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Reasons for my raising wikistress: Some general observations on Wikipedia governance being broken and good editors trampled by the system Wikipedia is a kawaii mistress :) I agree to the edit counter opt-in terms. Current RfAdminship RfA candidate S O N S% Ending (UTC) Time left Dups? Report Elli 187 5 2 97 16:53, 7 June 2024 1 day, 19 hours no report RfB candidate S O N S% Ending (UTC) Time left Dups? Report Last updated by cyberbot ITalk to my owner:Online at 20:55, 5 June 2024 (UTC) Lurking stats Page views for this talk page over the last 90 days Detailed traffic statistics Re:Andel's Hotel Łódź Thanks. I would be grateful if you could explain it to me. I don't know how to add interwiki. You could also check the article List of tallest buildings in Poland which I recently heavily edited to see if anything could be improved or changed.— Preceding unsigned comment added by PavKls (talk • contribs) 15:30, August 31, 2020 (UTC) I completed Deadline 2 assignment Hello, professor! My name is KIM Yujin taking your course "Sociology of Globalization". I've made a decision on the topic. I would like to translate the article about cognitive bias. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cognitive_bias These days, the situations like cognitive bias happen frequently in various parts(politics, daily life, especially Communication part) because of the development of devices and SNS such as Youtube, Instagram and so on. That's why I chose this topic. Thank you for your response in advance. Iamyujinkim (talk) 07:06, 18 September 2020 (UTC) Iamyujinkim, It is a good choice but remember for translation to Korean you'll need to choose one more topic. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:59, 19 September 2020 (UTC) Then, I would like to add https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic,_social_and_cultural_rights for the other subject. May I use this topic? Thank you for your feedback in advance.Iamyujinkim (talk) 08:13, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Iamyujinkim, I am afraid this topic was just reserved by one of your colleagues, so please choose another one. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:53, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Oh,, then can I use this topic? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Remix_cultureIamyujinkim (talk) 10:27, 22 September 2020 (UTC) Iamyujinkim, Yes, good choice. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:26, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Week3 / Deadline 2) Can I change my topic? Good afternoon Mr.K I'm Jeondain in sociology of everyday. I'm contacting you because of changing the topic. Can I change 'censorship in china' to 'wildlife trade' or 'Measures of gender equality'? Sorry to bothering you. Thank You --JeonDain (talk) 07:18, 18 September 2020 (UTC) JeonDain, Yes, that's ok, but please let me know which of those two topics you want to choose so I can reserve it for you and open the other one. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:05, 19 September 2020 (UTC) i'll choose the 'measures of gender equality' thank you--JeonDain (talk) 05:09, 19 September 2020 (UTC) JeonDain, Ok! You can add those topics to the Dashboard. Good choices! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:25, 20 September 2020 (UTC) [Deadline2] Park Seyeon 00 Hello professor, I'm Seyeon Park. I want to choose articles about 'Right to privacy'(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Right_to_privacy) and 'Unpaid work'(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unpaid_work). Can I translate these articles?.--Park Seyeon 00 (talk) 15:00, 18 September 2020 (UTC) Park Seyeon 00, Right to privacy is ok but unpaid work was already reserved by one of your colleagues few hours ago so you'll need to choose a different topic. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:57, 19 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, Then, can I translate 'Human rights movement'(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_rights_movement) instead of 'unpaid work'?--Park Seyeon 00 (talk) 17:49, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Park Seyeon 00 Yes, good choice. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:41, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Katarzyna Karpowicz Hello professor. I am writing about your statement While we seem to have some WP:SPA and even possobile WP:MINION or worse activity here, COI/miscoduct. You should examine Polish Wikipedia that this statement of yours was based on incorrect assumption that Wikipedia editors are editing only on English language site. As for the notability of Karpowicz. I do not think that she is borderline. Clearly, in the last 3 years she was 2-3 in Rzeczpospolita's ranking, as you recognized. However, I expect that the real problem is that there is a language and cultural barrier between Polish and American Wikipedia. It is evidenced by the fact that on Polish Wikipedia her biogram, written 10 years ago, was never AfD. Also, in Poland independent essays written in exhibition catalogues are the major way of establishing notability for young artists. There is a difference between commercial art catalogues in the USA and curated solo art exhibitions in Poland. She has at least four such catalogues printed, each with independent critics writing about her. In any case, I have once more rewritten her biogram and added quotes in the reference section and added more critics input. Puncinus (talk) 23:53, 18 September 2020 (UTC) Puncinus, I would recommend you copy your comment to the AfD deletion where I made my comment you are replying to. It may be more helpful to other participants there. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:20, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Can i use this topic? Hello professor, I have a suggestion about my wiki topic. l want to create about D0 jin ki (korean name is 도진기)who is korean lawyer and author. He had written several mystery novels. I used to like reading those books. There is no document about him in english wiki, so i want to adapt him for my assignment. Can i start wiki document about him? EggSushi (talk) 08:23, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Choi jae min Dear Choi Jae Min. First, please remember to sign properly, otherwise I cannot ping you back to notify you I replied. I think I asked you to sign your posts 4 or 5 times now, please use the signature function. Second, is this the person? [1]? I don't see an article on Korean Wikipedia, but that's ok. However, can youe explain how he relates to the theme of the class you are taking? Is he publishing books about sociology? In either case, you can write article about him for extra credit, but right now I am unsure if he is important enough to be your main topic, and also, whether there are reliable sources to write any decently long article about him (namu wiki has some sources but even so its article is rather short). