Template:Did you know nominations/Hiram Kahanawai

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:19, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

Hiram Kahanawai[edit]

Source:
  • Hiram Kahanawai (d. 1874) was a relative of Queen Emma by ajunior line of descent; also a relative of David Kalakaua. Hiram had been chief steward in the royal house­ hold under Kamehameha IV and continued to serve Emma in that capacity during her widowhood. In 1874, after the election o f Kalakaua to the throne, Hiram married Kapo'oloku, a younger sister of Mrs. David Kalakaua (Queen Kapi'olani), and received official appointment under the new dynasty" (Kaeo & Queen Emma 1976, p. 15)
  • Captain Hiram Kahanawai, commander of the Household Troops, died very suddenly last night, supposed of aneurism. [1]
  • Reviewed: Not on Drugs
  • Comments: He was basically a butler and maybe there could be a more quirky hook written around that.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 22:19, 16 February 2017 (UTC)

5x expanded by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 05:41, 16 February 2017 (UTC).

  • It's a bit weird that the citations for different facts are all merged into one note (for instance, Kaeo & Queen Emma do not apparently say that Kahanawai served in the Household Troops, though they verify the rest of the hook; the tidbit is however verified by the outer source[s]). No big impediment, however: article is new, well cited, well written, long enough, with no plagiarism issues whatsoever; hook is interesting and (well, yes) verified; QPQ done, no images used. Dahn (talk) 10:17, 18 February 2017 (UTC)