Template:Did you know nominations/Margaret Anne Staggers

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The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:29, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Margaret Anne Staggers

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• ... that West Virginia House Delegate Dr. Margaret Anne Staggers considered retiring from emergency medicine following an attack by an elderly patient driving their nails through Staggers' face?

• Reviewed: Weehawken Public Library

Created/expanded by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 05:40, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

• Length, date, hook OK. Hook confirmed in online citation. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 19:59, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

• Some issues with WP:Close paraphrasing here. Examples: "July 7, 2011 incident in which an elderly female patient drove her fingernails into the side of Staggers' face while Staggers attempted to provide aid to the woman" vs "As she attempted to provide aid to an elderly woman, the patient drove her fingernails into the side of Staggers’ face, drawing blood, in a July 7th incident" and "Staggers steered the passage of a bill she authored eliminating the need to publish estates valued at below $100,000, upon death, twice in a local newspaper.[5] The need for this fix to a quirk in the legal code" vs "she managed to steer passage of a bill she crafted on her own — one that eliminates the need to publish estates valued at below $100,000, upon death, twice in a newspaper...a quirk in the code". Nikkimaria (talk) 00:22, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

• I've removed entirely the sentence regarding the steerage of Staggers' first bill and I've rephrased the sentence regarding the elderly patient attack against Staggers. Please let me know if this article requires further fixes to qualify. --Caponer (talk) 15:22, 17 December 2011 (UTC)

• only found one phrase left and was easy to reword by removing redundancies. good to go....and gone.Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:29, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Revised hook: ... that West Virginia House Delegate Dr. Margaret Anne Staggers considered retiring from emergency medicine following an attack by an elderly patient? --Caponer (talk) 15:25, 17 December 2011 (UTC)