Template:Did you know nominations/HTC Rhyme

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 22:00, 16 February 2013 (UTC).

HTC Rhyme[edit]

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... that despite being developed with female focus groups, and being available in a plum color, the HTC Rhyme smartphone was not explicitly marketed towards women?

Comment: If anyone actually owns this phone, we really do need a picture.

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nom at 01:05, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

Both the article and hook look good. The tense of the article is a little strange, it flips between present tense in "Features" and past tense in "Reception". However, this is minor and the article still meets the DYK standards. I also changed one word of the hook so didn't offer an alternative, just changed it. James086^Talk 14:32, 16 February 2013 (UTC)