User talk:Djennin2

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jon Ossoff (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Quasar G. was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Jon Ossoff instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I am not actually declining your article, but I have moved it to Jon Ossoff which was previously a redirect.

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Quasar G. (talk) 22:45, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Djennin2, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Quasar G. (talk) 22:45, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, User:Djennin2/sandbox/Jon Ossoff

Hello, Djennin2. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "sandbox/Jon Ossoff".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 07:41, 25 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

msg.ai

If you want to see how to write an appropriate, neutral article, look at something like OpenDataSoft.

Your article still reads more like a sales brochure than an encyclopedia article.

Things you need to drop from it include:

Everything like the second sentence which just reads like a sales pitch extolling the virtues of the product(s)
The overuse of name-dropping lists of clients
phrases like "made headlines", "vast improvement", "quickly tapped by"

Honestly look at the example I gave and notice it doesn't do any of that. That's how your article should be.

Do you have a connection with this company? If so that can make it difficult to be objective, as WP:COI explains. -- Begoon 05:36, 3 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I understand your point - the only reason for the "made headlines" line was because I was mimicking Deep Mind's page. I think I've addressed it correctly. Removed the sales pitch language, reduced the client "name dropping" to those that have better sourcing, and only used the offending phrases when it was appropriate. Djennin2

It's better now, so I made a few further changes and removed the 'advert' tag. You didn't answer my question about having a connection with this company. You're not in any way compelled to answer, but I'm interested, nevertheless. -- Begoon 23:38, 3 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, sorry - didn't notice that. No, I'm not affiliated with them. I AM affiliated with Y Combinator, which is why I know about them at all.. but mostly just wanted to do more with wiki and this seemed an easy one-off. Djennin2

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