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:24, 20 September 2020 (UTC) [Deadline 2] I chose article theme Hello professor! I'm Seo ra Jeong. I want to choose two articles One is https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EA%B8%B0%ED%9B%84%EB%B3%80%ED%99%94 Another is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Honjok Can I translate these articles? --Seora3085 (talk) 08:46, 19 September 2020 (UTC) Seora3085, Dear Seo ra Jeong. First, you should tell me which article you want to translate to which language? Both of them seem to have similarly sized versions in both English and Korean, so in either case I think you should choose different topics.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:41, 20 September 2020 (UTC) [wki assingment2] I choose the topic! /han seung gu Hello porofessor. I'm seung gu Han in globalization sociology. Globally, young people are wandering without jobs. so I choose two topics.:youth unemployment , neet(Not in Education, Employment, or Training) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Youth_unemployment and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/NEET Can I try these? --Han seung gu (talk) 09:09, 19 September 2020 (UTC) Han seung gu, Those are good topics to translate to Korean, both approved! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:43, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Week 3 assignment(Deadline2) -Park Jaehyeon Hello professor! I would like to choose the 'Untact' as my topic. 'Untact' is a combination of 'contact' and 'un' which means negation and opposite. Untact is the korean marketing term, but it is a topic that has become an issue due to the Corona 19. Can I use it as my topic? Jaehyun2633 (talk) 12:20, 19 September 2020 (UTC) Jaehyun2633, Untact seems like an interesting topic to write about, I hope you can find good sources for it. Topic accepted, but if the article ends up being very short you may need to do some extra credit work. It is probably best to write about it both in English and Korean Wikipedias. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:12, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Professor, can i use this topic? First of all, I apologize for not following your instructions properly regarding the sign. I decided on a new topic. The name is "Pot-geunseong(korean name is 냄비근성)," there are no documents in the Korean or English versions of the Wiki, so I'm trying to create a new one. Koreans were quick to get excited about something.It is a term that explains the temperament that cools fast again on the road, but it has been used in negative terms until now, but has played a major role in Korea's rapid growth and internet speed development, so I thought it could be analyzed socially as well. Can I write a new document on this subject on Wikipedia?EggSushi (talk) 08:47, 20 September 2020 (UTC) EggSushi, Good job signing properly this time. It is an interesting topic, but challenging (difficult). If you can find reliable sources (books, newspapers, academic journal articles) it will be good to write about it both in English and Korean. If you are up to the challenge, try it. If the sources are few you can change your topic at a later date. I encourage you to try to work on this early to see if there are sufficient sources. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:45, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Park jueun, about assignment (Deadline 2) Hello, professor. I choiced 'social movement theory' before and I added it on my dashboard. ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_movement_theory) And can i also translate this article which about social and cultural rights ? ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic,_social_and_cultural_rights ) Thanks ! Park Jueun (talk) 09:20, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Park Jueun, Yes, this topic is good too. Approved! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:46, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Question about your lecture material Hello, professor! I'm Jungi Choe from 'Sociology of Everyday Life' I'm doing on my Interaction assignment, and I thoght it is better if I get your lecture material of 'Topics in Sociology: Social Interaction', not just watch the lecture video to refer to Goffman's elements. So, can I get presentation file or link or something like that? I'll be waiting for your reply. Thank you! :D --Jungi Choe (talk) 09:50, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Jungi Choe, Of course. You can find links to the presentations here: User:Piotrus/Sociology course prezis Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:48, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Uploaded my topic on our dashboard / Kim Yoon(Username : BBam BBam) Hello, professor. I told you on this page a few days ago that I decided on the topic of 'K-quarantine!' Although this document exists in Wikipedia in Korea, there is a lack of content. Therefore, I will make more contents when translating into English Wikipedia. I'll try that first, and if the content is too poor, could I add one more content that translates into English? --BBamBBam (talk) 11:15, 20 September 2020 (UTC) BBamBBam, Yes, that's fine. If we cannot write a long article on K-quarantine, a short one will be useful for extra credit while you work on another topic later. All good work will be rewarded! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:50, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Question about Wiki assignment deadline2 Hello, professor. I’m Lee Joon Hee(user name: June Hee Lee).First of all, I'm sorry. Originally, I had to set a project topic and get permission from the professor, but I misinterpreted it, so I wrote the article without telling the professor and wrote the article. I'm sorry. The article I wrote was about the topic of 'Democracy promotion'. I have already completed the translation to Korea Wiki. Did any of the other students choose this article? If so, what should I do? June Hee Lee (talk) 22:15, 20 September 2020 (UTC) June Hee Lee, Good news is that nobody chose that article, so you are good. But it is also good to try to keep with the deadlines, you started your translation very early which is good (I will treat deadline 2 as 90% on time as it is just a few hours late). There is also some error with your signature, your talk page link leads to a non-existing page, please fix it so it goes to (June not Joon). Anyway, very good job with speedy completion of your translation of democracy promotion to ko:민주주의 진흥. It is very good, although you should try to find references for the unreferenced paragraphs and add them to both English and Korean. Other than that, the translation is complete, but also please remember that you should try to translate a second topic for the assignment. Finally, I encourage you to watch our video about how to submit your article for a DYK and do so on Korean Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:09, 21 September 2020 (UTC) I selected topics for Wiki Assignment Deadline 2 / Taeyi Lim Hello professor, I'm Taeyi Lim. I selected my topics! I want to translate into Korean about Youtube services what is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/YouTube_Premium , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/YouTube_Kids. I hope these are good topics, so please check and answer to me. Thank you! --Taeyyy (talk) 13:46, 20 September 2020 (UTC) Taeyyy, I am unsure how those articles fit into our class theme. I would suggest topics that would be less related to advertising a commercial platform (which can simply hire people to translate those articles). If you are interested in such topics, I'd instead recomment Streaming media, Live streaming, or User-generated content. