User talk:Skire913

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September 2016[edit]

(edit conflict) Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. I saw your post at the help desk and subsequently found your draft. I have amended the headings in accordance with Wiki's Manual of Style. You will need to create a title for the article (which is repeated as the 'boldname' in the first line) when you come to move it to mainspace. In the meantime, any person you wish (and possibly some you don't) can edit the page merely by following the link to it but they must not edit using your account. If you have not already seen it, please have a look at WP:MEDRS. Thank you. Eagleash (talk) 18:04, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Further, please do not underline level 3 (===) or lower headings as this is not per MoS. Thank you. Eagleash (talk) 18:35, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your question at the Help desk[edit]

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Unsourced additions[edit]

Please do not add or change content, as you did at Impella, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. --David Biddulph (talk) 17:05, 20 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (December 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This reads like an informational paper for the working group, rather than a neutral article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 17:14, 19 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Skire913, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 17:14, 19 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (December 23)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is still too close at being a journal report, instead of an encyclopedia article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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SwisterTwister talk 21:21, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (February 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Winged Blades of Godric was:

Submission reads more like an entry in a medical journal. Only of interest and understanding to a very specific audience as the article currently stands. The excessive clinical rigor and deductive reasoning of various facts in the article could be easily done away with. Also see WP:MEDRS on the quality of different medical literature as references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Winged Blades^Godric 07:24, 7 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute cardiac unloading has been accepted[edit]

Acute cardiac unloading, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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— Yash^talk stalk 04:07, 17 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

WP:PAID[edit]

You are required to disclose your connection to the topic you write about. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:45, 18 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I would gladly do so if I was being paid to write this article. Doc James

Are you paid in any way by the company in question? Best Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 20:51, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

Remember that when adding content about health, please only use high-quality reliable sources as references. We typically use review articles, major textbooks and position statements of national or international organizations (There are several kinds of sources that discuss health: here is how the community classifies them and uses them). WP:MEDHOW walks you through editing step by step. A list of resources to help edit health content can be found here. The edit box has a built-in citation tool to easily format references based on the PMID or ISBN. We also provide style advice about the structure and content of medicine-related encyclopedia articles. The welcome page is another good place to learn about editing the encyclopedia. If you have any questions, please feel free to drop me a note. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 20:46, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]