User talk:Zoozaz1

FYI

Hello Zoozaz1. Thanks for your recent contributions on Haitian elections. Just an FYI, the election year templates are only supposed to include popular elections (i.e. elections with a public vote). The 1930 presidential election (and the February 2016 one) were not public votes, so shouldn't be included. There have been numerous non-popular elections of presidents in Haiti's history (this source mentions 1908, 1913, 1914, March 1915, August 1915, 1922, 1926, April 1930, November 1930, 1941 and 1946 alone). I think it might be better to have an article Indirect presidential elections in Haiti to cover them all, rather than having very short articles (with little potential for expansion) on each one. I'd be happy to help write this article with you if you were interested. Cheers, Number 57 09:59, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Also, some of the indirect presidential elections usually occur shortly after the parliamentary elections, so can be detailed in the articles (I've added mention of Vincent's election to 1930 Haitian parliamentary election). Number 57 10:11, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that would be a good idea to create an article about indirect elections separately. We could start researching from the French period and work on it intermittently.

Draft:1930 Haitian presidential election

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Court system of Niue moved to draftspace

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Teahouse

Hey Zoozaz1. You recently answered a question at the Teahouse titled "Wikipedia Entry - How To Question". The user was asking how to create an autobiography. This is different than a normal article, so we would not point them towards WP:BASIC. Instead, we would explain that per WP:YOURSELF, this is very strongly discouraged, and per WP:FAMOUS, it might not even be in their interest to have an article. I do sincerely appreciate your willingness to help new editors, but I would suggest that make sure you know the relevant policies first before answering questions on the Teahouse. Thanks so much, Hillelfrei ^talk 17:50, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Ah, thank you for correcting me. I forgot about the autobiography policy. (although either way the user would still need to pass WP:BASIC) Zoozaz1 talk 17:50, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Ways to improve Topass

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Edits to Northwestern Mutual

Hello Zoozaz1 -

I am a COI editor trying to update the Northwestern Mutual page.

Talk:Northwestern_Mutual#cite_note-57

You recently reviewed my requested edits and provided feedback. Thank you.

I have subsequently made changes to the requested edits based on your feedback and wondered if you might take another look please?

Of note, I have:

• Simplified language to ensure a 'neutral" POV
• Added additional third-party sources
• Removed most leadership team names, except the CEO, the chief investment officer (given NM is a substantially-sized investor), and the chief distribution officer (given NM is one of very few insurance companies with its own distribution force)
• Removed 'accolades' and included only financial ratings, with third-party links (given financial ratings are critically important for evaluating insurers of any kind)
• Moved 'subsidiaries' to just be part of the 'about' section

I welcome your additional feedback. Thanks in advance

Kosterberg (talk) 19:12, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

Update

Hi Zoozaz1 -

Re your latest round of feedback on Talk:Northwestern_Mutual#cite_note-57

I believe I have addressed the points you suggested:

• Removed specifics on dividends
• Changed reference to ratings and removed specific ratings
• Edited About/Operations sections to address wording so it isn't a copy

Please let me know if the overall proposed changes can now be integrated into the actual article.

Thank you for working with me on this.

Kosterberg (talk) 12:00, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

Mugeez

I closed the deletion discussion at WP:AFD and moved it to Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:Mugeez. It would be good if you commented again there. Thanks,  Bait30  ^{Talk 2 me pls?} 21:12, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

WikiLoop Battlefield new name vote

Dear Zoozaz1,

Thank you for your interest and contributions to WikiLoop Battlefield. We are holding a voting for proposed new name. We would like to invite you to this voting. The voting is held at m:WikiProject_WikiLoop/New_name_vote and ends on July 13th 00:00 UTC.

xinbenlv ^{Talk, Remember to "ping" me} 05:13, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

draft barbary city states

my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Barbary_city-states I've removed the copyrighted sections and redid much of the article. And I've also redone the periplus section. Would you care to have a look and point out what needs to change or delete the parts that shouldn't be there.Yacoob316 (talk) 22:50, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

@Yacoob316:That's a start, but much of the content in the Market Towns section is also copied from other wikipedia articles, while much of the Geography section is copied straight from the cited source. The problem is that once you delete all of the copyrighted material, the article mainly just recounts sections of the Periplus, which violates WP:PRIMARY which states to " not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them." Zoozaz1 (talk) 00:04, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

sorry I think i posted in your talk page without signing in anyhow would you want to view my article I've deleted all the copyright violation and I have added more essential sources to the article ideally now it ought to be fine and in the case, it isn't would you mind to see and ensure there aren't any infringements it will be greatly valued and thank you for your help.Yacoob316 (talk) 18:21, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

In the market town section some of the material is copied from Wikipedia, and Wikipedia is not a reliable source. Zoozaz1 (talk) 18:52, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

I've included some secondary sources and improved the market town section I don't think there are other issues with the article should I feel free to submit Yacoob316 (talk) 00:14, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

It's an improvement and it isn't a copyright violation anymore, so I would feel free to submit it. That said, it isn't a guarantee that it will be accepted. I generally don't rereview articles that I reviewed once because it's best to have a fresh pair of eyes look at it so it might take some time to get reviewed (there are almost 3000 articles in the backlog). Zoozaz1 (talk) 23:15, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

Draft :Paracommando Qualifcation (Belgium Armed Forces)

Hi Zoozaz1

I have included 7 More reference for my Draft:Paracommando Qualification (Belgium Armed Forces) I wonder if you can fix a spelling error for Draft Title I have mispelt the word "Qualification" ( It is missing one of the "i's")

Thanks for your assistance

Kind Regards

Exsap — Preceding unsigned comment added by Exsap (talk • contribs) 00:49, 8 July 2020 (UTC)