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:36, 21 September 2020 (UTC) I changed the topic.(Deadline 2) -Youngryun,Chun Hello, professor. I am Youngryun,Chun. I would like to change the topic recommended by you, "Opera in Korea." I am waiting your feedback. And I didn't get a blog invitation because I was late for class, so could you send it again? My e-mail address is [redacted for privacy]. Thank you. Chunyoungryun(2016014102) (talk) @Chunyoungryun(2016014102): Ok - tipic approved. Blog invitation will be sent soon. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:14, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Wiki assignment Deadline 2 Hello, professor. I'm Woo Ji Eun. I would like to translate an article about the Child Protected Area Act(https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%A6%B0%EC%9D%B4_%EB%B3%B4%ED%98%B8%EA%B5%AC%EC%97%AD) into English. Is this article possible? Woojieun (talk) 05:15, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Woojieun, The article you linked is very short and linked to a similar-size Wikipedia article at School zone, so I think you need to chose a different topic. Please take a look at our ideas for students for some suggestions. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 21 September 2020 (UTC) History of Democracy (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_democracy), History of Communism (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_communism)) I would like to translate these two topics into Korean. Are you okay? --Woojieun (talk) 06:52, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Woojieun, Yes, good choices - approved! Please remember to add them to our Dahsboard to complete this assignment.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:27, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Question for deadline 2 - yewonchoi Hello, professor! I want to talk about deadline2 assignment. I completed the transition of 'Digital rights' and this is completed link. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%94%94%EC%A7%80%ED%84%B8_%EA%B6%8C%EB%A6%AC. Also, I tried to edit 'Corset controversy' article several times, but there are so many errors and I could not solve the problem... So, I want to change the corset controversy to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philosophy_of_human_rights this. Is it okay? If you approved it, I'll finish editing it in week too. Thank you so much. I'll wait your agreement and evaluation about my first translation.! --Choiyewon (talk) 08:10, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, Good job translating the digital rights article, it looks good! I encourage you to submit it to the Korean WP:DYK equivalent. You can change the other topic but as far as I can tell you should be able to edit ko:코르셋 논란. Do let me know which of those you'll chose in the end, and we have plenty of time for you to figure out what are those "many errors". Feel free to ask me for help, also you can ask Korean volunteers for assistance here: ko:위키백과:질문방. Good job and good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:31, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Pioturs, Yes, I understand.I will look for solutions in various ways for a few days. But I already finished the philosophy of human rights. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B8%EA%B6%8C%EC%B2%A0%ED%95%99. But I'll try corset controversy continuously!!! Thank you for your help.--Choiyewon (talk) 08:40, 21 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon Good job! You can then translate the corset article for extra credit or practice - remember that Wikipedia edits are great for building your digital portfolio (and advertising your skills during a job interview/etc.). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:24, 22 September 2020 (UTC) Wiki assignment Deadline 2 Hello professor. I'm juyeong Oh. Thank you for your feedback. So I decided two new topics. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Streisand_effect , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Third-person_effect. I will wait for your feedback again this time. Thank you professor! Oh juyeong (talk) @Oh juyeong: Those are good choices, both are approved. Please add them to the Dashboard and good luck translating them. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:22, 22 September 2020 (UTC) [Deadline2] I chose different topic ! Hello, professor I'm Seo ra Jeong I got feedback to choose a different topic and picked a new one. I would like to translate 'https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech' and 'https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Honjok' into English. Can I try these? And now I write about completion of deadline 1 task because I did not look at the lecture plan properly. I'm so sorry for being late and not being able to look over it thoroughly. I'll wait for feedback to confirm that I did it correctly. Thank you!--Seora3085 (talk) 03:55, 22 September 2020 (UTC) Seora3085, First, I think you mean translate into Korean, not English? Freedom of speech as the Korean article can be expanded in Korean but is fine but I think Honjok is already well developed on both English and Korean, so you'll need to choose a different topic. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:58, 22 September 2020 (UTC) I got it right. I would like to translate 'History of sociology' and 'Freedom of speech' into Korean! Can I try these?--Seora3085 (talk) 03:23, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Seora3085, Yes, those will be good choices. Approved! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:25, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Selection of Week 3 assignment(Deadline2)-YAN ZICHUAN Hello, professor! I'm interested in movies.so can I translate the Shadow play into Chinese?https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shadow_play Besides Can I also translate the Brest European Short Film Festival as my second theme?https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brest_European_Short_Film_Festival I'll wait for your permission. Thank you ~--YANZICHUAN (talk) 14:09, 22 September 2020 (UTC) YANZICHUAN, Shadow play is good, but I don't think that the Brest Film Festival is significant enough to be used as a main topic for our course (you can translate it for extra credit and practice). I suggest you chose a different topic. See here for some ideas. