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Hi. Have you looked at Wikipedia:NPOV tutorial yet? That might help you. My first suggestion would be that you take out the word "premium" wherever it occurs in the article. My second would be that you should remove any "references" to advertising websites or websites that don't mention the drink. Deb (talk) 18:05, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

There are still lots of things I would change in order to avoid the article sounding like an advert:

I would remove the "Availability" section.
I would remove the "Digital Channels" section.
I would remove the link to the video.

This is just my opinion. If you want further comments, try moving the article to Wikipedia:Articles for creation. Deb (talk) 20:44, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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File permission problem with File:BODYARMOR SuperDrink Fruit Punch Bottle.jpg

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Primefac (talk) 22:42, 28 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Onel5969 (talk) 04:30, 19 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bodyarmor SuperDrink has been accepted

Bodyarmor SuperDrink, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Winner 42 Talk to me! 22:03, 13 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]