User talk:松茸取りの翁
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Ways to improve Hesperusbahnen
[edit]Hi, I'm Kudpung. 松茸取りの翁, thanks for creating Hesperusbahnen!
I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Please provide sources
The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 13:35, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
Score snippets
[edit]Thank you for your recent additions of score snippets to articles on waltzes. I noticed that several of them have Lilypond mistakes.
- Most of them have an extraneous
\partial 4.
, which creates an anacrusis (or pick-up) that confuses Lilypond and misaligns the music with the bar lines. I am assuming you did not intend to write this, as it seems like a simple copy-and-paste mistake. Here is the Lilypond documentation page on anacruses. For example, notice the difference here:\relative c' { \partial 4. c4 c g' g | a a g2 }
\relative c' { c4 c g' g | a a g2 }
- In some of the snippets, it looks like you incorrectly used a slur instead of a tie. Here is the Lilypond documentation that discusses the difference between them. In the first audio embedded below, you can hear the F♯ played twice:
\relative c' { \key a \major \time 3/4 cis2. | e2 fis4 | fis2.( | fis) }
\relative c' { \key a \major \time 3/4 cis2. | e2 fis4 | fis2. ~ | fis }
I have fixed these and other errors in Estudiantina, but not in Dorfschwalben aus Österreich, Dynamiden, Feuerfest!, Frauenherz, Hesperusbahnen, Kaiser-Walzer, and Les Patineurs (waltz). Please be careful when you upload score snippets that they are correctly notated! Let me know if you have any questions. Hftf (talk) 04:24, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
- My ability is still not enough. Your advice will be very helpful. Thank you very much! 松茸取りの翁 (talk) 09:36, 21 October 2016 (UTC)