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:20, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 3 sandbox citation - Choiyewon Hello, professor. I practiced how to make a sandbox and make a ref. I don't know if I understood the Deadline3 assignment well... But I did it once as I understood. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Choiyewon/sandbox1 << This is my citation sandbox link. I've collected the ref of articles related to the #escapethecorsets I'm interested in. I'd like to ask if this is the right way. If not, I would also like to ask you how to complete the deadline 3 project. I'll wait for your reply! Thank you so much. --Choiyewon (talk) 14:46, 22 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, The references at User:Choiyewon/sandbox1 look good but can use improvement. 1) Please add the translated title (English title) using the translated title field (don't remove the Korean title, just add English title). Further: [2] is a wiki and therefore not a reliable source. Same for [3], Wikipedia cannot be a source for itself. Finally, to complete this assignment, please find an unreferenced sentence somewhere on Wikipedia (English or Korean) and add a reference to it. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:24, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, Thank you for your advice! I added the translated English title!But I have another question yet...Should I find the unreferenced Wiki and add a reference in my sandbox? Or should I add it to the Wiki page right away? Thank you for your help with the assignment.--Choiyewon (talk) 05:19, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, Please try to add it on the public wiki page itself. The purpose of this assignment is to demonstrate that you already have the skills to fix source issues in public articles, which is a major step towards finishing the main project.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:36, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, I edited https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9E%A5%EC%9B%90%EC%98%81_(%EA%B0%80%EC%88%98)#%ED%99%94%EB%B3%B4 this article. I added her latest magazine shoot and wiki link! Check please. I hope I finished my assignment safely. --Choiyewon (talk) 07:48, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, Looking at [4] I see that you added a new entry to the table (good job, I will count it for extra credit), but I don't see a reference? A hyperlink to another Wikipedia article is not a reference. You may want to watch our video about adding a reference and/or redo to the Training: For Students module “Adding citations” . WP:HYPERLINK =/= WP:CITATION. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:57, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, I understood and marked the ref in the missing part. This is the link and I added [4]ref! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%88%EC%9C%A0%EC%A7%84#%EC%83%9D%EC%95%A0 Please check. I hope I'm right this time.!! Thanks a lot professor!! --Choiyewon (talk) 13:29, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, Good job, this looks good. But for perfect score I encourage you to use a Wikipedia:Citation template (ko:위키백과:인용 틀) and fill in fields about author, publisher and date. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:19, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, Yes, I also filled about author, publisher and date! I think it maybe certain this time! please check it last time!! Thank you piotrus!! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%88%EC%9C%A0%EC%A7%84--Choiyewon (talk) 03:27, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Choiyewon, Good job adding the author and the date here. This is enough for this assignment, but I strongly encourage you to use the citation templates linked above in the future.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:47, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Thank you Thank you for your input --> [5] - GizzyCatBella🍁 04:06, 23 September 2020 (UTC) I selected another article - Minji Moon I know now that my second article overlaps with another student. So I chose a different topic. I will translate the sociology of leisure. Moonminji (talk) 10:25, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Moonminji, Ok - good choice! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:04, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline3 - Jo Jonghwa Hello, professor. I finished Deadline 3. Here's my sandbox. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jo_Jonghwa/sandbox Is it right? --Jo Jonghwa (talk) 12:40, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Jo Jonghwa, It looks good, although I am not sure how reliable is the company post (blog) by "Edward", and I'd suggest not using that source. Please keep in mind that to finish the assignment you should now add a reference to a public wiki article outside your sandbox (it can be done in English or Korean).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:43, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, I deleted Edward reference article. And I edit an article and put in a reference, can you see it? If the topic doesn't fit, I'll try another article! Thank you~--Jo Jonghwa (talk) 05:45, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jo Jonghwa Yes, I can see your edits on Wikipedia as they are public. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:47, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, I modified references to BRLLNT article. Is my assignment appropriate? Thank you for your help.--Jo Jonghwa (talk) 07:01, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jo Jonghwa, Hmmm. I see you changed the references at [6]. What was the problem with the old references? Can you tell me how the new references are better than the old ones? I think your edits are good for extra credit, but for this assignment, the best way to complete it is to add a new reference to a sentence that is missing a reference. This is why the assignment states "add an inline reference" and not "modify existing ones". --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:54, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, The problem with this article's old reference was that it was unreliable sources and that sentences and subsequent reference links did not exactly follow. I modified those parts so that I could obtain more efficient and accurate information when reading articles. In addition, there were no missing references in this article, so I added another sentence for this person and added the appropriate reference. I wish I had completed my assignment perfectly this time! Thank you very much!!--Jo Jonghwa (talk) 09:57, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jo Jonghwa, Yes, you did very well, and good job answering my question so thoroughly, I will award you an extra point your efforts! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:33, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Piotrus, Thank you so much. professor!!