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My thoughts

I think the lead needs to be more summarizing of the article's information. I think the tone needs working on - make it less repetitive and a little more neutral. Add more commentary about the events.Jasper Deng (talk) 03:30, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What specific issues do you see with NPOV? BelloWello (talk) 03:54, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I mean, the article is just basically a resume in tone. I'm a very strict judge on article tone, fyi.Jasper Deng (talk) 03:55, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, but isn't that generally what biographical articles are? I guess my question wasn't very easy to answer, what specific improvements do you suggest? (Also, neither I nor anyone would object to your editing the article.) BelloWello (talk) 03:57, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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