Template:Did you know nominations/Old Love / New Love

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:02, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Old Love / New Love

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... that "Old Love / New Love" was written by Twin Shadow for the 2013 videogame Grand Theft Auto V, for a fictional radio station he hosted? Source: "[Interviewer] “Old Love/New Love” was recorded for Grand Theft Auto V, and you also lent your voice for the radio host of the “Radio Mirror Park” station in the game. How did you become involved with Rockstar Games?" (Interview) and "The song — released by way of the Grand Theft Auto V soundtrack in 2013, as part of a fake radio channel hosted by Lewis himself"(Tini Mix Tapes)
- ALT1:... that the Twin Shadow song "Old Love / New Love" was written for the Grand Theft Auto V soundtrack? Source: "[Interviewer] “Old Love/New Love” was recorded for Grand Theft Auto V, and you also lent your voice for the radio host of the “Radio Mirror Park” station in the game. How did you become involved with Rockstar Games?" (Interview) and "The song — released by way of the Grand Theft Auto V soundtrack in 2013, as part of a fake radio channel hosted by Lewis himself"(Tini Mix Tapes)

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jacqueline Shumiatcher

Created by Tbhotch (talk). Self-nominated at 02:46, 3 October 2017 (UTC).

Article new enough at time of nomination, good length, no copyvio, interesting topic, exhaustively referenced. I think the hooks are a bit too wordy and not particularly punchy. The "huh" moment from the hook comes from the fact that the game was written for a fictional radio station, and maybe that should be the meat of the hook. What about "... that "Old Love / New Love" was written by Twin Shadow for a fictional radio station?" To me, at least, that's punchy and intriguing. A Train^talk 09:45, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

My first DYK review so a second opinion may be a good idea.A Train^talk 09:45, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi @A Train:, thanks for the review. I have no problem with your hook suggestion (officially ALT2 below). © Tbhotch^™ (en-2.5). 22:20, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

- ALT2: that "Old Love / New Love" was written by Twin Shadow for a fictional radio station?

Good hook! I think we're GTG here. A Train^talk 21:10, 18 October 2017 (UTC)