--Jo Jonghwa (talk) 05:01, 25 September 2020 (UTC) This Month in Education: September 2020 This Month in Education Volume 9 • Issue 9 • September 2020 Contents • Headlines • Subscribe In This Issuse Active autumn in the Polish wiki-education Cycle "Caminos y voces de la educación con Wikipedia" Featured education community member of September 2020 The Use of Wikipedia and Wikimedia Commons as tool for Module Development in the Philippines Wikimedia Indonesia Education Team Launched Their Books About Wikipedia Wikimedia Serbia is organizing the first online Edu Wiki camp About This Month in Education · Subscribe/Unsubscribe · Global message delivery · For the team: Romaine 12:48, 23 September 2020 (UTC) I finished Deadline 3,4 (Week 4,5) - Yunha Rho Hello professor! This is my sandbox link. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Yunha_Rho/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Please check and reply. Thank you. --Yunha Rho (talk) 13:29, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Yunha Rho, This looks good for Deadline 4 (outline). But for Deadline 3 please add a reference to a live Wikipedia article (can be done on Korean Wikipedia).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:51, 24 September 2020 (UTC) I have completed Deadline 3 as you said. Please check! Thank you.--Yunha Rho (talk) 08:58, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Yunha Rho, Can you link the article you completed your assignment on? Do you mean ko:프로듀시지?--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:15, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 3 sandbox citation - jung a Byeon hello professor. I did Deadline 3 here is my sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Byeon_jung_a/sandbox I'd like to ask if this is the right way. I will wait for your reply. --Byeon jung a (talk) 13:45, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Byeon jung a, First, good start but your references are not formatted sufficiently. They are missing the author's name, publication name (The Korean Herland not thekoreanherald) and the Korean one also needs a title translated to English. Please try to fix those issues. Second, you should add those references to a real, live article, outside your sandbox. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 00:54, 24 September 2020 (UTC) I solved two of the three problems you pointed out. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Byeon_jung_a/sandbox Please check what I fixed. And I didn't understand putting references in real articles. Does that mean I have to add references to someone else's Wikipedia? Then how can you check it? --Byeon jung a (talk) 05:34, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Byeon jung a, All code looks good. And yes, you should now add a reference to a real Wikipedia article, your choice - there are several millions out there, and most can use a reference for numerous unreferenced citations and paragraphs; and if you need some suggestions take a look at this list of Korean articles with reference problems. As for how I can check, remember - your contributions are public: [7] so I can easily see all of your edits to English and Korean Wikipedias and all other associated projects. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:36, 24 September 2020 (UTC) I added a reference as you said. Please check if it fits properly. Thank you for your attention. --Byeon jung a (talk) 06:22, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Byeon jung a Good job with [8], it looks correct! Congratulations on being the first student to complete this assignment this year :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:28, 24 September 2020 (UTC) I have completed Deadline 3. / Choi sojeong Hello, professor. I worked on the Deadline 3 task in the sandbox. I will continue to work after that, but I will give you the sandbox address in advance. Pleas check. Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Sojeong.choi/sandbox — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sojeong.choi (talk • contribs) 00:10, September 24, 2020 (UTC) Sojeong.choi, First, good start but please remember to sign. Also, Korean references in English Wikipedia also need a title translated to English and same for the publication venue (publisher). Please try to fix those issues. Second, you should add those references to a real, live article, outside your sandbox.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:01, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Being called a deletionist Not to sound ranty, but am I the only one who's noticed that some of the editors who complain about the deletionists ruining the site tend to ignore that some of the people who have those names called them seem to do more content improvement work than the name-callers? You seem to be a heavy target, and you have 80-odd GAs and over 20 FAs. I get the name thrown at me some, and I have 45 GAs, and I'm about to get my 2nd FA through. Yet I don't see the ones who label people deletionists (I don't consider myself one) working on content improvement a whole lot. Just something that's been on my mind lately. Hog Farm Bacon 16:43, 23 September 2020 (UTC) Hog Farm, I am not sure we can generalize this. Some people, of course, fit your analysis, but there may well be not-very-polite inclusionists who nonetheless have a good track record of creating quality articles. I have certainly known both some pretty polite and some pretty rude content creators. If there is a pattern here, we would need a large of pool of data to run a statistical analysis. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:03, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Yeah, just me getting frustrated and ranty about two or three in particular. One of those "wait five minutes before you hit publish" moments. Good thing I'm an editor nobody would ever suggest for RFA, because that comment from me would be the type to jettison one of those. Hog Farm Bacon 01:56, 24 September 2020 (UTC) DYK for Zofia Poznańska On 24 September 2020, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Zofia Poznańska, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Zofia Poznańska, cipher clerk to the Red Orchestra espionage group, was captured in Belgium by the Abwehr in 1941 and hanged herself in prison in 1942? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Zofia Poznańska. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Zofia Poznańska), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page. —valereee (talk) 00:02, 24 September 2020 (UTC) About deadline 3 assignment. Sujin LEE Dear Prof. Piotr I'm Sujin Lee, a student in class 'Sociology of Globalization'. I added some sentences in definition of 'Soft power' and citation about that. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%86%8C%ED%94%84%ED%8A%B8_%ED%8C%8C%EC%9B%8C Please check I did it correctly. Thank you. --Sujinsang98 (talk) 07:37, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Sujinsang98, I looked at [9], seems good. I can provide more feedback if you add a reference to an English aritlce. