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I propose removing the text "After a period of slowed film work and lackluster critical reception" from the lede. Other actors have had similar periods of slowed work, and less-critically-praised work (Nicolas Cage, Elizabeth Shue) but do not have this sort of text in the lede. Readers can see the "slowed" nature from the dates given, and "lackluster" does not seem to me to belong in the lede, vis-a-vis NPOV. Before I make any additional change on this, I wanted to raise it here. I previously made an edit along these lines but it was reverted by an editor who disagreed. Perhaps discussion here first will allow us to work out any differences. Comments? Thanks. [[User:Fanyavizuri|Fanyavizuri]] ([[User talk:Fanyavizuri|talk]]) 08:08, 31 August 2017 (UTC) |
I propose removing the text "After a period of slowed film work and lackluster critical reception" from the lede. Other actors have had similar periods of slowed work, and less-critically-praised work (Nicolas Cage, Elizabeth Shue) but do not have this sort of text in the lede. Readers can see the "slowed" nature from the dates given, and "lackluster" does not seem to me to belong in the lede, vis-a-vis NPOV. Before I make any additional change on this, I wanted to raise it here. I previously made an edit along these lines but it was reverted by an editor who disagreed. Perhaps discussion here first will allow us to work out any differences. Comments? Thanks. [[User:Fanyavizuri|Fanyavizuri]] ([[User talk:Fanyavizuri|talk]]) 08:08, 31 August 2017 (UTC) |
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: Seeing no comments, I have made this edit. Please discuss if there is disagreement. [[User:Fanyavizuri|Fanyavizuri]] ([[User talk:Fanyavizuri|talk]]) 01:36, 9 September 2017 (UTC) |
: Seeing no comments, I have made this edit. Please discuss if there is disagreement. [[User:Fanyavizuri|Fanyavizuri]] ([[User talk:Fanyavizuri|talk]]) 01:36, 9 September 2017 (UTC) |
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== Hypocrisy in the entertainment business ... and in general == |
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I would be quite interested in Miss Biel's take on this: Biel received a lot of flak for doing a risque photo shoot which ostensibly undermined the context of her show '''7th Heaven'''''Italic text''. So I wonder how Biel felt when he TV father on that show, the popular and beloved actor Stephen Collins, would later be determined to have engaged in behavior far more outrageous and scandalous than what Biel had done. Definitely a point to ponder! |
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Please do not insert a specific date for son Silas' birth until a reliable source (preferably Biel herself and/or Justin Timberlake) gives the exact date. I've seen this is a recent issue made in good faith, but lacked proper referencing. We have to remember WP:SYNTH. Snuggums (talk / edits) 23:02, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
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In the 'Early Life' section, I added the location of Tufts University which is Medford, Massachusetts. Knowing the location of a University is important due to knowing the location of the person at the time.
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Neutrality of lede
I propose removing the text "After a period of slowed film work and lackluster critical reception" from the lede. Other actors have had similar periods of slowed work, and less-critically-praised work (Nicolas Cage, Elizabeth Shue) but do not have this sort of text in the lede. Readers can see the "slowed" nature from the dates given, and "lackluster" does not seem to me to belong in the lede, vis-a-vis NPOV. Before I make any additional change on this, I wanted to raise it here. I previously made an edit along these lines but it was reverted by an editor who disagreed. Perhaps discussion here first will allow us to work out any differences. Comments? Thanks. Fanyavizuri (talk) 08:08, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
- Seeing no comments, I have made this edit. Please discuss if there is disagreement. Fanyavizuri (talk) 01:36, 9 September 2017 (UTC)
Hypocrisy in the entertainment business ... and in general
I would be quite interested in Miss Biel's take on this: Biel received a lot of flak for doing a risque photo shoot which ostensibly undermined the context of her show 7th HeavenItalic text. So I wonder how Biel felt when he TV father on that show, the popular and beloved actor Stephen Collins, would later be determined to have engaged in behavior far more outrageous and scandalous than what Biel had done. Definitely a point to ponder!
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