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"Ethan Crumbley hoped that the shooting would “cause Biden to get impeached” according to an alleged diary entry." [1] [2][3]
Is this something that we should update on the right-side information bar? Im aware that its already in the Wikipedia page
- ^ "Ethan Crumbley planned Oxford school shooting 'to get Biden impeached'". The Independent. 19 May 2022.
- ^ Colton, Emma (19 May 2022). "Oxford shooting suspect Ethan Crumbley hoped massacre would get Biden impeached, records show". Fox News.
- ^ Alexander, Harriet (20 May 2022). "Michigan school shooter hoped the attack would spark Biden impeachment". Mail Online.
From Florida, to Washington State, and to Michigan (The life of the Crumbleys)
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I have an edit request on the suspect. --- Just last year, Jacksonville, Florida's independent station WJXT-TV reported on News4Jax's I-TEAM that Crumbley's parents originate from Atlantic Beach, Florida, just outside Jacksonville. And Jacksonville is where Ethan Crumbley was born back on April 28, 2006. Both of Crumbley's parents do have arrest records in Jacksonville, Florida beforehand, with his father James dating as early as 1995 (a year after he finished Fletcher High School) and his mother Jennifer as early as 2003. But nearly half a decade after Ethan was born, they both began working in business development and marketing before moving to Washington State for a time, and then later to Michigan sometime around 2015.
Should we add some of the information, like Ethan's DOB and where he lived, and maybe on his family's arrest records? Because adding a lot of his family's information can get a WP:BLP violation.
Here's the story: https://www.news4jax.com/i-team/2021/12/02/i-team-suspected-michigan-school-shooters-parents-have-lived-worked-were-arrested-in-jacksonville/ ImDeadAsADoornail (talk) 19:30, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
- Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the
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Hi I want the edit for the Motive for the deadly Oxford attack to be due to Bullying according to court documents that he shot up the school due to him being motivated by bullying. 74.67.178.97 (talk) 23:38, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Cannolis (talk) 23:49, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
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Under 'Peretrator', 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: Change: "Crumbley was born in Atlantic Beach, Florida, 15 miles (20 km) west of Jacksonville," to "Crumbley was born in Atlantic Beach, Florida, 15 miles (20 km) east of Jacksonville," (note: emphasis added to highlight the change for the editor. Final text should not be bold) 2001:18E8:2:106C:F000:0:0:577 (talk) 15:11, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
Why add date to the title unlike columbine or stoneman? DeadlyRagDoll (talk) 18:34, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
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Multiple police stations and school districts issued statements about the threats and actions that would be taken against the individuals who made them.
Change a single sentence to the sentence above. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 23:40, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. The person who loves reading (talk) 23:59, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
- Multiple police stations and school districts issued statements about the threats and actions that would be taken against individuals who make them.
- Change the second sentence to the first sentence. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 00:56, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. The person who loves reading (talk) 00:59, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- I am requesting grammar changes, so I am unsure what reliable sources are needed. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 01:22, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. The person who loves reading (talk) 00:59, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Change the second sentence to the first sentence. 73.167.238.120 (talk) 00:56, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
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