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== [[WP:URFA/2020]] notes ==

Reviewing for [[WP:URFA/2020]].
* Does the lead need to be so choppy? I think it's okay to move the last sentence up and create a paragraph. It is not given who the Movementarians are; I assume they're the cult that takes over Springfield, but that should be given in the first sentence then.
* It is not understood who Bart, Homer, or Marge are in the plot section. There's no wikilinks or descriptions of the characters (simple things like father, mother, son, etc.). What is the Forbidden Barn? We need some descriptions. "she finds Reverend Lovejoy, Ned Flanders, and Groundskeeper Willie"—are these townspeople? who are they? we shouldn't rely on links for everything.
* Some of the cultural references could be integrated in to the production section.
* The reception section is troubling. Most sentences never explain what the main view of the critic was, other than it was "highlighted". It is almost formatted like a list (but definitely shouldn't be).
* FACTnet does not seem to be an appropriate source, nor a lesson plan.
* fn 8 is missing page numbers.

This seems to be an important episode and has specific sources that allow for a decent article. However, other parts such as the reception section are extremely lacking. It will need work to remain a [[WP:FA|featured article]]. [[User:Heartfox|Heartfox]] ([[User talk:Heartfox|talk]]) 18:02, 8 April 2021 (UTC)

Revision as of 18:02, 8 April 2021

Featured articleThe Joy of Sect is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Good topic starThe Joy of Sect is part of the The Simpsons (season 9) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on April 30, 2010.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 27, 2007Good article nomineeListed
November 2, 2007Peer reviewReviewed
November 26, 2007Featured article candidatePromoted
February 10, 2008Featured topic candidatePromoted
April 30, 2010Today's featured articleMain Page
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Reviewing for WP:URFA/2020.

  • Does the lead need to be so choppy? I think it's okay to move the last sentence up and create a paragraph. It is not given who the Movementarians are; I assume they're the cult that takes over Springfield, but that should be given in the first sentence then.
  • It is not understood who Bart, Homer, or Marge are in the plot section. There's no wikilinks or descriptions of the characters (simple things like father, mother, son, etc.). What is the Forbidden Barn? We need some descriptions. "she finds Reverend Lovejoy, Ned Flanders, and Groundskeeper Willie"—are these townspeople? who are they? we shouldn't rely on links for everything.
  • Some of the cultural references could be integrated in to the production section.
  • The reception section is troubling. Most sentences never explain what the main view of the critic was, other than it was "highlighted". It is almost formatted like a list (but definitely shouldn't be).
  • FACTnet does not seem to be an appropriate source, nor a lesson plan.
  • fn 8 is missing page numbers.

This seems to be an important episode and has specific sources that allow for a decent article. However, other parts such as the reception section are extremely lacking. It will need work to remain a featured article. Heartfox (talk) 18:02, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]