn.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 06:48, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
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