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:50, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Finished Deadline3 / Kim Yoon(User name : BBam BBam) Hello, professor. I'm Kim Yoon. I finished deadline 3! My sandbox page is : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BBamBBam/sandbox Could you please check if I did Deadline 3 properly and give me feedback? Thank you! --BBamBBam (talk) 10:21, 24 September 2020 (UTC) BBamBBam, Good start. You should add the translated title parameter. Language is Korean not Korea. Also, the link seems to be to the generic Ministry page, I don't see the term "K-quarantine" mentioned there. Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the refernce to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:31, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I have completed Deadline 3 / Sangmin Choe Dear Prof. Piotr I finished deadline 3. 빌게이츠 This is the result of my work I did. 샌드박스_빌게이츠 And this is my sandbox. Please let me know if there is a problem. Thank you. SangminChoe (talk) 10:56, 24 September 2020 (UTC) SangminChoe, This looks very good. You can translate the English titles of references to Korean and add them the references too. Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:34, 25 September 2020 (UTC) [Deadline3] Ra Yushin Hello professor. I did Deadline 3 here is my sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EB%9D%BC%EC%9C%A0%EC%8B%A0/sandbox Please let me know if there is a problem. Thank you.라유신 (talk) 11:42, 24 September 2020 (UTC) 라유신, Good start. Please make sure your references contain the author's name (ex. Son Jihyoung) and publication date (Sept 18 2020). Capitalization is important: The Korea Herald not The korea herald. Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:36, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I corrected the pointed out and added a reference to Wikipedia's live article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/2020%EB%85%84_%EC%9C%A0%ED%8A%9C%EB%B8%8C_%EB%92%B7%EA%B4%91%EA%B3%A0_%EB%82%B4%EB%B6%80%EA%B3%A0%EB%B0%9C_%EB%85%BC%EB%9E%80#%EC%B0%B8%EC%A1%B0%EC%A3%BC Please check and let me know if there is a problem. Thank you.라유신 (talk) 06:31, 25 September 2020 (UTC) 라유신, Well done, all is good now!--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:23, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I have completed Deadline 3 / Jeong Ye-chan Hello professor, I have completed Deadline 3. I need you to make sure I'm doing this right. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JEONG_YE_CHAN/sandbox --JEONG YE CHAN (talk) 12:01, 24 September 2020 (UTC) JEONG YE CHAN, Very good. When citing a book, please add page or page range. Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:39, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Finished Deadline3 Hello, Professor! I completed Deadline 3. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yongjaeyjc/sandbox Here's my sandbox link. Please check. Thank you --Yongjaeyjc (talk) 12:17, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Yongjaeyjc, Your references in the sandbox seem very well-formatted, except one minor error: for the first two you are missing the name of the author (journalist). Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:42, 25 September 2020 (UTC) User:Piotrus I added what you pointed out in my sandbox and added a reference to Wikipedia's live article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%99_%EC%9E%85%EC%8B%9C_%EC%A0%9C%EB%8F%84 Please check if I did the assignment well. --Yongjaeyjc (talk) 05:24, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I have completed Deadline 3 / Minji moon Hello professor, I have completed Deadline 3. Please check that I'm doing this right. "Running House" is a Korean entertainment program. I added a reference to a document that had no references. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%94%ED%80%B4_%EB%8B%AC%EB%A6%B0_%EC%A7%91 Moonminji (talk) 13:16, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Moonminji, Good start, but you should be using footnotes (ko:위키백과:각주) with citation templates (ko:위키백과:인용 틀). Please try again using those tools (you can also take a look at examples linked by your colleagues above). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:45, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I finished Deadline 3. Hello prof. Piotr! this is Jungi Choe from 'Sociology of Everday Life' I add some references in real article here. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EA%B5%AD%EB%AC%B4%EC%B4%9D%EB%A6%AC Is it okay that I deal with Korean wiki article? and, I made some blue links for practice, and for extra credits, so I would you like to check it. Here is my contribution page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Jungi_Choe I hope I did my work appropriate, and hope you have a NICE FRIDAY! Thank you.--Jungi Choe (talk) 13:49, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jungi Choe, The references you added to [10] look very good. Good job adding blue links like here for extra credit (credit awarded!). Keep up the good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:50, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Week 4 assignment (Deadline 3 ) - Park Jaehyeon Dear Professor I finished week 4 assignment, I edited article and added a reference about korean singer 'Kid milli' that had no references. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kid_Milli Please check! Thank you. Jaehyun2633 (talk) 14:16, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jaehyun2633, Good job adding content and references to [11]. There are some issues we need to fix: The first ref needs to have the correct date (2018.06.14) and is missing the author's name. Korean title should be translated to English (but do not remove the Korean title). The sentence "Before playing music, I played Starcraft pro-gamer." is confusing (I should be he). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:54, 25 September 2020 (UTC) PARK JIMIN, DEADLINE 3 Hello Piotr, I did work 'deadline 3'. But I don't know I did exactly. Anyway here is my sandbox User:Jiminewiki/sandbox Please check, thank you --Jiminewiki (talk) 16:48, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jiminewiki, I recommend that you watch the video about how to add a properly formatted reference and complete the Training: For Students module “Adding citations” . You have added footnotes but they are totally not formatted; you should try using the Wikipedia:Citation templates and contain author's name, publisher info, date of publication, date of access, title (original and translated if necessary). Good luck! Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:54, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I completed Deadline 3 Hello, professor. I'm YEJI. I've done the Wiki assignment(Deadline3). I'd appreciate it if you could check that I did it right. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:P.YEJI/sandbox --P.YEJI (talk) 17:47, 24 September 2020 (UTC) P.YEJI, Good start. References should contain information on the original date and author (for example, the first one is missing "Choi Ji-won"). A Korean language reference on English Wikipedia should contain the translated title, please add it as well. Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:50, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 3 completion of assignment_minjeong kim Hello, professor. I finished Deadline 3 assignments. My sandbox page is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KIMMINJEOUNG/sandbox. Could you check and give me feedback? Thank you. --KIMMINJEONG (talk) 03:11, 25 September 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by KIMMINJEOUNG (talk • contribs) @KIMMINJEOUNG: Thank you for posting here. First, please go over the previous lessons and sign your posts correctly as your post above was not signed correctly. It is important to link to your account properly. It is not User:KIMMINJEONG but User:KIMMINJEOUNG. If you don't sign properly, it is difficult for me to leave you proper feedback and notificaiton. Regarding your citations, they are a good start, but the first one confuses Publish (The Korean Herald) with the (not mentioned) author you should be citing (Ahn Sung-mi). The second one is missing the author, publisher, date and translated title. Good luck fixing those issues! Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:59, 25 September 2020 (UTC) [DEADLINE 2] Lee Jaewon Hello, Piotr. I'm Jaewon. I want to choose two articles about Wildlife_smuggling (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wildlife_smuggling), The Theory of Communicative Action (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Theory_of_Communicative_Action). I'm waiting your feedback. Thank you!!!--Jaewon00 (talk) 18:22, 24 September 2020 (UTC) Jaewon00, Those are good topics - approved. Please add them to our Dashboard. Please try to complete future deadlines on time to achieve full grade. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:00, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 3(week 4) assignment done - Keebaek Lee Hello professor Konieczny, this is Keebaek Lee. Seungyeop and I have finished Deadline 3(week 4) assignment. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Keebs100/Youtube_Back-ad_in_South_Korea Please let me know if there is anything we missed. Thank you! Have a great Chuseok :)--Keebs100 (talk) 03:34, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Keebs100, Regarding your citations, they are a good start, but you should add translated title, as well as the name of the author, the original date and the access date (which seem to be confused in your first referendce and missing in the second), and properly attribute the publisher. News.naver is not a correct source, the correct one is [12].. Good luck fixing those issues! Finally, to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:10, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 3(week 4) assignment - Seungyeop Han Hello professor Konieczny, this is Seungyeop Han. Keebaek and I have finished Deadline 3(week 4) assignment. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Keebs100/Youtube_Back-ad_in_South_Korea Please let me know if there is anything we missed. Thank you! --Yeoppseung (talk) 03:54, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Yeoppseung, I think you linked to a wrong sandbox. The one linked is your friend Keebaek Lee's. Also, please remember that to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 25 September 2020 (UTC) [Dedline 3] GWON CHOWON Good afternoon professor, this is CHOWON GWON from Sociology of Globalization. I practiced adding citations about ‘Bechdel test’ in my my sandbox(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GwonChowon/sandbox4). Then, I tried to edit real Wikipedia article(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bechdel_test). Thank you! Happy Chuseok!--GwonChowon (talk) 04:16, 25 September 2020 (UTC) GwonChowon, Good job, the only item you missed is that the second citation has a date available (01 July 2015). Your edit to the live Wikipedia article was technically good but unfortunately it was removed by another volunteer [13] - see the edit summary for reasons. If you disagree and would like to restore it you can do so by posting your rationale at Bechdel test and notifying the user who removed it that you'd like to engage in the discussion (I will give you an extra credit point if you decide to do so). I think the main reason your additions were removed is that they don't seem to address the relationship between the items mentioned and the Bechdel test directly. In either case, don't be discouraged because your edits were reverted - you are learning well, and I recommend this reading: WP:BRD. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:17, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I finished Wiki Dedline3(week4). -Youngryun,Chun Hello professor. I am Youngryun,Chun. I finished Deadline3. I have a question for you. Deadline4 is to make an outline, Am I making the outline in my sandbox, not here Opera in Korea? I'll be waiting for your reply. Chunyoungryun(2016014102) (talk) 04:54, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Good job adding a reference to [14], through I'd encourage you to find a more relevant detail to add to an article than travel time. This could be removed as to insignificant. But technically (code-wise) this is sound. Good job! Regarding the outline question, yes, please make it in your sandbox. We will publish it in the public mainspace in November or December. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:19, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Hello, Professor. I'm MINJU KIM. I finished Deadline 3. Hello, professor! I finished Deadline 3. Here's my sandbox. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KIM_MINJJU/sandbox Is it right?--KIM MINJJU (talk) 06:01, 25 September 2020 (UTC) KIM MINJJU, Good start. The only thing missing from your references is the author's (journalist's) name. For the last reference, you don't need to cite hours and the 'updated' date. Also, please remember that to complete this assignment you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:22, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I finished Deadline3 Hello, I'm Si-eun Jang, professor. I finished deadline 3. I added data from Wikipedia about malicious comments in Korea.(https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%85%EC%84%B1_%EB%8C%93%EA%B8%80#%ED%8F%AC%ED%84%B8_%EC%82%AC%EC%9D%B4%ED%8A%B8%EC%9D%98_%EC%A1%B0%EC%B9%98) It's so hard to add it to the sandbox that I still don't know. Could you check if this is the right way? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jang_Sieun/sandbox --Jang Sieun (talk) 06:43, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Jang Sieun, The edit at Korean Wikipedia here is good. For your sandbox, if you wer eto add those references to English Wikipedia, you should also translate the titles. Finally, please make sure your references contain information about the publisher (ex. the name of the newspaper). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:25, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline3 (Week4) JeongYoon Oh Hello, Professor! I'm JeongYoon Oh. I finished my assignment 3, so please check.I uploaded both my sandbox and Wikipedia in Korea. