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* ... that the [[Children's literature|children's book]] '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''' was not initially written as such, with there being adult themes throughout? |
* ... that the [[Children's literature|children's book]] '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''' was not initially written as such, with there being adult themes throughout? |
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Could you edit this hook? There is some terrible grammar here. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:39, 17 January 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Yoninah}} Here's an attempt: |
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:* '''ALT1:''' ... that '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''', which includes adult themes throughout, was not initially written as a [[Children's literature|children's book]]? |
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:I've retained the gist of the original hook here, but I note that it is a little at odds with the article, which describes the book as young-adult novel instead of a children's book. Also, it doesn't appear that the relevant fact (that it wasn't "initially written as a children's book") is really even explicitly mentioned there. — <span style="font-family:'Trajan Pro','Perpetua Titling MT',Perpetua,serif">'''[[User:Ravenpuff|<span style="color:#22254a">RAVEN</span><span style="color:#996e00">PVFF</span>]]'''</span> '''·''' ''[[User talk:Ravenpuff|talk]]'' '''·''' 11:50, 17 January 2021 (UTC) |
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Prep 5
- ... that the children's book See You in the Cosmos was not initially written as such, with there being adult themes throughout?
Could you edit this hook? There is some terrible grammar here. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 11:39, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Here's an attempt:
- ALT1: ... that See You in the Cosmos, which includes adult themes throughout, was not initially written as a children's book?
- I've retained the gist of the original hook here, but I note that it is a little at odds with the article, which describes the book as young-adult novel instead of a children's book. Also, it doesn't appear that the relevant fact (that it wasn't "initially written as a children's book") is really even explicitly mentioned there. — RAVENPVFF · talk · 11:50, 17 January 2021 (UTC)