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Aquineas, you are invited to the Teahouse

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Hi Aquineas! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia.
Be our guest at the Teahouse! The Teahouse is a friendly space where new editors can ask questions about contributing to Wikipedia and get help from peers and experienced editors. I hope to see you there! SarahStierch (I'm a Teahouse host)

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Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

You've asked for advice on my Talk page. One of the very big reasons your article reads like an advertisement is it's largely cited from company press releases. Wikipedia articles need to be written without too much jargon and cited mainly to reliable, independent coverage (such as newspapers or magazines). The San Francisco Business Times sounds impressive but is written in the first person about the CEO and only mentions Delphix very briefly. Sionk (talk) 18:56, 6 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

beat it MJ just beat it the fire in their eyes and the words are really clear so beat it — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.77.177.176 (talk) 08:48, 10 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]