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JeongYoon_Oh/sandbox, https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%A0%EA%B8%B0_%EC%97%86%EB%8A%94_%EC%9B%94%EC%9A%94%EC%9D%BC One of my topic is 'Meatless Monday', and I am working on translating and adding English Wikipedia into Korean. Please give me feedback! Thank you! This is the original Wikipedia link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meatless_Monday --JeongYoon Oh (talk) 07:09, 25 September 2020 (UTC) JeongYoon Oh, Your references in the sandbox are fine, but please remember that to complete this assignment for Deadline 3 / Week 4 you should add the reference to a live Wikipedia article outside your sandbox. I approved both of your topics a few days ago (see the message above), good choices, so just make sure to add them to our Dashboard if you haven't already. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:32, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline3 (Week4) JeongYoon Oh, Modified https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%A0%EA%B8%B0_%EC%97%86%EB%8A%94_%EC%9B%94%EC%9A%94%EC%9D%BC Professor! I checked your feedback. Is this the right way? Please check again! Thank you. --JeongYoon Oh (talk) 07:51, 25 September 2020 (UTC) JeongYoon Oh, This looks good but you should add a Korean translated title to all English references on Korean Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:32, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Professor, i think that i have finished my Deadline 3 assignment. Professor, I wrote the first English document on the subject I chose, and added basic information about it. In addition, I've written references to my chosen subject and included footnotes, and I'm asking the professor if I did it right. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pot_nature <- This is my assignment site address. And Professor, I wrote a document in English for the first time that did not exist in English or Korean Wiki. In this case, can I get an extra point? Thank you professor, CHOI JAE MINEggSushi (talk) 08:11, 25 September 2020 (UTC) EggSushi, Any good contribution will be awarded with extra points, but unfortunately, please note that your submission was judged by Wikipedia volunteers as unsuitable in its current form and moved to Draft:Pot nature. I have looked at the full version here. and I concur that it is unsuitable. The subject is unclear, its notability is unclear, it contains grammatical errors, unencyclopedic style and the references are not properly formatted. The first one just contains the author's information, and not the publication, date, or URL. The second one is better, but still doesn't contain a URL or an ISBN (if it is a book). I think it is very good you are tying to add content, but you need to do it carefully. For any new article you want to start, please start it in your sandbox and submit it for my review, so I can help you develop it without a risk of it being deleted from the public space. For Deadline 3, please focus solely on adding a reference to an article that contains unreferenced content. Creating a new article is an advanced activity that can be challenging for students just starting their adventure with Wikipedia. Here's some helpful guide: Wikipedia:Writing better articles. Also, please read the message you got on your talk page from another volunteer who explains more about why your submission was declined. Keep trying and I am sure you will succeed! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:39, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I completed Deadline3 (Week4) assignment.-Lee Eunsuk Hi professor, this is Lee Eunsuk from the class "Sociaology of Globalization". I added an inline reference to the article(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pengsoo#Buzzwords). Please check it. Regards.--Dldmstnr (talk) 08:47, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Dldmstnr, Good job, but please add the title in English to the reference (keep the Korean, but add the translation in the new field). Then it will be perfect! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:42, 25 September 2020 (UTC) deadline3 Hello professor. i'm Jeon dain in sociology of everyday life. i finished the deadline 3. this is my sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JeonDain/sandbox i'm not sure i did it right. and i hhave a question about the sandbox. in your lecture(week4 1st), you can copy article and edit to your sandbox same as original article. But mine does not work that. The form of the original article is missing.. How can i fix this? Last, I finished citation of outside my sandbox. Could you check it for me sir? Thank you, have a nice day --JeonDain (talk) 09:10, 25 September 2020 (UTC) JeonDain, Your sandbox does not contain any properly formatted reference. Please watch the video on how to add references and redo the Training: For Students module “Adding citations” , I think this will help. As for why your copy and paste to your sandbox failed, I think that you may have tried to copy content into the code (edit source) mode instead of visual (edit) or the other way around. Please make sure you have the Wikipedia:Visual editor enabled, and please copy code to code or visual to visual. If you do not understand the difference between source editing and visual editing, please watch our videos, as well as [15] and [16], and [17], which do a good job of explaining those crucial basics. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:47, 25 September 2020 (UTC) I fixed my assignment (deadline 3)Moonminji (talk) 10:00, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Hello, I'm minji Moon. https : // ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%94%ED%80%B4_%EB%8B%AC%EB%A6%B0_%EC%A7%91 Please check again. Thank you! Moonminji (talk) 10:01, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Moonminji, A reference should be added directly to the end of a sentence it references. Your references were just added to the end of the article. Which sentences do they verify? I think your submission needs more fixing. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:02, 25 September 2020 (UTC) Deadline 2 (week3) - Seungyoung OK Hello professor, this is Seungyoung OK again. I don't know the reason why I can't find my talk about 'deadline 2' also your reply. So I am going to write about 'deadline 2 topic' again. Fortunately I read your reply and I am trying to change my topic. Influencer marketing (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Influencer_marketing) and Direct marketing (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Direct_marketing). Is it okay to fix my topic? --Seungyoung OK (talk) 10:03, 25 September 2020 (UTC) [Deadline3 : Week4] I'm Jeong hyemin. Hello Piotr, I did work 'Deadline3 : Week4' https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%EC%A0%81_%EA%B1%B0%EB%A6%AC%EB%91%90%EA%B8%B0#%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD Is this right? I'll waiting your feedback. thanks :) Hyemm (talk) 10:08, 25 September 2020 (UTC)