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==Prep 5==
==Prep 5==
* ... that the [[Children's literature|children's book]] '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''' was not initially written as such, with there being adult themes throughout?
* ... that the [[Children's literature|children's book]] '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''' was not initially written as such, with there being adult themes throughout?
:Could you edit this hook? There is some terrible grammar here. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:39, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
Could you edit this hook? There is some terrible grammar here. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:39, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
:{{re|Yoninah}} Here's an attempt:
:* '''ALT1:''' ... that '''''[[See You in the Cosmos]]''''', which includes adult themes throughout, was not initially written as a [[Children's literature|children's book]]?
:I've retained the gist of the original hook here, but I note that it is a little at odds with the article, which describes the book as young-adult novel instead of a children's book. Also, it doesn't appear that the relevant fact (that it wasn't "initially written as a children's book") is really even explicitly mentioned there. — <span style="font-family:'Trajan Pro','Perpetua Titling MT',Perpetua,serif">'''[[User:Ravenpuff|<span style="color:#22254a">RAVEN</span><span style="color:#996e00">PVFF</span>]]'''</span> '''·''' ''[[User talk:Ravenpuff|talk]]'' '''·''' 11:50, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

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User awards
The Hard Worker's Barnstar
I probably should have posted this earlier, but many thanks for jumping on board and helping out at POTD in the past few weeks/months. It certainly makes life easier not to have to worry about getting every day's blurb up to scratch in time, and to have someone else who is prepared to do the leg work of making sure the material posted is properly cited and up-to-scratch. Thank you for this and all the other excellent work you do on the Wiki, Ravenpuff.  — Amakuru (talk) 14:12, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

gaudete et exsultate

Thank you for quality articles such as Gaudete et exsultate and List of titular churches, for updating the history of images and hooks used in DYK, for dealing with In the news and Main page errors, for sensible redirects and page moves to better capitalisation, - you are an awesome Wikipedian!

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:10, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The Editor's Barnstar
This is to acknowledge and thank you for patrolling the DYK prep sets and making much-needed grammatical fixes! Yoninah (talk) 17:50, 30 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Original Barnstar
I couldn't find a special barnstar but I just wanna show some appreciation for all of your brilliant grammar rescue works done in the preps <3 VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 16:48, 12 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
ITN credit

On 6 June 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Elio Sgreccia, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

Stephen 03:52, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 14 July 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Paolo Sardi, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

Stephen 23:39, 14 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 29 July 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Jaime Lucas Ortega y Alamino, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

Stephen 03:14, 29 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 13 August 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Sergio Obeso Rivera, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

SpencerT•C 17:43, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 30 August 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Achille Silvestrini, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

SpencerT•C 12:42, 30 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 6 September 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article José de Jesús Pimiento Rodríguez, which you updated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

— RAVENPVFF · talk · 12:26, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 2 October 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article William Levada, which you nominated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page.

Stephen 06:12, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

On 10 October 2019, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Serafim Fernandes de Araújo, which you nominated and updated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page. — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 05:35, 10 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Prep 5

Could you edit this hook? There is some terrible grammar here. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 11:39, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoninah: Here's an attempt:
I've retained the gist of the original hook here, but I note that it is a little at odds with the article, which describes the book as young-adult novel instead of a children's book. Also, it doesn't appear that the relevant fact (that it wasn't "initially written as a children's book") is really even explicitly mentioned there. — RAVENPVFF · talk · 11:50, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]